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專題16書面表達-中考英語沖刺專題卷(解析版)專題16書面表達-中考英語沖刺專題卷(解析版)專題16書面表達-中考英語沖刺專題卷(解析版)專題16書面表達一、看法看法類A（15分）近期，二胎政策引起廣泛熱議。請你以一名中國學(xué)生LiHua的身份，給ChinaDaily的編寫寫封簡信，公布自己對二胎政策的看法。提示：原由：獨子政策缺點多于優(yōu)點。優(yōu)點結(jié)果：推行二胎政策解決人口問題缺點一胎政策下出生的夫婦要支撐4大2小的大家庭。一胎政策過時，二胎政策必要。你的看法：解決目前和未來的問題。要求：詞數(shù)為80詞左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；中文不能夠出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱；文章層次清楚，結(jié)構(gòu)完滿，語句連結(jié)。DearEditor,Inordertosolvethepopulationproblem,ChinawiththelargestpopulationintheworlddecidedtouseOne-ChildPolicy30moreyearsago.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua1/13【參照范文】DearEditor,Inordertosolvethepopulationproblem,ChinawiththelargestpopulationintheworlddecidedtouseOne-ChildPolicy30moreyearsago.Butsinceitwascarriedout,peoplehavefoundmoredisadvantagesthanadvantages.Thus,peoplethinkTwo-ChildPolicyshouldbeused.Ontheonehand,itcansolvetheproblemofChina’spopulation.Ontheotherhand,couplesborninthetimesofOne-ChildPolicywillsupportabigfamilywith4parentsand2children.Inmyopinion,One-ChildPolicyhasbeenoutofdateandTwo-ChildPolicyisnecessaryforitcansolvethepresentproblemandtheprobleminthefuture.Yours,LiHua【寫作亮點】這篇文章語言規(guī)范，敘事清楚，詞匯及時態(tài)運用正確，能夠把提示的內(nèi)容表達清楚，語句暢達，意思連結(jié)是一篇不錯的文章。B（10分）在平常生活中，你看到身邊有哪些不良現(xiàn)象？請列舉一些并就某些方面說說你的做法和想法。提示：speakloudly，cutinline(插隊)，wastefood，unfriendly(冷漠的)，offernohelp...要求：1.所寫內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括所供應(yīng)的信息，可合適發(fā)揮；語句暢達，意思連結(jié)，書寫工整；文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名、地名等相關(guān)信息；4.詞數(shù)100左右。(開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù))Inourdailylife,Iusuallyseesomebadbehavioraroundus.Forexample,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2/13____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ithinkifeveryonecanthinkmoreofothers,wewillhaveabetterlivingenvironment.【參照范文】Inourdailylife,Iusuallyseesomebadbehavioraroundus.Forexample,Ioftenhearpeoplespeakandlaughloudlyinpublic.Itistoonoisy.Somepeoplecutinlinewhileothersarewaiting.Itmakesmeunhappy.Andinourschooldininghall,Ioftenseestudentswastefood.Attimes,peopleseemunfriendlyandoffernohelpwhenothersareintrouble.Forme,myparentsarestrictwithme.Theyoftentellmetobehavewell.SoIneverdroplitterabout.AndIneverdrawonthedeskoronthewall.Iampolitetooldpeople.Ithinkifeveryonecanthinkmoreofothers,we’llhaveabetterliving學(xué)environment科網(wǎng).【寫作亮點】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言精練。開頭介紹了自己身邊有一些不良現(xiàn)象，接下來介紹自己的做法，最后說出自己的想法，每一個人要多為他人著想。此外，speakandlaughloudly,cutinline,wastefood,offernohelp,arestrictwith,ampoliteto等這些詞組的運用也讓文章添色很多。二、說明介紹類A（15分）假設(shè)你是中學(xué)生李華，你的美國朋友Eric想在下個月來中國旅游，時間一個星期，請你寫一封郵件給他，介紹一處旅游景點，內(nèi)容以下：景點名稱及地址；特色或特色；咨詢對方到達中國的詳盡時間，可否需要接機，購票等。DearEric,3/13____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________LookingforwardtoyourreplyandyourcomingtoChina!Regards,LiHua【參照范文】DearEric,GladtoknowthatyouarecomingtoChinaforatripnextmonth.I’mlookingforwardtoseeingyousoAsforwhereexactlyyoushouldgofortheweek’trip,sIrecommendChengdeSummerPalace,thelargestsurvivingroyalgardeninChina.It’slocatedHebeiinChengde,Province.TheemperorsinQingDynastyusedtospendtheirsummerstherehuntingwhileescapingtheheatinBeijing,thecapital.Thebuildings,gardens,lakesandtemples,whichhavethecharacteristicsofthebuildingsfoundinSouthChinaandTibet.It’tovisit,especiallyinsummer.Besides,pleasetellmewhenyou’llarriveinChinaexactuldy.youWolikemetomeetyouattheairportorbookticketsforyou?LookingforwardtoyourreplyandyourcomingtoChina.【寫作亮點】這篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短語，為文章添色很多.如:It’reallysaniceplacetovisit,especiallyinsummer.Besides,pleasetellmewhenyou’llarriveinChinaexactly.Lookingforwardtoyourreplyandyour4/13comingtoChina.學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以合適引用，使文章的表達更有邏輯性，更富饒條理。B（15分）上海迪斯尼樂園(ShanghaiDisneylandPark)于6月16日開始正式營業(yè)。近期，你打算和父親母親一起去上海迪斯尼樂園游玩。依照以下提示用英文寫一篇關(guān)于此行的90詞左右的短文。內(nèi)容要點以下：1.地址位于上海市浦東新區(qū)（PudongNewArea），占地116公頃2.時間一整天3.票價377元人民幣每人4.用餐中國餐館就餐、聽聞食品特別貴5.園內(nèi)活動參觀不同樣主題館、觀看游行和煙火表演、M大街購物6.感覺注意：短文須包括所有內(nèi)容要點，要求語句暢達、意思連結(jié)；短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；第6點須用2—3句話張開合理發(fā)揮；4.參照詞匯：公頃hectare主題館themeparks游行paradeShanghaiDisneylandParkwillbeopentothepubliconJune16th.Iplantovisititwithmyparentssoon.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參照范文】ShanghaiDisneylandParkwillbeopentothepubliconJune16th.Iplantovisititwithmyparentssoon.ItliesinPudongNewAreaandcoversanareaof116hectares.Wewanttospendawholedayinit.Thepriceoftheticketis377yuaneach.Atnoon,wewillhaveaquickmealinaChineserestaurant.Butitissaidthatthefoodthereisveryexpensive.Wecanvisitdifferentthemeparks,watchtheparadeandfireworksanddosomeshoppinginM5/13Street.WheneverIthinkofit,Ifeelexcited.Ihopethatdaywillcomeassoonaspossible.【名師談?wù)摗窟@篇短文主要表達了作者打算和父親母親一起去上海迪斯尼樂園游玩。寫作時需要增加詳盡事例。短文要用一般現(xiàn)在時。注意主語謂語的一致性。寫作時盡量使用較高級的詞匯和句子的連結(jié)連結(jié)，以提高作文的品位?！緦懽髁咙c】文中使用了特別好的短語和句子，比方Wewanttospendawholedayinit；Ifeelexcited.Ihopethatdaywillcomeassoonaspossible.。并注意了句子開頭的變化和句子之間的連結(jié)，等為文章添色很多。三、咨詢建議類A（15分）假設(shè)你是Tim，在美國游學(xué)時期與住家孩子Simon、鄰居孩子Daniel成為好友，并結(jié)伴表演京劇《大鬧天宮》。幾天前，因Simon諷刺Daniel，兩人發(fā)生爭吵?，F(xiàn)在Simon想修復(fù)友誼，但不知如何辦理，所以特地發(fā)來郵件追求你的幫助。請依照以下要點，給Simon回一封電子郵件?，F(xiàn)狀解析諷刺他人是錯誤的；很快樂Simon想改變現(xiàn)狀；供應(yīng)建議1.應(yīng)該趕忙道歉；2.隨郵件發(fā)送一個視頻節(jié)目，建講和Daniel一起看；1.節(jié)目名稱為友誼(Friendship)；節(jié)目簡介2.以孫悟空(MonkeyKing)為原形，讓自己想起在美國時三人一起的歡喜歲月；節(jié)目最后，孫悟空做總結(jié)；闡述希望視頻有幫助；永遠做朋友。注意事項：郵件須包括所給內(nèi)容要點，要求語句暢達，意思連結(jié)；孫悟空講的話用2~3句張開合理想象，作合適發(fā)揮；詞數(shù)在90個左右，郵件開頭和結(jié)尾已在答題卡上給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；郵件內(nèi)容必定寫在答題卡指定的地址上。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6/13________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參照范文】DearSimon,Thankyouforyourletter.IhopeIcanhelpyou.Itiswrongtolaughatothers.I’mgladyou’reconsideringhanging.YoucshouldsaysorrytoDanielassoonaspossible.Isending’myouavideoprogramcalledFriendshipwiththeemail.You’dbetterwatchitwithDanwasbasedonMonkeyKing.ItremindedmeofourhappytimeinAmerica.Attheendoftheprogram,MonkeyKingsaidfriendshipplayedanimportantroleinourlife.Remember,afriendinneedisafriendindeed.Ithinktheprogramishelpful.Ihopeyoucanbefriendsforever.Bestwishes!Yours,Tim【寫作亮點】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章添色很多。如:ItremindedmeofourhappytimeinAmerica；Attheendoftheprogram,MonkeyKingsaidfriendshipplayedanimportantroleinourlife.。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以合適引用，讓文章更出彩。B（10分）假設(shè)你叫李娜，在網(wǎng)上看到了以上三個網(wǎng)友的留言，你有方法幫助其中一個求助的人。請你寫一封電子郵件回復(fù)他(她)，內(nèi)容包括：你對這個網(wǎng)友所提及的事情的看法。就該現(xiàn)象提出最少三條解決問題的建議。對該網(wǎng)友提出你的希望。作文要求：7/13不能夠照抄原文；不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校真實的名稱和學(xué)生的真實姓名。語句連結(jié)，詞數(shù)80個左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Dear__________,I’mverygladthatIcangiveyouahand.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiNa【參照范文】1：DearJim,I’mverygladthatIcangiveyouahand.Yousayyouaretooshytomakemorefriendsinyournewclass.Pleasedon’tworryaboutit.Justtrytheseways.Alwaysremembertobekindtoyournewclassmates,whichcanshowthatyouareeasytogetalongwith.Youcanalsofindsomeonewholookseasygoingandtalkwithhim.Ihavetriedthatanditworked.Ifyouwanttohavemorefriends,whynotjoinsomeclubsinordertomeetmorepeoplewhohavethesameinterestasyoudo?Thenyoucanbefriendseasily.Ireallyhopemysuggestionscanbeusefulforyou.Yours,LiNa【參照范文】2：DearCathy,I’mverygladthatIcangiveyouahand.8/13Pleasedon’tworry.Yourtroubleisverycommonthesedays.Youcantrytheseways.Yourparentsthinkyouplaycomputergamestoomuch.Thefactisthatsometimesyouarelookingthroughsomethingusefuloncomputer.Whynottalkwithyourparentsandtellthemthetruth?Alwaysrememberyourparentsloveyou,anddon’tcomplainaboutYoucanit.alsotellthemyouwon’tuseitongforandtooltrytofindotherwaystosolveyourproblemsoflearning.Listeningtomusiconcomputerwithyourparentscanalsohelpalot.Ireallyhopemysuggestionscanbeusefulforyou.Yours,LiNa【參照范文】3：DearLiPing,I’mverygladthatIcangiveouyahand.Pleasedon’tworryaboutitymorean.Hereissomeadvicethatcanhelp.First,youcanlearnEnglishbylisteningtoEnglishsongs,anditcanhelpyouremembermorewordsandenjoylearningit.Second,whynotasktheteacherforhelp?Teachersarealwayshelpful.Third,it’susefultotakenotesandgooverthemmoreoften.Fourth,studyingwithagroupisagoodwaytolearnEnglish,becauseyoucangethelpfromyourpartners.Ireallyhopemysuggestionscanbeusefulforyou.Yours,LiNa【寫作亮點】作文吻合要求，層次清楚，合用性強，擁有很好的參照價值。文中就如何學(xué)好英語，分條目的列出。開頭引出建議內(nèi)容，結(jié)尾希望對李明有所幫助。在語言表達上正確無誤，吻合郵件的格式。9/13四、敘事描述類A（10分）在一堂英語課上，老師組織全班同學(xué)張開相關(guān)＂個人愛好＂的談?wù)?。假如以下是你所在小組的記錄，請依照這個記錄取英語向全班做一個報告。NameHobbyWuJunCollectingstampsJiaMeiTravelingWangPengListeningtotherockmusicI...提示：報告內(nèi)容：小組每一個人的愛好及你對愛好的看法；很多于60詞。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Dearclass,Goodmorning!Nowletmereportthediscussioninourgroup.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’sall.Thankyouforlistening.10/13【參照范文】Dearclass,Goodmorning!Nowletmereportthediscussioninourgroup.WuJunlikescollectingstamps.JiaMeiisinterestedintravelingverymuch.WangPengisfondoflisteningtothemusic.AndIenjoyreadingbooksandswimming.Ithinkthesehobbiesaregoodforourhealthandlife.Theycanmakeushappy.Theycanalsohelpusrelaxafterdailyworkandstudy.Whenweareill,hobbiescanhelpusgetwellsoon.That’sall.Thankyouforlistening.【名師談?wù)摗窟@是一篇給資料作文,要求把一次關(guān)于個人愛好問題的談?wù)摃鲆粋€報告.本題所給資料比較簡潔,所以需要自己依照要點組織語言,表達出資料中表現(xiàn)的看法.寫作中注意將同學(xué)們的各自愛好介紹清楚，并說說自己的想法，不要遺漏要點。寫作中注意使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系親密，吻合邏輯關(guān)系【寫作亮點】這是一篇比較不錯的作文。作者依照所給內(nèi)容要點，做了簡潔簡要的發(fā)言，層次特其他清楚。短文中需要作者自己補充的內(nèi)容完成得也不錯。WangPengisfondoflisteningtothemusic.AndIenjoyreadingbooksandswimming等。B（10分）三年的初中生活，你對自己的表現(xiàn)必然有滿意的方面和不滿意的方面。假如你是林微，請參照以下提示，給你的學(xué)弟學(xué)妹們用英語寫一篇畢業(yè)留言，希望對們有所幫助。提示內(nèi)容提示詞對自己滿意的方面勤學(xué)好問，養(yǎng)成優(yōu)異的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣；workhard,agoodhabitof對自己不滿意的方忙于學(xué)習(xí)，鍛煉身體較少；bebusy,dolesssports面對學(xué)弟學(xué)妹的建議樂于助人，積極參加志愿者活動；begladto,volunteer或希望activities注意：1、參照提示合適發(fā)揮；2、文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的地名、校名、人名；3、詞數(shù)80詞左右（開頭和結(jié)尾部分已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）。11/13Dearboysandgirls,I’mLinWei.It’smyhonortosharewhatIhavegotandlostinthepastthreeyears.___