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1、WELCOME 20122012年湖南卷年湖南卷. .書面表達(dá)書面表達(dá)生活中，你自己或他人曾有過物品不慎丟失生活中，你自己或他人曾有過物品不慎丟失而又找回的經(jīng)歷，期間有煩惱，有驚喜，而又找回的經(jīng)歷，期間有煩惱，有驚喜，有感慨有感慨請就此寫一篇英語短文。請就此寫一篇英語短文。主要內(nèi)容包括：主要內(nèi)容包括：1.1.丟失的物品；丟失的物品；2.2.物品失而物品失而復(fù)得的經(jīng)過；復(fù)得的經(jīng)過；3.3.你的感想。你的感想。注意：注意：1.1.詞數(shù)不少于詞數(shù)不少于120120個(gè)；個(gè)；2.2. 不能使用真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱不能使用真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱 Getting back what you have lost w

2、ould be an unforgettable experience. Last Monday, I lost my expensive cellphone, on which my name was inscribed. Fortunately, it was returned. That morning, I rushed out of my house and jumped into a taxi, for I would be late for the final examination. On arriving at school, I headed to my classroom

3、 quickly, not noticing that I had left my cellphone on the back. When the exam ended, to my great surprise, I found the driver waiting at the school gate. He handed the phone over to me, wearing a smile on his face. So touched was I that tears rolled down my cheeks. From this story, I am firmly conv

4、inced of the significance of honesty, which will contribute to building a warm and harmonious society.How to polish(潤色潤色) your composition?一一 遣詞遣詞 努力使用高級詞匯努力使用高級詞匯1.At weekends, we have a lot of homework to do. At weekends, we have _ homework to do. endless2. I had a good idea.A good idea_ me.struck

5、3.As a result, the plan was a failure.The plan _ _ to be a failure.4.She went to Austria in order to study music. She went to Austria _ _ _ _studying music. turned outfor thepurposeof5.She cant correctly pronounce the word.She _ _ _ pronouncing the word. has trouble/difficultyin2 2學(xué)會使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪^渡詞：學(xué)會使用恰當(dāng)?shù)?/p>

6、過渡詞：1 1）表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系）表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系but, yet, however, nevertheless (然而), otherwise, in spite of, despite , regardless of(不管,不顧), although, though, while. 3 3） 表示對比關(guān)系表示對比關(guān)系on the contrary; Instead of; on one handon the other hand; for one thing ,for another thing.2 2） 表示遞進(jìn)、強(qiáng)調(diào)關(guān)系表示遞進(jìn)、強(qiáng)調(diào)關(guān)系besides, furthermore , whats

7、 more, in addition, moreover , worse still, to make matters /things worse,6 6）表示解釋、說明關(guān)系）表示解釋、說明關(guān)系7 7）表示結(jié)論）表示結(jié)論namely (也就是), actually, in fact, as a matter of fact, such as, for example/for instance, that is to say, in other words, and so on, to tell you the truth, according to thisin short, in brief

8、, in a word, in general, as you know, as far as I know, on the whole, in conclusion, 4 4） 表示因果關(guān)系表示因果關(guān)系as a result /consequence (of), owing to, due to, thanks to, on account of(由于), so, therefore, because, since ,as 5 5） 表示時(shí)間、順序關(guān)系表示時(shí)間、順序關(guān)系shortly afterwards(不久之后), first, second, then, next, finally,

9、in the end, eventually. 二二 造句造句- 靈活多變的句式結(jié)構(gòu)靈活多變的句式結(jié)構(gòu)1.1.使用強(qiáng)調(diào)句使用強(qiáng)調(diào)句2) l didnt realize the importance of learning English well until then._ _ _ _then _ I realized the importance of learning English well.Itwas not untilthat1)The dog has saved my little brother._It is the dog that has saved my little bro

10、ther.2.2.使用倒裝句使用倒裝句You can learn to write English well only in this way._Only in this way can you learn to write English well.Though I am weak, I will make the efforts._ _ _ _, I will make the efforts.Weak asIam3.3.使用非謂語動(dòng)詞使用非謂語動(dòng)詞The young man couldnt help crying when he heard the bad news._ _ _ _, t

11、he young man couldnt help crying.Hearing thebadnewsShe walked out of the room and many students followed her. _ _ many students, she walked out of the room . FollowedbyHe didnt turn up. And it disappointed everybody._ _ everybody _ he didnt turn up.Itdisappointedthat4.4.使用名詞性從句使用名詞性從句, ,定從定從_ _ ever

12、ybody _ _he didnt turn up.disappointedthatwaswhatHe didnt turn up, _ disappointed everybody.which5. 5. 改變語態(tài)改變語態(tài)People suggest that the conference be put off. _ _ _that the conference be put off.It issuggested6.6.使用并列句使用并列句If you give him an inch , he will take a yard. _ _ an inch, _ he will take a yard.themore excitedWhen he spoke, he felt more and more excited.The more he spoke, _ _ _ he felt. Give himand1.開頭段開頭段 開門見山，點(diǎn)明主題開門見山，點(diǎn)明主