高中英語讀后續(xù)寫高分作文專練課件

1、高考英語新型作文讀后續(xù)寫專練一高考英語新型作文讀后續(xù)寫專練一原文 閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。續(xù)寫的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。There is a farm not far from the coastline. It belongs to a man called Tom. Tom couldnt do everything by himself on the farm. Thus, he needed to hire one man to help him run the farm. However, no one worked on his far

2、m for long. Why？Because the work was too tiring. Since the farm is near the sea, there are often storms from the sea that strike his farm. When a storm comes, Tom and the man he hired have to get up quickly and try to reduce the losses caused by the storm. Therefore, no one liked working there. Tom

3、had to look for people to work for him all the time. One day, a man called Henry read the poster that Tom had put up and then came to his farm. “Sir, I can work for you , ” said Henry. Tom looked at Henry. This young man was neither strong nor tall. 高中英語讀后續(xù)寫高分作文專練課件“Are you sure?” asked Tom. “Yes, s

4、ir. I can do the work well. But you must pay me twice what you paid others before, ” said that young man. Tom was surprised. He didnt really believe such a man could do the work well. But it was really hard for him to find someone else to work for him. At last, he decided to give Henry a try. Howeve

5、r, before hiring him, he said, “Can you really be a good helper？The work on the farm is hard and tiring. And there are often storms. ”Henry smiled and said, “Dont worry. I can be a good helper . Youll see. And storms wont be a problem. They wont even disturb our sleep. We can sleep very well even on

6、 stormy nights. ”And then Henry stayed on the farm. To Toms joy, Henry worked hard and did his work well. It was obvious that he hadnt lied. However, one night, there was a big storm. Tom was woken up by the strong wind. He was worried that the storm would cause great losses for his farm. And he saw

7、 his helper nowhere.“Are you sure?” asked Tom. Paragraph 1 Tom thought Henry must still be sleeping._Paragraph 1Paragraph 2 Tom thought he had hired the wrong man._Paragraph 2寫作提示寫作提示 Tom thought Henry must still be sleeping._（Tom非常著急，使勁地敲Henry的門）。_（令他感到吃驚的是),Henry was still lying in his bed. _（很明顯,

8、Henry沒有意識(shí)到情況多么嚴(yán)重）。_（Tom 生氣地喊道）“Get up! There is a big storm. We must work right now.”_(Henry平靜地回答)“Sir, have you forgotten I told you that storms wouldnt disturb our sleep? Why not just go back to sleep?” _（聽到這些話，Tom 感到很失望)。 Tom thought Henry must still Tom thought he had hired the wrong man. _(感到無助

9、)，he rushed out to work on his own._（然而，他剛到戶外就看到意外的場(chǎng)景，房頂都被遮蓋好了，所有的雞，馬和牛都被安置妥當(dāng)。）_(Tom松了一口氣，眼淚流下來)_（是Henry提前把所有的工作都做好了）He realized he had hired the best man.Tom thought he had hired the w參考范文參考范文Paragraph 1 Tom thought Henry must still be sleeping. So anxious was he that he knocked at the door of Henr

10、ys room violently. To Toms astonishment, Henry was still lying in his bed. It was extremely evident that Henry didnt realize how serious the situation was. Filled with rage, Tom shouted, “Get up! There is a big storm. We must work right now. ” Calm and peaceful, Henry responded, “Sir, have you forgo

11、tten I told you that storms wouldnt disturb our sleep? Why not just go back to sleep?” Hearing the words, a wide disappointment took hold of Tom. 高中英語讀后續(xù)寫高分作文專練課件Paragraph 2Tom thought he had hired the wrong man. Feeling helpless, he rushed out to work on his own. Nevertheless, no sooner had he gone

12、 outside than an unexpected scene came into his sight, all the roofs covered and all his chicken, horses and cows settled. Tom was seized by a strong sense of relief, tears streaming down his cheeks. It was Henry that did all the work well in advance before the storm came. He realized he had hired t

13、he best man.Paragraph 2文章分析和寫作指導(dǎo)文章分析和寫作指導(dǎo)主旨大意：這篇文章主要說的是主人公Tom在靠近海邊的地方有一個(gè)農(nóng)場(chǎng)。因?yàn)楹＿叡╋L(fēng)雨比較多，當(dāng)暴風(fēng)雨來的時(shí)候，需要巨大的工作量。Tom雇傭的工人因?yàn)槭懿涣朔敝氐膭趧?dòng)而辭職。后來，Henry來應(yīng)聘，他提出雙倍工資，但是，他很能干，是個(gè)好助手。續(xù)寫思路：一個(gè)風(fēng)雨交加的晚上，Tom需要Henry一起去防護(hù)農(nóng)場(chǎng)，但是看不到Henry的人影。段首指導(dǎo)語第一段Tom以為Henry在睡覺，第二段Tom認(rèn)為自己雇傭錯(cuò)了人。這兩句話基本設(shè)定了故事發(fā)展的主題。我們可以大膽的想象出：當(dāng)Tom去Henry房間找他的時(shí)候，他的確在睡覺，而且

14、拒絕和Tom一起去抵御暴風(fēng)雨。而當(dāng)Tom對(duì)Henry很失望，正準(zhǔn)備自己去工作時(shí)，發(fā)現(xiàn)Henry早在暴風(fēng)雨來之前已經(jīng)做好了準(zhǔn)備工作。農(nóng)場(chǎng)上的東西井然有序，他們不需要在暴風(fēng)雨中再做什么了。其實(shí)，他找到的是一個(gè)很好的員工。寫作風(fēng)格：注意語言、動(dòng)作、心理、情感等細(xì)節(jié)描繪。嘗試使用動(dòng)詞、形容詞、定語從句、名詞性從句、狀語從句、非謂語動(dòng)詞以及被動(dòng)語態(tài)來刻畫人物的語言、動(dòng)作、心理、神態(tài)以及環(huán)境氛圍。注意運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)?shù)拇~、邏輯銜接詞把句子連接成文。主旨大意：這篇文章主要說的是主人公Tom在靠近海邊的地方有一重點(diǎn)詞匯：anxious adj.焦急的 violently adv.暴力地rage n.狂怒 calm

15、adj.鎮(zhèn)靜的 peaceful adj.平靜的respond v.回復(fù) disappointment n.失望 nevertheless adv.然而unexpected adj.意外的 seize v.抓住重點(diǎn)詞匯：重點(diǎn)短語：take hold of 抓住filled with sth. 充滿in advance 提前重點(diǎn)句型：1. so.that. 結(jié)果狀語從句的倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)。2.It be extremely evident that. that引導(dǎo)的主語從句。3.no sooner.than. 時(shí)間狀語從句的倒裝。4.It be.that. 強(qiáng)調(diào)句。重點(diǎn)短語：Paragraph 1 To

16、m thought Henry must still be sleeping. So anxious was he that he knocked at the door of Henrys room violently.（描寫Tom 在暴風(fēng)雨來臨的時(shí)候，找不到幫手那種焦急的情緒。）To Toms astonishment, Henry was still lying in his bed.（令人意外的情況，與Tom的極其焦慮相比較，Henry好像沒事一樣。）It was extremely evident that Henry didnt realize how serious the si

17、tuation was.（Henry在這樣嚴(yán)重的暴風(fēng)雨天氣還在坦然的睡覺，很明顯他沒有意識(shí)到情況有多么糟糕。）Filled with rage, Tom shouted, “Get up! There is a big storm. We must work right now.”（看到這個(gè)場(chǎng)景，Tom更加憤怒） Calm and peaceful, Henry responded,“Sir, have you forgotten I told you that storms wouldnt disturb our sleep? Why not just go back to sleep?”（

18、然而，Henry卻異常平靜，無動(dòng)于衷。） Hearing the words,a wide disappointment took hold of Tom.(此情此景，留給Tom的只有失望。)Paragraph 1Paragraph 2Tom thought he had hired the wrong man. Feeling helpless, he rushed out to work on his own.（孤身作戰(zhàn)，Tom感到很無力。）Nevertheless, no sooner had he gone outside than an unexpected scene came into his sight, all the roofs covered and all his chicken, horses and cows settled.（然而，當(dāng)他到室外正準(zhǔn)備干活時(shí)，看到