2011年高考英語(yǔ)滿分作文7652

201130A．寫(xiě)人：1．OurEnglishTeacherOurEnglishteacher,MsHuang,cametoourschoolin1970.ShehasbeenanEnglishteacherformorethan30years.beenamodelteacherformanyyears.SheworkshardandhasSheiskindandfriendlytousafterclass,butSheisratherstrictwithusinclass.ShealwaysencouragesustospeakandreadmoreEnglish.Sheoftensays,"Practicemakesperfect."Sheisgoodatteachingandtriesherbesttomakeeverylessonlivelyandinteresting.Sheoftengivesusslideshows,teachesusEnglishsongsandhelpsustoputonshortEnglishplays.Sheisnotonlyourteacherbutalsoourfriend.Weallrespectandloveher.Tomorrowsheisgoingtoattendanimportantmeeting,atwhichshewillbegivenamedalforheradvanceddeeds.2．MyEnglishTeacherOurEnglishteacher,Mr.Wang,isastronglybuiltthirty-year-oldman,whoisoftensimplydressed.HehasbeenteachingusEnglisheversincehegraduatedfromtheEnglishDepartment,BeijingNormalUniversityin1993.Hedevotesallhistimeandenergytoteaching,oftenworkinglateintothenightpreparinghislessons.Heiscapableofmakinghislessonslivelyandinteresting,andallofuslikehislessons.Heisverystrictwithusbutheshowsusgreatconcern.Heoffersushelpwheneverweneedit.Weallconsiderhimnotonlyasourgoodteacherbutalsoasourclosefriend.Weallrespectandlovehim.B．寫(xiě)物：3．OurschoolOurschoolislocatedatthecentreofBeijing,Itisoneofthelargestschoolsinthecitywithover2,000studentsandabout200teachers.Ourschoolsubjectsincludepolitics,Chinese,English,maths,history,geography,physics,chemistryandbiologyandsoon.MostofuspaygreatattentiontothestudyofEnglish,Chineseandmathsbecausetheyareveryimportantsubjectsintheuniversityentranceexam.WetakespecialinterestinEnglish.Wehavespentmuchtimeonit,butwestillfinditdifficulttolearnthelanguagewell.Intheafternoonwhenclassisover,weenjoystayingatschoolforaboutonehourforsomephysicalexercisesbeforeleavingforhome.4．MyHomeVillageMyhomevillageisasmallone.It'sinYuxiancountyofShanxiProvince.Smallasitis,it'sverybeautiful.Therearemanyhillsaroundmyhomevillageandtheyaremorebeautifulthansomebigmountains.Inspring,wecanflykiteswhicharemadebyourselvesonthetopofthehills.Thekitesflyveryhigh.Insummer,thetreesaregreenandthegrassisgreen,too.Itisgreeneverywhereonthehills.Therearesomanywildappletreesonthehills.Thewildapplesarenicetoeat.Inautumn,thecornsunderandaroundthehillsareripe.Soweeatthemalmosteveryday.Inwinter,whenitsnows,allthegroundiscoveredwithsnow.Wecanplaywithsnowandsometimesweeatthecleansnowwithsugar.Inmyhometowntheskyisblue,theairisclean,thewaterissweetandthepeopleareveryfriendly.Ilovemyhometown!5．ChangesinOurLifeOverthepasttwentyyearsorso,greatchangeshavetakenplaceinourlife.Takemyfamilyforexample.Myparentscontactedothersmainlybysendingthemlettersinthepast.Butnowwecalllongdistanceathome.Andoncemyparentslistenedtotheradiofornewsandotherinformation.ButnowwegetthenewsbywatchingTV.Anotherbigchangeisinmylivingconditions.Whentheygotmarriedabouttwentyyearsago,myparentslivedinasmallroomcrowdedwithfurniture.Butnowwehavemovedintoabignewthree-roomapartment.Inshort,ourlifehasbecomecomfortableandconvenient.C．日記：6．AGoodDeedOct.19thTuesdayFineOneafternoon,onmywayhome,Isawanaccident:acarhitanoldman!Ishoutedtothepedestriansforhelp,butnoonestopped.Whenthecardriversawthis,hequicklyclosedthewindowOfthecaranddroveaway."WhatshallIdo?Theoldmanneedshelp."Ithought.Atthattime,atruckstoppedandoutcamethedriver."What'swrongwiththeoldman,boy?WhatcouldIdo?"thedriveraskedme."Uncle,pleasehelptheoldman.Acarhithimandheisbadlyinjured!"Isaid."Well,don'tworry.Letmedriversaid.takehimtothehospital.''theAfewminuteslater,thedrivertooktheoldmantothehospitalandItelephonedthepolicestation.ItoldthewholestorytothepoliceandIalsotoldthemthenumberofthecar.Thepolicesaidtome,"Welldone,boy!Leaveittous.Hemustbepunished!"ThenIwenttothehospitaltoseetheoldman.WhenIgothome,itwas7:30.IthinkwhatIdidwasfight.D．書(shū)信：(1)你堂兄建華在國(guó)外學(xué)習(xí)，你們經(jīng)常用英文通信。他即將完成學(xué)業(yè)，不久前來(lái)信就是否回國(guó)工作征求你的意見(jiàn)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示回信。1．建議他回國(guó)。2．你的理由是：學(xué)有所用，就業(yè)容易；照顧父母。注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；2．行文應(yīng)連貫，內(nèi)容應(yīng)完整；3．開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好。DearJianHua,I'mverygladtohavereceivedtheletteryousentmetwoweeksago.ToJianHuaDearJianHua,I'mverygladtohavereceivedtheletteryousentmetwoweeksago.I'vebeenthinkingaboutthequestionyouaskedme.Inmyopinion,youshouldcomebackafteryoufinishyourstudiesabroad.Foronereason,whatyouarestudyingisbadlyneedednowadaysinChina.Itwillbequiteeasyforyoutofindagoodjob.Infact,Iknowafewbigcompaniesinourcityarehopingtoemploypeoplelikeyou.Foranotherreason,Ithinkitwillbemuchmoreconvenientforyoutolookafteryourparentsastheyaregettingold.Therefore,Ithinkit'sagoodideaforyoutoreturn.Sowhatareyouwaitingfor?Bestwishes;MingHua(2)2005年春季Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.你叫李宏，你校在為一批來(lái)自加拿大的交流學(xué)生征尋為期兩周的住宿家庭。你有意申請(qǐng)，寫(xiě)封信說(shuō)明你申請(qǐng)的理由。(包括所具備的條件)。2005春季范文Dearsir,IhearthatourschoolwillwelcomesomeCanadianstudentstostaywithusforortwoweeks.Studentswhowanttocantakepartinit.Iwanttotry.invitethemtostayFirst,myparentsandIcanspeakEnglishwell.Thatbenefitsustocommunicatewitheachother.Second,ourhouseisbigenoughforheorshetostay.Furthermore,IliveneartheHuangpuRiver.IthasagoodviewofShanghai.Lastbutnotleast,inmyhome,heorshewillenjoymuchChinaculture.Mygrandpaandgrandmaaregoodathandwriting.MygrandmaalsohasagoodskillinChinesepainting.Ithinkourfriendlywillgivehimabothinterestingandcomfortableexperience.Thankyouforyourreadingduringyourbusywork..Ihopethatyouwillagreewithme.Yourssincerely,LiHong(3)假如你是王華，18歲生日后，真的有種長(zhǎng)大成人的感覺(jué)。于是你想就父母對(duì)你的關(guān)懷和你今后的打算，以書(shū)信形式同爸爸媽媽談?wù)?。信的開(kāi)頭如下：DearMumandDad,Howareyoudoing?范文DearMumandDad,Howareyoudoing?I’mwritingtoyouaboutmygratitudeforyourhavingbroughtmeupandmyfutureplan.DearMumandDad,Iamalready18yearsold,whichshowsthatIhavegrownup.WheneverIamthinkingofthis,Ican’thelpfeelinggratefultoyou.ItisyouwhofirstgivemeencouragementwhenImeetwithdifficulties,especiallywhenIamnotgettingalongwellwithmystudies.Indeed,yourinspirationseemstobealamp,whichoffersmelightofhope,courageandconfidence.Andmoreimportantly,youarealwaysteachingmetobegoodtoothers,andtrytocontributetooursociety.DearMumandDad,Iannowaseniorthreestudent,whoisfacingthecompetitivenationalcollegeentranceexaminations,Sofirstofall,Ioughttotrymybesttopasstheexams.IamsurethatthroughmygreateffortsIcanandwillbeabletorealizemybeautifuldreamofbeingakeyuniversitystudent.Then,Iwillstrivetobeanindependentyouth.Themustbemorecompetitive,soIwilldevelopandpreparemyselftobeayouthwithastrongsenseofcooperationandcompetition.Believeinme,MumandDad,Iwillmakeadifference.socialsituationIwillbefacingBestregardstoyou.Yourssincerely,WangHua(4)求職信DearSirorMadam,Ihavelearnedfromanadvertisementthatyourcompanyisinneedofasecretary.Iwouldlikeyoutoconsidermefortheposition.MynameisLiMin.Iamtwenty-threeyearsold.IamstudyingbusinessmanagementinXiamenUniversity.Iwillgraduatethissummer.Iamfamiliarwithcomputeroperationandofficesoftwares,whichcanhelpmedotheofficeworkverywell.AndIhavelearnedEnglishfortenyears.Inthepasttwoyears,IhavebeenaneditorfortheEnglishPaperofmydepartment.Mygradescomeouttopinmydepartment.What'smore,IlikeofficeworkverymuchandIalsothinkthatIcanbecompetentforthejob.IfIcouldhavetheopportunitytogetthejobIwillbequiteappreciative.Thankyouforyourconsideration.Ilookforwardtohearingfromyou.YoursfaithfullyLiMinE．說(shuō)明文：HowPeopleSpentTheirHolidaysAscanbeseenfromthetable,greatchangestookplaceinthewaysthatpeoplespenttheirholidaysovertheperiodfromtheyear1990to1999.Theproportionoftravelingabroadandcampingwasincreasingsteadily,from12%to24%andfrom10%to36%separately,whilethatofstayingathomeandgoingtotheseasidewasdecreasingyearbyyear,from38%to31%andfrom40%to9%separately.Whyweretherechanges?Ithinkpeoplecannowadaysaffordtraveling.Also,peopleprefertopursueahigh-qualityandcolorfullife.Sowecanseethatpeople＇slivingstandardhasbeenrisinggreatly.F．議論文(1)最近，你校同學(xué)正在參加某英文報(bào)組織的一場(chǎng)討論。討論的主題是：公園要不要收門(mén)票?請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表所提供的信息，給報(bào)社寫(xiě)一封信，客觀地介紹討論情況。60％的同學(xué)認(rèn)為:1．不應(yīng)該收門(mén)票2公園是公眾休閑的地方3.如收門(mén)票，需建大門(mén)、圍墻，會(huì)影響城市形象40％的同學(xué)認(rèn)為:1．應(yīng)收門(mén)票，但票價(jià)不要太高2．支付園林工人工資3．購(gòu)新花木注意：1．信的開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好。2．詞數(shù)：100左右。3．參考詞匯：門(mén)票---entrancefeeDeareditor,I’mwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionwehavehadaboutwhetheranentrancefeeshouldbechargedforparks.60%ofusschoolmatesthinkthatanentrancefeedonotmeetpeople’sexpectations,foraparkisconsideredtobeaplacewherethepubliccanhaveagoodtimewhentheyarenotbusyeitherathomeoratwork.Ifanentrancefeemustbepaidbythevisitorsforapark,itwillbenecessarytobuildagateandsurroundingwalls.Intheendacitywilltakeonabadlook.40%ofusschoolmatesthinkthatanentrancefeecanbeaccepted,butitmustnotbetooexpensive.Themoneyfromticketsellingcanbeusedforpayingthegardenersintheparkandbuyingsomeotherkindsofflowersandtrees.Withregardtomyself,Ithinkanentrancefeeisuseful,foritcanbeusedtoprotectapark.Dowesharethesameopinion,deareditor?Yourstruly,LiHuaDeareditor,I’mwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionwehavehadaboutwhetheranentrancefeeshouldbechargedforparks.Sixtypercentofmyschoolmatesarefortheideathatanentrancefeeshouldnotbeforcedonthepublic.Theybelieveparksaretheplacewherethepublicenjoythemselvesattheirleisure.Theythinkthatagateandwailsaretobebuiltifanentrancefeeistobecharged.Thecitywillnotlooksobeautifulasitshouldhave.FortypercentofmyschoolmatesarefortheideathatanentrancefeeisOK,butitshouldn’tbeoutofcontrol.Entrancefeecanbeusedtopaythegardenersandbuynewtypesofflowersandtrees.Formyself,I’dliketosaythatifweallworkhardtobuildourcityintoaflowergarden,whocaresabouttheentrancefeeforparks?DearEditor,I'mwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussiononwhetheranentrancefeeshouldbechargedforparks.Opinionsvaryfrompersontopersononthisissue.50%ofthestudentsdisagreewiththeideaofentrancefees.Intheiropinion,parksarepublicplaceswhereallthepeoplecanhavearestandenjoythemselves.Soifanentrancefeeischarged,somepeoplewillsurelybekeptawayfromthepark.Besides,inordertochargeentrancefees,gatesandwallsmustbebuilt.Theythinkthatitwilldoharmtotheappearanceofacity.40%ofthestudentsagreewiththeideaofentrancefees,becausethegardenersneedtobepaidandnewplantsandButfeesshouldbechargedreasonably.flowersneedtobebought.Yourstruly,XXXDearEditor,I'mwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussiononwhetheranentrancefeeshouldbechargedforparks.Opinionsvaryfrompersontopersononthisissue.60%ofthestudentsopposetheideaofentrancefees.Theybelieveeveryonecangotoparksforrestandfunbecauseparksarepublicplaces.Butanentrancefeemaykeepsomepeopleawayfromthepark.Besides,inordertochargeentrancefees,itisnecessarytobuildgatesandwalls,whichwilldoharmtotheappearanceofacity.40%ofthestudentsapproveoftheideaofentrancefees,becausemoneyisneededtopaythegardenersandtobuynewplantsandflowers.Butfeesshouldbechargedreasonably.Yourstruly,(2)DearHeadmaster,Astheministerofstudents'lifeintheStudentUnion,Iamwritingtoyoutoreflectsomethingaboutourcanteen.Tooursatisfaction,thecanteensuppliesuswithvariouskindsoffood.Thisgivesusmanychoices.Atthesametimethepriceforthefoodislowandthefoodistasty.Andthesurroundingsforhavingamealhavebeenimproved.Thecanteenhasbecomeclean.Andwhenweareeating,wecanwatchTV.Butsomethingunsatisfactoryexists,too.Forexample,thequantityofahelpingislessthanitshouldbe.Thisisunfair.Andinthecanteen,theseatsarenotenough.Somestudentshavetostandwhileeating.Wehopethattheschoolwillconsideraddingmoreseatsforus.Finallywehopethattheycanimprovethequalityofthefoodandtheirservice.Wewillbeveryhappyifouradviceistaken.Yoursrespectfully,(3)OnMoneyMoneyisindeedimportant,butmoneycannotbuyeverything.Amisermaythinkthat“moneytalks,”butifyouonlygiveyourattentiontomakingmoney,youmaylosemanythings,suchashealth,friendshipandlove.Idon'tthinkweshouldregardmoneyaseverything.Moneyisjustatoolthatcanhelpussolveproblemsorenableustoliveacomfortablelife.Whatweshoulddoistouseitappropriatelyandnotbecomemisers.Thisway,allofuscanleadahappierlives.(4)假設(shè)今天你上網(wǎng),點(diǎn)擊進(jìn)入"今日話題"網(wǎng)站.看到一則有關(guān)禁止學(xué)生在校園內(nèi)使用手機(jī)的報(bào)道.網(wǎng)友們對(duì)此各抒己見(jiàn).作為一名高中生,你對(duì)此頗感興趣,就在該欄目下發(fā)帖,客觀反映周?chē)瑢W(xué)們對(duì)此的不同看法并簡(jiǎn)單談?wù)勀愕目捶?(100字左右)以下為同學(xué)們的看法:贊同:便于聯(lián)系,有安全感,功能(function)多樣不贊同:便于聯(lián)系非必需，因有IC卡電話,玩游戲，發(fā)短信(e--massage),耗時(shí)費(fèi)錢(qián)你的觀點(diǎn)Justnow,Ienteredthewebsite—"TopicforToday".Ifeelinterestedinthereportonbanningtheuseofthecell-phoneoncampusinmiddleschools.Onepossibleversion:Justnow,Ienteredthewebsite--"TopicforToday".Ifeelinterestedinthereportonbanningtheuseofcell-phonesoncampusinmiddleschools.Infact,morestudentsnowcometoschoolwithcell-phones.Myschoolmateshavedifferentopinions.Somethinkitisconvenienttogetintouchwithotherswiththecell-phone,whichalsomakesyoufeelsafeespeciallyintimeoftrouble.Besides,itisnicetoenjoyvariousfunctionsofdifferentcell-phones.Othersthinkdifferently.First,thecellphoneinnotamustinschool,astherearesomeICphonesthere,makingiteasytocallothers.Second,manyoftenplaye-gamesandsende-massageswiththeircell-phones,eveninclass,whichwillsurelyhavebadeffectsontheirstudy.Worseistocome,itwillresultinagreatwasteoftimeandmoney.Inmyopinion,thecell-phoneisausefultoolinourdailylife.Butitdoesn'tmeanwecanusefreelyinschool.(5)三班的學(xué)生進(jìn)行了一場(chǎng)有關(guān)大學(xué)生是否應(yīng)該打工的討論。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面表中的提示寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，介紹討論的情況。一些同學(xué)另一些同學(xué)認(rèn)為打工會(huì)影響大學(xué)生的學(xué)認(rèn)為習(xí)；改變正確的人生觀；甚至?xí)顾麄兂绨萁疱X(qián)打工可以減輕父母的負(fù)擔(dān)；同時(shí)使大學(xué)生獲得社會(huì)經(jīng)驗(yàn);發(fā)展個(gè)人能力；豐富學(xué)習(xí)生活注意：1．字?jǐn)?shù)：100左右；2．不必逐條翻譯，可進(jìn)行合理發(fā)揮。3．參考詞匯：打工lakeapart-timejob人生觀lifeview負(fù)擔(dān)loadThestudentsofClass3hadadiscussionaboutwhethercollegestudentsshouldtakepart-timejobs.Somestudentsthinkitisadvantageforcollegestudentstotakepart-timejobs.Because,bydoingpart-timejobs,theycanearnmoneyontheirownsothattheydon’tneedtoasktheirparentsformoney,andinthisway,theyreducetheirparents’load.Besides,takingpart-timejobscanhelpthemgainsocialexperience,developpersonalabilitiesandmaketheirlifeenjoyable.Onetheotherhand,somestudentshaveadisagreement.Intheiropinion,thestudents’maintaskistostudy,whiletakingpart-timejobshasabadeffectontheirstudy.Andalso,itmaymakecollegestudentschangetheirlifeviewsandtheymaythinktoomuchofmoney.(6)面對(duì)中學(xué)生“出國(guó)熱”，社會(huì)對(duì)此有不同的看法。請(qǐng)你以StudyingAbroad為題，根據(jù)以下提供的信息，談?wù)勛约旱目捶?。Advantages:1.良好的語(yǔ)言環(huán)境，更利于語(yǔ)言學(xué)習(xí)。2.拓寬視野，學(xué)習(xí)國(guó)外先進(jìn)的科學(xué)技術(shù)。3.傳播各民族間的不同文化。Disadvantages:1.年紀(jì)小，缺乏生活經(jīng)驗(yàn)，自理能力差。2.情感孤獨(dú)，思鄉(xiāng)。3.生活學(xué)習(xí)費(fèi)用高。注意：1）第一句已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。2詞）數(shù)100左右。3參）考詞匯：媒介，中間人mediatorStudyingAbroadInrecentyears,studyingabroadhasbeenpopular.TensofthousandsofChinesestudentshavegonetoforeigncountriestostudy.Manypeoplearetryingtheirbesttoapplytogoabroad.Therearemanyadvantagesinattendingschoolsabroad.First,studentswhohavestudiedabroadcanactasmediatorsbetweenpeopleofdifferentcultures.Second,wecanlearnmuchmoreadvancedknowledgeofscienceandtechnologyfromforeigncountries.Third,wecanlearnforeignlanguagesmorequickly.However,therearesomedisadvantages.Mostofthestudentsaretooyoungtolivebythemselveswithoutanylivingexperience.Besides,beingfarawayfromtheirhomecountry,theymayfeellonelyandhomesick.Ofcoursethecostsaremuch.(7)OnnetbarsWiththedevelopmentoftheInternet,thenetbarplaysanimportantroleinpeople'slife.Moreandmorepeople,especiallystudents,liketogotonetbars.Theyareabsorbedinplayingvideogames,makingbadfriendsandhavingachatwith"Meimei"onthenetinthebar.Somestudentsoftengoonplayinglateintothenightinthenetbar.Asaresult,notonlydoesitdoharmtotheirhealthbutalsoproducesabadeffectontheirstudies.NowalotofnetbarshavebeenshutdowninBeijing.Butsomestudentsgobybustothenetbarsatsuburbstoplay.Fortunately,moreandmoreparentsandschoolshaverealizedit.Recently,morethansixthousandstudentsensuredthattheywouldbefarawayfromnetbarsinJinzhoucity,LiaoningProvince.Itisquitenecessaryforthestudentstogetridofthebadhabit.Recently,moreandmorestudentswouldliketogotonetbars,especiallystudents.Ithasbecomequitecommontogothere.Theywastetoomuchprecioustimeonplayingvideogamesinthenetbar.Asaresult,notonlydoesitdoharmtotheirhealthbutalsoproducesabadeffectontheirstudies.Theirhealthbecomesworseandworseandtheirstudiesareneglected.NowalotofnetbarshavebeenshutdowninBeijing.Butsomestudentsgotothenetbarsatsuburbstoplay.Fortunately,moreandmoreparentsandschoolshaverealizedit.Recently,morethansixthousandstudentsensuredthattheywouldbefarawayfromnetbarsinJinzhoucity,LiaoningProvince.Moststudentsaremakingfulluseoftheirtimeanddevotingthemselvestotheirstudies.Itisagoodthing.F．看圖作文：(1)假設(shè)你是李華，你的英國(guó)筆友Bob將于九月到你所在城市的建新華文學(xué)校學(xué)中文，來(lái)信請(qǐng)你在學(xué)校附近為他找一套住房。請(qǐng)根據(jù)圖畫(huà)提供的信息，寫(xiě)信介紹住房的情況，并告知住房面積為25平方米，月租500元。注意：1．詞數(shù)：100左右：2．參考詞匯：房租—Tent(n.).I’mveryhappytoreceiveyourletter,andI’mgladtohearthatyouwillgotoChinatolearnChinesehere.Ihavealreadyfoundafiatforyou.ItisonFangcaoStreet,whichisnotfarfromJianxinChineseSchool.BusNo.11cantakeyouthere,anditisonestopbeforetheChineseSchool.Theflatisonthethirdfloorwith3rooms,oneofwhichisbedroom,theothertwoarebathroomandkitchen.Thereareabed,asofa,adeskandsomechairsinthis25square-metressmallflat,andtherentis500yuanpermonth.Maybethisfiatisnotasgoodasyourwish,butI’lltrymybesttomeetyourneeds.Ifitisnotsuitableenough,writetomeandIwilllookforanotherbetterplace.Hopeyouwillcomeheresoon!Allthebest!Yours,LiHua滿分理由本文格式正確，意思表述完整，行文流暢自然。作者在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中注意長(zhǎng)短句并用，還使用了以‘which，’引導(dǎo)的非限定性定語(yǔ)從句，從而使文章層次分明，富于變化，不愧為考場(chǎng)佳作。DearBob,WelcometoChina!Youwrotetometofindaplaceforyou.IhavefoundanapartmentonFangcaoStreetnearJianxinChineseSchool.Itisonthethirdfloorandthere’rethreeroomsinit:abedroom,akitchen,andabathroom.Thereisabed,asofa,adeskandachairinthebedroom.Thehouseis25squaremetresandtherentis500yuanpermonth.Alsofromthishouseyoucangettoyourschooleasily.JusttaketheNo.11busatthebus-stopinfrontofthebuilding.Itisonlyonestop.Atlast,willyoupleasetellmethetimeyouarrive?ThenI’Ubeabletomeetyouattheairport,seeyou.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua滿分理由本文格式正確，內(nèi)容完整，表述清楚，銜接緊密流暢，時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)態(tài)使用準(zhǔn)確，特別是結(jié)尾末段適度的發(fā)揮，既充實(shí)了內(nèi)容，又符合邏輯，成為本文與眾不同的亮點(diǎn)。DearBob,Howareyouthesedays?I’msogladtoknowthatyou’llcometoourcitytolearnChinese.Youaskedmetofindaplaceforyou.NowI’vefoundonewhichIthinkisprettygood.TheplaceisonFangCaoStreetwhichisneartheNo.11busstop.It’sjustonestopawayfromJianxinChineseSchool.Therearethreerooms,akitchen,abathroomandabedroom.Thoughitisnotverybig,only25squaremetres,Ithinkitissuitable.Bytheway,therentis500yuanpermonth.Ihopeyou’lllikeit.Ifnot,I’lltrytofindanotherplaceforyou.Yours,LiHua滿分理由本文內(nèi)在邏輯性很強(qiáng)，由遠(yuǎn)及近。由外及內(nèi)，層次分明，錯(cuò)落有致。同時(shí)讓步狀語(yǔ)從句運(yùn)用得恰到好處，很出彩，再則結(jié)構(gòu)完整，從開(kāi)頭的問(wèn)候語(yǔ)到結(jié)尾都很完備。(2)請(qǐng)看下面的這幅漫畫(huà)，再聯(lián)想實(shí)際生活，寫(xiě)一篇短文，詞數(shù)120左右。題目：Don’tWasteWaterDon'tWasteWaterAmaniswashinghisclothes,regardlessofthenoticeabove"SavetheWaterPlease."Aswesee,wateristhesourceoflife.Butthereisverylimitedavailablewaterresourcesinourworld.Soweshouldn'twasteit.Ofcourse,wehavetouseittodrink,cook,wash,cleanandetc.Butwemustremembernottouseitextravagantly.Ifwedidn'tstopsuchwastefulhabits,wewouldcutoffthedevelopmentoftheworldandthehumanlife.E．其他：(1)CompanionshipofBooksAmanmayusuallybeknownbythebookshereadsaswellasbythecompanyhekeeps:forthereisacompanionshipofbooksaswellasofmen;andoneshouldalwaysliveinthebestcompany,whetheritbeofbooksorofmen.Agoodbookmaybeamongthebestoffriends.Itisthesametodaythatitalwayswas,anditwillneverchange.Itisthemostpatientandcheerfulofcompanions.Itdoesnotturnitsbackuponusintimesoftroubleordistress.Italwaysreceivesuswiththesamekindness,amusingandinstructingusinyouth,andcomfortingusinage.Bookspossessanextracthavingthefundamentalpropertiesofimmortality.Theyarebyfarthemostlastingproductsofhumaneffort.Templesandstatuesdecay,butbookssurvive.Timeisofnoaccountwithgreatthoughts,whichareasfreshtodayaswhentheyfirstpassedthroughtheirauthor'smindsagesago.Theonlyeffectoftimehasbeentosiftoutthebadproducts,fornothinginliteraturecanlongsurvivebutwhatisreallygood.Booksintroduceusintothebestsociety:theybringusintothepresenceofthegreatestmindsthathaveeverlived.Wehearwhattheysaidanddid.weseethemasiftheywerereallyalive;wesympathizewiththem,enjoywiththem,hurtwiththem;theirexperiencebecomesours,andwefeelasifwewere,inameasure,actorswiththeminthesceneswhichtheydescribe.Thegreatandgooddonotdieeveninthisworld.Embalmedinbooks,theirspiritswalkabroad.Thebookisalivingvoice.Itisanintellecttowhichonestilllistens.Henceweeverremainundertheinfluenceofthegreatmenofold.Thegreatintellectsoftheworldareasmuchalivenowastheywereagesago.(2)HowtoKeepHealthyNowadaysmoreandmorepeopleareconcernedabouttheirhealth.Buthowtokeephealthy?Differentpeoplemaygivedifferentanswerstothisquestion.Inmyopinion,itisessentialtodothefollowing.First,itisabsolutelynecessarytotakesomeexerciseeveryday.Researchshowsthatgettingplentyofexercisemaketheheartbeatfasterandthelungsworkharder.Thisstrengthenstheheart,reducesthechanceofheartattack,andhelpslowerbloodpressure.That'swhymoreandmorepeoplearebecomingactiveinvariouskindsofsportsandexercises.Everymorningmanypeoplegetupearlyandtakemuchexercise.Somepracticesha