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TheeventthatstandsoutinTom’smemoryhaorningwhenTomwasonlytenyearsoldHewasathomewithhiseldersisterJaneTomwasdoinghishomeworwhenheheardraisedvoicesAtfirsthethoughtnothingofitsincecustomersinthemotorcycleshoeloud,buthesoonrealiedthistimeitwasdifferent

“Quic!Quic!Removethemotorcyclesfromtheshoeoneshouted

ThenathicburningsmellfilledtheairWhenTomooegreetedhimThemotorcyclesho,hurriedtothelivingroomTheyrushedoutofthedoorandalongthecorridorthroughthesmoe

Theywereheadingtowardsthestairwayatthefarendofthecorridor走廊whenJanesuddenlystoeTomhadnoideawhatshewasdoing,buthejustfollowed

Janesuddenlyrememberedthe70-year-oldladynetdoortothem,whotheycalledMaciJanebeganbangingonMaci’sdoor,butgotnoanswerAsthesmoethicenedaroundthem,Tomcouldseemanyoftheirneighbors---somestillintheiras睡衣---runningforsafetyThethoughtoffearcrossedhismind

“Shecouldhaverunforsafetylieeveryoneelse!”TomcriedHowever,Janerefusedtogiveuaci’sstillinside,”shesaidshewasfamiliarwithMaci’sdailyroutineandwascertainshewouldstillbesleepingShepounded重?fù)?；撞擊thedoor,“GodownstairsGonow!Go!”

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