英語書面表達之建議信.ppt

書面表達（三） -A letter of giving advice,寫作要點： 1.建議信：作者就有關問題進行分析并針對這些問題提出自己的看法和建議。 2. 對象： 1）寫給個人，就其遇到的某個問題提出自己的看法和觀點； 2）寫給某個組織和機構，就改進其服務提出建議或忠告。,3. 基本框架： 開頭（beginning）- 開門見山，向對方陳述自己的觀點.(state your idea) 主體(body)- 對所提出的問題進行分析并說明理由，接著提出自己的建議(reasons and evidence) 結尾(ending)- 呼應開頭，重申觀點(restate your opinion.),4. 注意事項： 1）建議信要寫出寫信的原因，建議的內容，提出建議的理由，提出的理由要入情入理，語氣一定要禮貌當先。因此建議信要寫得簡明扼要、目的明確、具有合理性和說服力 2）建議的角度要多樣化，避免重復?？蓮恼?、經濟、文化、倫理、法律以及個人等多角度給出建議。 3）符合英文信件的基本格式,常用套語,A建議信開頭常用句式 (照應材料,表明寫作意圖) 1After I read your letter in the newspaper, I am sorry to know that 2I am very glad to hear that you want to 3I know you have trouble inafter reading your letter 4.I am writing to you for the purpose of - 5. I am writing to share some advice with you. 6. You have asked me for my advice with regard toand Ill try to make some conductive suggestions. 7. You have asked me for my advice about English learning.,B. 表達建議（body） 1.first，firstly，secondlythen，after that，in the endfinallyMeanwhile, whats more 2 .I think it would be more beneficial if you could 3. I would like to suggest/recommend that 4. If I were you, I would 5. You may consider doing 6. I would seem to me that you could 7. In my opinion, it would be wise to take the following action. 8. I wonder if you have considered the following. 9. When it come to such a situation, I would like to suggest that you can,C.建議信結尾常用句式,1. I believe you will take my advice into account/consideration. 2. I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions /recommendations practical/useful/helpful. 3. I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard. 4. I would appreciate it very much if you could consider my suggestions. 5. I feel that it would be beneficial if you stick to it. 6. In the end, I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful.,寫作模板,模板一： Dear _, You have asked me for my advice about_(問題)， and I will try to make some conductive suggestions here. In my opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions: _(建議內容). I hope youll find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to Discuss this matter with you about further details. Good luck with your _(祝愿). Yours sincerely, Li Ming,模板二： Dear _(對象)， I am writing to express my views concerning _(問題). First and for the most _(建議一); in addition_(建議二); whats more _(建議三). I hope youll find these proposals useful. Yours sincerely, Li Ming,書面表達如何寫？,三個步驟,Step 1 List the key points,Step 2 Make sentences,Step3. Form a passage and polish,為了迎接即將到來的期末考試，你校要取消所有的體育課。請你以學生王麗的身份給校長寫一封信，建議不要取消體育課。 注意：1. 詞數(shù)：120左右； 2. 文章的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。 Dear Headmaster, Im writing to express my views concerning our schools decision that all physical education should be cancelled.,注意銜接詞使用: 表先后次序： First, second, third.Finally Firstly, secondly，eventually to begin with/ to start with, at last 遞進關系： furthermore；moreover； not only.but also.； not.but.；, besides； in other words；o