（浙江省選考）10月高考英語 專題二 寫作指導(dǎo)與模擬訓(xùn)練 第三節(jié) 讀后續(xù)寫.docVIP

第三節(jié)讀后續(xù)寫讀后續(xù)寫是一種將閱讀與寫作緊密結(jié)合的考查形式，旨在考查考生的綜合語言運(yùn)用能力。其所提供的語言材料的體裁以記敘文和夾敘夾議文為主，偶有少量議論文。讀后續(xù)寫除了要求考生掌握豐富的詞匯和句式外，還注重考查學(xué)生在內(nèi)容構(gòu)思和情節(jié)銜接方面的能力。(一)續(xù)寫策略1讀后續(xù)寫不是隨心所欲地寫，而是要在所給段落開頭和所標(biāo)示關(guān)鍵詞的幫助下完成續(xù)寫部分(150詞左右)。其中，段落開頭語與傳統(tǒng)寫作中的開頭語類似，在某種程度上引導(dǎo)你的思路向哪方面發(fā)展，所續(xù)寫部分不能脫離各自的段落開頭語另起爐灶，要在其基礎(chǔ)上進(jìn)行拓展發(fā)揮。2續(xù)寫所給語言材料多是記敘文之故事類文章，情節(jié)曲折跌宕，線索性和邏輯性較強(qiáng)。考生要抓住故事的敘事線索，依據(jù)原文的寫作思路續(xù)寫文章，并適當(dāng)發(fā)散。3讀后續(xù)寫要求讀寫并重，需要考生對給定材料精確理解，這樣所續(xù)寫部分才不至于偏離主題，就這方面而言，讀后續(xù)寫有點(diǎn)類似閱讀理解題中對文章后續(xù)發(fā)展的推斷，如：what would happen next?4續(xù)寫部分的思路和內(nèi)容并不一定是唯一的，考生可根據(jù)自己對上文材料的理解，對文章的結(jié)尾做出不同的詮釋。(二)續(xù)寫步驟1精讀文章，確定文章線索。每篇文章都有各自獨(dú)特的寫作思路。通過精讀文章，找到該篇文章的寫作線索，如是以時間為線索還是以空間為線索等，這樣有利于考生“順藤摸瓜(結(jié)尾)”。2仔細(xì)審題，明確續(xù)寫要求。3回扣原文，揣摩續(xù)寫思路。根據(jù)文章后面的要求，再次快速回讀短文，抓住文章的思路，結(jié)合續(xù)寫段段首的提示語，最終確定續(xù)寫段落的思路，同時結(jié)合文章中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語，確定續(xù)寫段落的內(nèi)容。4擬定草稿，修改錯詞病句。5標(biāo)出續(xù)寫部分中使用到的原材料中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語(5個以上)。(三)續(xù)寫方法1精讀所給語言材料，理清文章脈絡(luò)并明確作者的論點(diǎn)，確定文章主旨。2尋求前文與續(xù)寫段段首句之間的內(nèi)在聯(lián)系，站在作者的角度，設(shè)計并發(fā)展情節(jié)，想象要合理，情節(jié)要連貫。3后續(xù)情節(jié)一般為故事的高潮或延續(xù)，是原作者聲音的延續(xù)、態(tài)度的延伸，因此，要盡量符合原文思路，并求得與讀者的心理共鳴，讓讀者回味無窮。4續(xù)寫時心態(tài)要端正，所續(xù)寫內(nèi)容要積極、健康向上，把事物美好的一面展示出來。5利用自己已有的知識和經(jīng)驗(yàn)，在繼承原作者風(fēng)格和語言基礎(chǔ)之上，準(zhǔn)確、地道地表達(dá)，充分展示語言的表現(xiàn)力。提高關(guān)聯(lián)詞與過渡語的使用率，增強(qiáng)整句表現(xiàn)力。6如果所給短文為議論文，那么議論文中的段落首句多為主題句，觀點(diǎn)鮮明。續(xù)寫時，要圍繞段落分論點(diǎn)確定論證方法，如正反對比、例證等。(四)注意事項(xiàng)1詞數(shù)要求：詞數(shù)少于130的，從總分中減去2分。2與所給短文及段落開頭語的銜接程度。3內(nèi)容的豐富性和對所標(biāo)出關(guān)鍵詞語的應(yīng)用。4應(yīng)用語言結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯的豐富性和準(zhǔn)確性。5上下文的連貫性。1閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。jack，a clerk at the local bank，was wandering alone on the street.it was a cold，silent winter night.his mind was on his wife linda，who had been in a car accident two months ago and was now lying in a hospital bed，waiting for more money for her operation.jack had sold everything he had，and he had tried his best to borrow money from all the pople and banks he could.but the real world is cruel.a large amount of money was still needed.to jack，it would mean a great deal of suffering to see his wife die without any help.“i have only one option left，”jack said to himself.then he went to the bank，his workplace，again.for several days，he observed the bank and planned a theft.then next day，he went to work as usual.everything seemed normal：he joked with his workmates and helped his clients as he always did.but no one noticed that he had brought a bigger suitcase to work，instead of the small one he always carried.at 5：00 pm，the bank closed，and the clerks and the guards had all gone home.however，at that moment，jack was in the bathroom，and the guards didnt notice him，of course.when the noises coming from the street were replaced by silence and everything turned dark，jack came out from the bathroom.he first cut the lines of the alarms and monitors with tools from his new suitcase.he was all too familiar with the equipment since he had been working there for 8 years and had been studying the security system for the past 30 days.using a special key and some other tools，he then easily opened the doors of the safes.the banks security system wasnt very good，which allowed jack to take a lot of money.several minutes later，jack left the bank with a heavy bag filled with money.注意：1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2應(yīng)使用5個以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；3續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；4續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。paragraph 1：after jack had been gone from the bank for a while，the alarms began to ring. paragraph 2：but the most unlucky man was the manager of the bank，an old man. 2閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。last summer when my family was road tripping to montana we arrived in great falls late one night.the kids had fallen asleep in the car，so my husband went and checked in while i stayed with the kids.when he returned with the room keys，we woke up our children and took them out of the car，through the hotel，up the elevators and into our guest room.we kept the room dark，leaving only the entry light on，and quickly put kids into bed hoping theyd drift back to sleep.my husband went to put our waters in the minifridge only to notice some beers.“thats strange，”he said and i agreed，but having discovered leftbehind drinks in hotel fridges in the past i didnt think much about it.i figured the housekeepers had forgotten to check it.in the meantime，my husband ran to the store and i went into the bathroom to get ready for bed.as i washed my face i looked down to see cardboard beer containers in the trash.i felt my heart begin to pound.we were in someone elses room!now panicked，i checked the closet.nothing.i then went to the dresser drawers.nothing.my eyes scanned the door rooms floor and there it was：a black bag that looked like one of ours.but it wasnt!i immediately called the front desk and the waitress in charge responded with an“oh，my god！this is not good！”by now the kids were wideawake，jumping on the beds as i was trying to put all of our things back into our oversized suitcase.just while we were packing our things，i heard someone was unlocking the door，which made my heart beat wildly.注意：1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2應(yīng)使用5個以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；3續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；4續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。paragraph 1：the door opened and in came a young man. paragraph 2：i didnt know how to deal with the matter but luckily the waitress 3閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。james shook his money box again.nothing！he carefully counted the coins that lay on the bed.24.52 was all that he had.the bicycle he wanted was 90！how on earth was he going to get the rest of the money？he knew that his friends all had bicycles.it was hard to hang around with people when you were the only one without wheels.he thought about what he could do.there was no need to ask his parents for he knew they had no money to spare.there was only one way to get money，and that was to earn it.he would have to find a job.but who would hire him and what could he do？he decided to ask mr clay for advice，who usually had opinions in most things.“well，you can start right here，” said mr clay.“my windows need cleaning and my car needs washing.” that was the beginning of jamess oddjob(零工) business.for three months he worked every day after finishing his homework.he was surprised by the various jobs that people found for him to do.he took dogs and babies for walks，cleaned out cupboards，and mended books.he forgot the number of cars he washed and windows he cleaned，but the money increased and he knew that he would soon have enough for the bicycle he was dying for.the day finally came when james counted his money and found 94.32.he wasted no time and went down to the shop to pick up the bicycle he wanted.it had been hard work for the money，but james knew that he valued his bicycle far more since he had bought it with his own money.he had achieved what he thought was impossible，and that was worth even more than the bicycle.注意：1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2應(yīng)使用5個以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；3續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；4續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。paragraph 1：he rode proudly home，looking forward to showing his new bicycle to his friends. paragraph 2：many years later，james succeeded in 4閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。the event that stands out in toms memory happened one morning when tom was only ten years old.he was at home with his elder sister jane.tom was doing his homework when he heard raised voices.at first he thought nothing of it since customers in the motorcycle shop directly below their flat often became loud，but he soon realized this time it was different.“quick！quick! remove the motorcycles from the shop.” someone yelled.then a thick burning smell filled the air.when tom opened the front door of their flat to investigate，a thick cloud of smoke greeted him.the motorcycle shop had caught fire and people were running and crying.jane，who had been playing the violin in her room，hurried to the living room.they rushed out of the door and along the corridor(走廊)through the smoke.they were heading towards the stairway at the far end of the corridor when jane stopped in her track.she turned around and headed back the way they came.tom had no idea what she was doing，but he followed suit.jane had suddenly remembered the lady in her 70s who lived next door to them，who they called makcik，malay for auntie.jane began banging on makciks door，but got no answer.as the smoke thickened around them，tom could see many of their neighborssome still in their pyjamasrunning for safety.the thought of fear crossed his mind.“she would have run for safety like everyone else！” tom cried.however，jane refused to give up.“i know makciks still inside.” she said she was familiar with makciks daily routine and was certain she would still be sleeping.she pounded the door.“go downstairs.go now! go！” 注意：1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2應(yīng)使用5個以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；3續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；4續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。paragraph 1：tom noticed the flame was reaching up. paragraph 2：luckily，some neighbors passing by stopped and offered help. 5閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事?！皁uch！” i howled in pain as i dropped the hammer onto my foot.i felt foolish.it was pouring with rain，and，lame for a moment，i hopped around to the drivers side.“no luck？” said george.we had a flat tyre(輪胎) and i was trying to change the wheel.but it was stuck firm.we had driven ten hours along the road through the jungle without seeing another soul.in the distance was an ox working in the field.“so what do we do now? how can we find a garage？” asked george，as i got back into the car.about fifteen minutes later，the rain stopped.out of the jungle came an old woman.she walked towards us carrying something long and thin.“uh，oh，here comes danger！” said george，“shes got a spear.”she was wearing traditional garments，with short sleeves，a colorful necklace and other jewelry.as she got closer，we saw the spear was just a wooden pole.i got out.“hello！” i said，in english.“can you help us？” i pointed to the wheel.she stared at it，and then made a gesture to follow her back to the jungle.george and i looked at each other，and then set off after her.soon we came to a tent under some trees.it had a firm framework of wooden poles，like the one the woman was carrying，covered with heavy cloth，and fastened with rope made of some kind of loose plant fiber.all round were corn plants.it was harvest time for the grain，and a spade，a fork and other tools were lying on the ground.nearby were some chicks and a rooster，and a pig tied to a post.the woman folded back a cloth and invited us in.my eyes had to adjust to the darkness inside.the tent was furnished with a few mats on the floor，and a low table with a teapot.she picked up a photo and showed it to us.was it her husband？the man in the photo was bare to the waist.he looked much too young.she was probably a widow(寡婦)maybe her son or her nephew?our hostess poured some tea，and watched smiling as we drank.“say something，” said george.注意：1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2應(yīng)使用5個以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；3續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；4續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。paragraph 1：i was wondering what to say when i heard the sound of footsteps out of the tent. paragraph 2：we got up and together walked back to the car. 6閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。a 56yearold montreal man looking to shake off a midlife depression walked around the world in 11 years，returning this week to canada，looking very happy after realizing a dream.a bit thinner and with a few more gray hairs，jean beliveau was pushing a threewheel stroller that carried his sleeping bag，clothes and a first aid box.walking at a light cheerful pace，he expects to come full circle，arriving in montreal on october 16 after passing through the capital，ottawa.he stopped only briefly to eat some food and described some of his adventures on this trip to curious strangers，passing on a joy and peacefulness he gained from total freedom.he did not know where he would sleep that night，depending on no one and with little money in his pocket.but he was not worried in the leastit has been this way for the past 11 years and he is fine with it.in montreal，he will reunite with his longtime girl