2020年中考英語作文指導話題6-健康與安全

1、2020年中考英語作文指導話題6-健康與安全2020年中考英語作文指導話題6-健康與安全分析衡陽近8年中考真題可知，針對“健康與安全”這一話題，考查了2次：2019年要求以“How to Protect Yourself in a Fire”為題提出自己的建議；2012年要求從健康飲食、體育鍛煉和養(yǎng)成良好的習慣等方面寫一篇短文。 全國近年真題對“健康與安全”這一話題主要涉及的命題角度為：命題探索分析衡陽近8年中考真題可知，針對“健康與安全”這一話題，考(1)談論如何保持健康，如：2019煙臺“如何保持健康”；2017賀州“Good Ways to Keep Healthy”；2017泰州“如何

2、放松和保持健康”；(2)對“食品安全”的看法與建議，如：2019樂山“談談對食品安全的看法”；(3)談論如何保證安全，如：2019南充“How to Keep Safe”；2019涼山州“How to Protect Ourselves”。命題探索(1)談論如何保持健康，如：2019煙臺“如何保持健康”；2(2019衡陽)根據一項新的調查，學生安全已經成為一個大的問題。假設你是一名老師，對學生進行以“自我保護”為主題的消防安全教育，請以“How to Protect Yourself in a Fire”為題，提出你的建議。典例剖析審文體：說明文審人稱：第二人稱 審主題：如何在火災中保護自己一

3、階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句(2019衡陽)根據一項新的調查，學生安全已經成為一個大的要求：1. 短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名和地名。2. 書寫工整，語句通順，連貫，詞數不少于80。參考詞匯：cover v. 遮蓋take the lift 乘坐電梯exit n. 出口towel n. 毛巾shut off 切斷一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句要求：一二1. We shouted to our parents to let them know about the danger. 2. A woman next to him was shouting for help. 3. Sh

4、e said that the man had a heart problem and should be sent to the hospital. 1角度如何保證自身安全一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句好 句 范 例 1. We shouted to our parents t4. Thanks to Mr. Wang and the passengers, the doctors saved the man in time.5. The driver didnt think about himself. He only thought about saving a life. 6

5、. I think you should see a doctor and get an Xray. 7. I dont think sixteenyearolds should be allowed to drive. Im worried about their safety. 8. Its easy to slip and fall on a wet floor. Be sure to keep the bathroom floor dry after you have a shower or bath.一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句4. Thanks to Mr. Wang

6、and the 1. 作為中學生，我們應該了解危險并學會保護自己。 _2. 我認為如果我們在路上有危險，我們可以大聲呼救。 _ As middle students, we should know about the danger and learn to protect ourselves. I think we can shout for help if we are in danger on the way.句 子 仿 寫 一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句1. 作為中學生，我們應該了解危險并學會保護自己。 _3. 我們在網上沖浪時，應該當心在線交友。 _4. 多虧了王老師，受傷的

7、學生被及時送到了醫(yī)院。 _When we are surfing on the Internet, we should be careful to make friends online. Thanks to Mr.Wang, the student who was hurt was sent to the hospital in time.一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句3. 我們在網上沖浪時，應該當心在線交友。 _5. 無論我們徒步還是坐公交車去學校，我們都必須考慮交通安全。_6. 我認為你不可以獨自在河里游泳。那可能有危險。 _ Whether we walk or take a

8、 bus to school, we must think about the traffic safety. I dont think you can go swimming alone in a river. It may be dangerous.一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句5. 無論我們徒步還是坐公交車去學校，我們都必須考慮交通安全1. I dont like hamburgers for dinner.I dont like hamburgers for dinner because they are not healthy. I like chicken for din

9、ner. 2. I have a very healthy life.I have a very healthy life. I exercise every day.2角度如何保持健康一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句句 子 擴 寫 范 例 1. I dont like hamburgers for3. We think the best way to relax is through exercise.We think the best way to relax is through exercise. It is healthy for the mind and the body.

10、4. Jane has a lot of good habits.Jane has a lot of good habits. She drinks juice and never stays up late.一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句3. We think the best way to re5. You need to take breaks away from the computer.You need to take breaks away from the computer because you played computer games all the weeken

11、d.一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句5. You need to take breaks awa6. I think you should lie down and rest.I think you should lie down and rest.If your head and neck still hurt tomorrow, then go to see a doctor.7. Take a walk after supper! Take a walk after supper! It is good for your health.一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句6.

12、 I think you should lie down1. You need to keep a balanced diet.(擴寫具體做法) _2. We shouldnt eat food that goes bad.(擴寫原因) _ You need to keep a balanced diet. Remember to have meals regularly and eat more vegetables and fruit.We shouldnt eat food that goes bad because it will do harm to our health. 句 子

13、擴 寫 一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句1. You need to keep a balanced3. I think we should get enough sleep during the night.(擴寫原因) _ 4. I do a lot of exercise every day.(擴寫具體做法) _5. My uncle exercises at least three times a week.(擴寫具體做法) _I think we should get enough sleep during the night. Staying up late is bad

14、for our health. I do a lot of exercise every day. I walk to school instead of taking a bus.My uncle exercises at least three times a week. On the weekend, he often plays basketball or badminton with his friends.一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句3. I think we should get enoug6. We can play sports.(擴寫想法) _7. We sho

15、uld keep ourselves happy.(擴寫原因) _We can play sports. I think sports can make us stronger and healthier.We should keep ourselves happy. A happy man lives longer than a sad man.一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句6. We can play sports.(擴寫想法) _8. You need to get rid of bad habits like staying up late.(擴寫目的) _ 9. You s

16、hould have breakfast every morning.(擴寫原因) _You need to get rid of bad habits like staying up late. It is an important way to keep healthy. You should have breakfast every morning. It can give you enough energy to study for the whole morning. 一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句8. You need to get rid of bad First, y

17、ou should _(建議1). Second, you should _(建議2). Next, you should _(建議3). Finally, you should _(建議4). But you mustnt take the lift or jump off a window.練語段語段練習1如何保護自身安全keep calm if a fire happens cover your nose with a wet towelshut off the electricity in the house try your best to get out of the house一

18、階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句 First, you should _ First, we should _(做法1). _(原因1)is bad for our health. Second, we must _(做法2). _(原因2), the healthier we will be. Third, we should _(做法3). get enough sleep during the night have healthy food語段練習2如何保持健康Staying up late do more exercise The more fruit and vegetable

19、s we eat一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句 First, we should _We can _(具體做法). Finally, we should _(做法4). If we _(原因3), well live a happy life. walk to school instead of taking a bus often smilekeep ourselves happy一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句We can _成篇章How to Protect Yourself in a FireMany fires happen every year in China.

20、 Many people are hurt or die in fires. You should know some ways of protecting yourself that will help to keep you safe in fires.First, you should keep calm if a fire happens. It is very important to keep your mind clear. Second, you should shut off the electricity in the house in case you could get

21、 hurt by it. 一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句高 分 范 文 成篇章How to Protect Yourself in Next, you should cover your nose with a wet towel. Because the fire will burn something and will release a kind of poisonous gas. Finally, you should try your best to get out of the house. But you mustnt take the lift or jump off

22、 a window. Remember these methods because I think those are very useful for all of you.一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句Next, you should cover your no(2019河池改編)今年6月下旬學校將舉辦一場以“Keep away from the danger”為題的英文演講比賽。假如你是王雷同學，請你從游泳安全、網上交友安全、食品安全、交通安全、學校安全等方面著手，寫一篇英語演講稿。要求：1. 短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名和地名。 2. 書寫工整，語句通順，連貫，詞數不少于80。注意：開頭、結尾已給出，但不計入總詞數。寫作練兵寫作練兵(2019河池改編)今年6月下旬學校將舉辦一場以“Keep寫作練兵寫作練兵Keep away from the danger Hello! Everyone. Im Wang Lei. The danger is around us._So we must learn how to keep away from the danger. First, we mustnt go swimming without our parents or