中考英語(yǔ)看圖作文.doc

3eud教育網(wǎng) 百萬(wàn)教學(xué)資源，完全免費(fèi)，無(wú)須注冊(cè)，天天更新！中考英語(yǔ)作文面面觀-看圖作文最近幾年的中考英語(yǔ)當(dāng)中，很多省市已經(jīng)擺脫了單一作文模式，采用一大一小兩個(gè)作文相結(jié)合的模式。例如，去年遼寧沈陽(yáng)中考英語(yǔ)作文就是一個(gè)小作文，應(yīng)用文-寫(xiě)假條，加上一個(gè)大作文，漢語(yǔ)提示作文構(gòu)成。今年，北京中考英語(yǔ)作文也將是兩個(gè)，一個(gè)看圖作文在加上一個(gè)提示作文構(gòu)成。這一講，我們先來(lái)學(xué)習(xí)一下看圖作文的寫(xiě)法?？磮D作文要求考生按照所給圖畫(huà)，通過(guò)合理的聯(lián)想將一組畫(huà)面的內(nèi)容正確地表達(dá)出來(lái)?？磮D作文與其他類(lèi)型作文的不同之處在于，它除了要求考生有英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)言表達(dá)能力，還要求考生有觀察能力、分析能力和想象能力。 寫(xiě)好看圖作文應(yīng)注意的事項(xiàng)1、結(jié)合文字提示，正確理解圖意。一般情況下，看圖作文在提供圖畫(huà)的同時(shí)也附帶有簡(jiǎn)要的文字提示，我們可以利用文字提示去正確地理解圖意，得到要點(diǎn)。切忌孤立地看圖而忽視文字提示。 2.寫(xiě)作從圖畫(huà)的細(xì)節(jié)出發(fā)。所謂細(xì)節(jié)，就是指圖畫(huà)中的人物、事件、地點(diǎn)、環(huán)境、時(shí)間、動(dòng)作等。依據(jù)圖畫(huà)細(xì)節(jié)，就可以把圖畫(huà)的內(nèi)容用英語(yǔ)具體而生動(dòng)地表達(dá)出來(lái)了。 例題分析（例題）同學(xué)們，看到下面的四幅圖片及相應(yīng)的報(bào)道后，你感到最擔(dān)憂的是哪兩種情形？請(qǐng)簡(jiǎn)述你擔(dān)憂的理由并提出建議或希望。要求： 從所給素材中任選兩種情形進(jìn)行闡述，不可多選或少選。 條理清楚，意思連貫，語(yǔ)句通順，標(biāo)點(diǎn)正確； 詞數(shù) 80 100。參考詞匯： 建議 suggest v. suggestion n.氣體 gas n. 污染 pollution n. THE POLLUTIONS One third of the worlds people dont have enough clean water. More and more diseases are caused by polluted air. People are disturbed quite often by kinds of noises. Every person in our city makes about 1.8 kilos of rubbish every day.這道看圖作文題，主題和圖片連接得不是很緊密。從考查的形式上來(lái)說(shuō)，雖是看圖，實(shí)質(zhì)上卻屬于提示性的作文。這個(gè)作文應(yīng)該結(jié)合個(gè)人的觀點(diǎn)，選擇的余地還是很大的。做這個(gè)題應(yīng)該注意幾個(gè)方面：1.認(rèn)真讀題。注意，題目雖然給了四幅圖，但是卻只要求寫(xiě)其中的兩個(gè)就行。2、題意要求的是闡述個(gè)人的觀點(diǎn)-最擔(dān)憂的兩種情形。而不是對(duì)圖片進(jìn)行描述。3、結(jié)合所給的提示。提示中，對(duì)每種污染都進(jìn)行了闡述，考生可以這些描述進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作。4、注意字?jǐn)?shù)，語(yǔ)法，拼寫(xiě)等，避免錯(cuò)誤。下面是兩個(gè)例文，大家可以參考一下。One possible version:The environment is becoming worse and worse. There are many kinds of pollution I worry about. The most serious two are water pollution and air pollution, because people cant live healthily with dirty water and polluted air, nor can animals. More and more diseases are caused by polluted air.I think factories should not pour dirty water into the river directly or produce more waste gas. Wed better go on foot or by like instead of by car, because more cars mean more waste gas. We should make our world more and more beautiful.Another possible version:The first fact I worry about is noise pollution. People cant sleep well if there is too much noise. Thats why so many people prefer to live in the countryside rather than live in the noisy city. I suggest all the factories and cars shouldnt make terrible noises. If they make terrible noise that isnt allowed, they will be fined, and we can also produce the cars which cant make terrible noise.The other pollution is rubbish pollution. If everyone makes so much rubbish, one day we may live in a world filled with rubbish. Some people throw the waste paper about. I suggest rubbish should be put into different kinds of dustbins or paper bags. 下面，我們來(lái)看看這道題的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)。一般來(lái)說(shuō)，各地的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)都和下面的這個(gè)標(biāo)準(zhǔn)差不多。這個(gè)最高的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，實(shí)際上也就是我們寫(xiě)作的目標(biāo)。評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：1. 內(nèi)容完整，語(yǔ)句流暢，無(wú)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范，給9-10分；2. 內(nèi)容較完整，語(yǔ)句較流暢，基本無(wú)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，書(shū)寫(xiě)較規(guī)范，給6-8分；3. 內(nèi)容不完整，語(yǔ)句欠流暢，語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤較多，書(shū)寫(xiě)較規(guī)