2016年秋季作文公開課

1、Qin LanrongHow to show different opinions 你所在的城市最近計(jì)劃修建地鐵，這件事引發(fā)了你所在的城市最近計(jì)劃修建地鐵，這件事引發(fā)了人們的廣泛討論。請(qǐng)根據(jù)所給信息寫一篇英文人們的廣泛討論。請(qǐng)根據(jù)所給信息寫一篇英文報(bào)道，陳述人們的不同看法，并發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)。報(bào)道，陳述人們的不同看法，并發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)。贊成觀點(diǎn)贊成觀點(diǎn)反對(duì)觀點(diǎn)反對(duì)觀點(diǎn)你的觀點(diǎn)你的觀點(diǎn)1. 解決交通擁堵解決交通擁堵問題，方便市問題，方便市民生活。民生活。2. 提供一種新的提供一種新的交通方法，促交通方法，促進(jìn)環(huán)境保護(hù)。進(jìn)環(huán)境保護(hù)。1.建設(shè)時(shí)間長(zhǎng)，影建設(shè)時(shí)間長(zhǎng)，影 響交通。響交通。2. 投入資金過大

2、，投入資金過大，成本回收過慢。成本回收過慢。 in my view/ opinion/judgementas far as Im concerned/ I can judgepersonally speaking from my perspectiveon the one hand.on the other handfor one thing. for another (thing)not only. but alsoI hold the view/ have the belief that. in the first placeto begin/start withbesides/ more

3、over/furthermorefirst of all / above all第二條理由第二條理由第一條理由第一條理由in addition/ whats more最后理由最后理由last but not leastmore importantly be for be in favor of support agree with approve of (doing) sth. think / believe / consider it necessary / beneficial / helpful to do sth.be against disagree with object to b

4、e opposed to (doing) sth. disapprove of (doing) sth. the structurethe language the handwritingWhat are the three most important aspects of a well-written composition?Pair workpair work要點(diǎn)一：解決交通擁堵問題，方便市民生活要點(diǎn)一：解決交通擁堵問題，方便市民生活The subway can solve the crowdedness problem and make peoples life is convient

5、.（5 students )the problem of crowdednessconvenient1.定語從句定語從句The subway can solve the problem of crowdedness, which makes peoples life convenient.2.-ing formThe subway can solve the problem of crowdedness, making peoples life convenient.3.not only but also Pair work pair work要點(diǎn)二：提供一種新的交通方式，要點(diǎn)二：提供一種新的

6、交通方式， 促進(jìn)環(huán)境保護(hù)促進(jìn)環(huán)境保護(hù)The subway also provides a new traffic way. It will get the environment protective better.(13 )means of transportThe subway,a new means of transport, will contribute to protecting the environment better.保護(hù)環(huán)境：保護(hù)環(huán)境：protect the environment/ be environmentally friendlyprevent the envir

7、onment from being polluted 促進(jìn)促進(jìn)contribute to經(jīng)典句型經(jīng)典句型There is no doubt that./There is no denying that./It is obvious(evident) that.副詞副詞/介詞短語介詞短語without doubt/ undoubtedlyobviously/evidently改為簡(jiǎn)單句改為簡(jiǎn)單句Pair work pair work要點(diǎn)三：建設(shè)時(shí)間長(zhǎng)，影響交通要點(diǎn)三：建設(shè)時(shí)間長(zhǎng)，影響交通.building a subway may spend long time on it. It will i

8、nforence the traffic. (7 students )take a1.-ing form/定語從句定語從句2.表結(jié)果的介詞短語或副詞表結(jié)果的介詞短語或副詞The building of a subway may take a long time, which will influence the traffic.influence3.表原因的表原因的介詞短語介詞短語 because ofdue to/ on account ofas a result/ consequence/ therefore/ soThe traffic will be influenced the lo

9、ng process of the construction.Pair workindividual work要點(diǎn)四：投入資金過大，成本回收過慢要點(diǎn)四：投入資金過大，成本回收過慢.to build the subway will cost much money. It is slowly to get the money have cost.（5 students ) backnot only.but (also)not only but as well連接兩個(gè)句子連接兩個(gè)句子Not only will building the subway cost much money, but (als

10、o) it is slow to get the money back. slow building我完全同意第一種觀點(diǎn)。一方面地鐵會(huì)讓我們過上更為便捷的我完全同意第一種觀點(diǎn)。一方面地鐵會(huì)讓我們過上更為便捷的生活，另一方面它對(duì)環(huán)境有益。這些正是大眾們期望達(dá)到的。生活，另一方面它對(duì)環(huán)境有益。這些正是大眾們期望達(dá)到的。group work要點(diǎn)五：你的觀點(diǎn)要點(diǎn)五：你的觀點(diǎn) I totally/completely agree with/am in favor of the first opinion. For one thing, the subway will lead us to live a

11、more convenient life; for another it will be beneficial to the environment. They are exactly what the public hope to achieve. Recently, there has been a heated argument on whether a subway should be built or not in the city. Opinions vary from person to person. Some people consider it necessary to b

12、uild a subway. To begin with, the subway can solve the problem of crowdedness, thus making peoples life convenient. Besides, the subway, a new means of transport, will without doubt contribute to protecting the environment.A sample However, the others hold the opposite opinion. As far as they are concerned, the traffic will be influenced on account of the fact that building a subway will take a long time. More importantly, not only will the building cost much money, but it is slow to get the money back. I totally agree with th