河南省信陽市第四高級中學高考英語 專題訓練 短文改錯、書面表達（5）.doc

河南省信陽市第四高級中學2014屆高考英語專題訓練： 短文改錯、書面表達（5）短文改錯(201*保定調研)last sunday i went to the birds nest stadium. at gate1._i happened to meet some young america tourists.i greeted2._to them in english and then we began to chat. from the chat3._i learned that they were college students traveling in beijing4._but most of them were fond of chinese culture. they were5._busy taking pictures and they seem to be much impressed by6._the changes which had been taken place in the past few years.7._after come out of the stadium, we went to the water cubic(水立方)8._and had a good time there. we exchanged our email address so that9._we could write to each other later. they thanked us again and again.10._i was very glad to have the chance to practise my oral english.答案與解析：1gate前加the此處表示特指，指的是鳥巢體育館的大門。2americaamerican應該用形容詞來修飾名詞。3去掉第一個togreet是及物動詞，可直接加賓語，不必加to。45butand來北京和喜歡中國文化為并列關系而非轉折，應用and表示并列。6seemseemed根據事情發(fā)生的時間last sunday和全文的時態(tài)可知，此處也應用一般過去時。7去掉beentake place無被動語態(tài)。8comecoming介詞after后要用動名詞形式。9addressaddresses交換的是雙方的郵箱地址，故此處應用復數形式。10usme是“我”幫助了他們，因此用me。*結束高考英語書面表達講義：表格作文(4)(25 min.)注意： 1. 對所給要點，逐一陳述，適當發(fā)揮，不要簡單翻譯。2. 詞數不少于120。3. 演講稿中不得提及考生所在學校及本人姓名。_【參考范文】one possible version：good afternoon, everyone，the topic of my speech today is “being a good listener”good listening can always show respect, promote understanding, and improve interpersonal relationship.many people suggest that parents should listen more to their children, so they will understand them better, and find it easy to narrow the generation gap; teachers should listen more to their students, then they can meet their needs better, and place themselves in a good relationship with their students; students should listen more to their classmates, thus they will help and learn from each other, and a friendship is likely to be formed.*結束 經典名句與句式匯總：核心句型（開頭、正文、結尾）1. 開頭the arguer may be right about , but he seems to neglect (fail) to mention (take into account) that fact thatas opposed to (contrary to) widely (commonly/generally) held (accepted) belief (ideas/views), i believe (argue thatalthough many people believe that , i doubt (wonder) whether the argument bears much analysis (close examination).the advantages of b outweigh any benefit we gained from (carry more weight than those of / are much greater than) a.although it is commonly (widely / generally) held (felt / accepted / agreed) that , it is unlikely to be true thatthere is an element of truth in this argument (statement), but it ignores a deeper and more basic (important / essential) fact (reason) thatit is true that (true, / to be sure, / admittedly,), but this is not to say (it is unlikely / it doesnt follow / it doesnt mean / it wont be the case) thatthe main (obvious / great) problem (flaw / drawback) with (in) this argument (view / remark) is that it is ignorant of (blind to) the basic (bare) fact that it would be possible (natural / reasonable) to think (believe / take the view) that, but it would be absurd (wrong) to claim (argue) that in all the discussion and debate over, one important (basic) fact is generally overlooked (neglected).there is absolutely (in fact) no (every) reason for us to believe (accept / resist / reject) thatlogical (valid / sound) as this argument and i wholeheartedly agree with it, it appears insignificant (absurd) when is taken into consideration (account).on the surface (at first thought), it (this) may seem a sound (an attractive) suggestion (solution / idea), but careful weighing on the mind (on closer analysis / on second thought), we find thattoo much emphasis placed on (attention paid to / importance attached to) may obscure (overlook / neglect) other factsthe danger (problem / fact / truth / point) is thatwhat the arguer fails to understand (consider /mention) is thatwe dont have to look very far to see (find out) the truth (validity) of this argument (proposition).however just (logical / sound / valid) this argument may be, it only skims the surface of the problem.【專題訓練與高考預測】此題要求改正所給短文中的錯誤對標有題號的每一行做出判斷，如無錯誤，在刻行右邊橫線上畫一個勾（）；如有錯誤（每行只有一個錯誤），則按下列情況改正；該行多一個詞：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉，在該行在邊橫線上寫出該詞，并也用斜線劃掉。該行缺一詞：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（），在該行右邊橫線上寫出該加的詞。該行錯一個詞：在錯的詞下面劃一橫線，在該行右邊橫線上寫出改正后的詞注意：原行沒能錯的不要改passage 1 miss chinaguan qi, a 21-years-old college student from jilin 1._ province, had won the miss china 2003 beauty pageant 2._ in sanya, hainan province, on september 21. 3._ besides judged on their looks, the 32 competitors 4._ were tested on their write ability, english skills, 5._ team-work and generally knowledge. miss guan qi 6._ impressed the judges who present with her excellent 7._ replies during the question or answer section. she will 8._ represent(代表) chinese in the final of miss world 9._ to be holding in sanya on december 6. 10._ *結束*結束高考英語：寫作綜合訓練集寫作話題議論篇 誠信是處世之本。但是在中學生當中，考試作弊、抄襲作業(yè)、欺騙家長和老師等現(xiàn)象屢見不鮮。請你對以上種種現(xiàn)象作簡要描述，并以how to guarantee honesty為題，從三個方面，談談如何保證學生做到誠信。注意：1詞數：120左右；2開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。how to guarantee honestyas we all know, honesty is always an essential principle of living. much to our regret, however, _ honesty is the best policy, which is what we should keep in mind all the time.【參考范文】-one possible version:as we all know, honesty is always an essential principle of living. much to our regret, however, it is nothing new that some middle school students cheat in exams, copy others homework and fool their teachers and parents. therefore, how to guarantee honesty should come to our attention.personally, i think honesty education is necessary. for instance, courses on honesty can be offered to students; activities like story-telling and lectures are also worthy trying. with the concept of “being honest” rooted in their minds, honesty can be reflected in their daily life and study. besides, related rules and regulations should be laid down. detailed criteria should be applied to evaluate students in aspects such as homework, tests, relationship with teachers and parents.then, strict measures should be carried out to punish those who cheat, and consequently, they must assume responsibility for their bad behavior, thus considerably reducing chances of cheating next time. *結束 （*）ill never forget the trip to europe last year. after i left76. a small village in the south of france, i drove on to the next77. town. in the way a young man who was very tall stopped me and78. asked me for the lift. as soon as he got into the car, i said79. good morning to him in french and he answered with the same80. language. except for a few words, i do not know any french81. at all. none of us spoke during the journey. i had nearly82. reached the town, while the young man suddenly said very slowly. 83. do. you., speak. english? i looked at him in surprising. 84. here was no people speak english. just then i understood that85. he, too, was an englishman.(二)76left had 77. 78. in on 79. 第一個the a80. with in 81. do did 82. none neither 83. while when 84. surprising surprise 85. speak speaking*結束下面五幅圖畫敘述了胡先生熱愛動物的一段經歷。請根據圖畫內容,寫一篇100詞左右的短文,描述他的經歷并發(fā)表一點你的個人看法。 參考范文mr. hu is one of the men who like animals in such a way that all he does only causes harm to animals, because he likes animals only for the purpose of satisfying his own needs. he kept some birds in cages for fun and wore clothes made of wild animalsfur and skin. worse still, he even ate wild ani- mals in restaurants and fixed some heads of rare animals on the wal