山東棗莊九年級英語全冊Unit11Sadmoviesmakemecry第四節(jié)短文改錯同步訓(xùn)練.doc

第四節(jié)短文改錯假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號()，并在其下面寫出該增加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線()劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。AA long time ago，in a rich and beautiful country，there lived a unhappy king.He slept bad and didnt feel like eating.His face was always pale as chalk.He often cried for not reason.This made the queen and his people worried.One day，a doctor was called in examine the king.But he found nothing wrong with his body.“Its all in his mind.Neither medicine or rest can help him.What he need is the shirt of a happy person to wear.Thatll make him happy.”The prime minister was called to the palace.But when they explained the kings situation to him，he said，“Although I have a lot of power，but it doesnt make me happy.Im always worried about losing my power.Many people are trying to take my position.”Then，the kings banker came to the palace.“Oh，Im afraid Im not happy，too，” he said.“I have a lot of wealth，but Im always worried about losing my money.Someone tries to steal my money every day.”Next，the palace singer came to the kings room.But this was what he said：“Its true that Im famous and everyone loves my songs.But Im not happy because Im always worried about be followed by others.I cannot be free！”Finally，the kings top general was told to go out and find a happy man in three days time.BPeter kept his eyes on the ground.He felt like there was a heavy weight on his shoulders as he walked home lonely.It was the worst day of his life.His mind would not stop thinking about what happened only just an hour ago in the school soccer field.How could he have missed score that goal？He had let his whole team down.His stupid mistake made him angry.His team had lost the game because of he.He was really worried that his coach might kick him off the team.As soon as he walked through the door，his father asked，“Whats wrong，son？” Peters feelings written all over his face.“I lost the game，” Peter replied.Then he went into his room without another word.Ten minutes late，Peter heard his father knocking on his bedroom door.He opened the door to let him in.“Look，Peter.I dont know what happened.But whatever it was，dont be too hard with yourself.”“I lost the game，Dad.I failed my team.Theyll probably never let me play again.”“Soccer is about team effort.Youre the only reason your team lost.If you have a good team，you should support each other.Besides，winning and los