【課件】讀后續(xù)寫The+Story+of+Atlanta課件-人教版（2019）必修第二冊

1Readthewordsbeforeclass:Greek希臘的

princess公主prince王子

allow允許

marry結(jié)婚runagainst與...跑步比賽

pardon原諒

promise

允諾runpast超過pickup撿起

makeabargainwithsb.與某人討價還價

2ContinuationWriting（四）3考察方式

滿分25分。

提供一段350詞左右的語言材料，要求考生依據(jù)該材料內(nèi)容、所給段落開頭語進(jìn)行續(xù)寫(150詞左右)，將其發(fā)展成一篇與給定材料有邏輯銜接、情節(jié)和結(jié)構(gòu)完整的短文。4材料特點

故事性強，主題有一定的背景，材料有趣味性，內(nèi)容能延伸，能激發(fā)學(xué)生的想象力和續(xù)寫沖動。閱讀材料難度適當(dāng)，易于理解和模仿。56如何寫好續(xù)寫中的4個關(guān)鍵句？3個銜接句1個主題句---Howtocontinuewritingastory閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。

The

Story

of

AtlantaAtlantawasaGreekprincess.ShewasverybeautifulandcouldrunfasterthananymaninGreece.ButshewasnotallowedtorunorwingloryforherselfintheOlympicGames.Shewassoangrythatshesaidtoherfatherthatshewouldnotmarryanyonewhocouldnotrunfasterthanher.Herfathersaidthatshemustmarry,soAtlantamadeabargainwithhim.Shesaidtohim,“Thesearemyrules.Whenamansayshewantstomarryme,Iwillrunagainsthim.Ifhecannotrunasfastasme,hewillbekilled.Noonewillbepardoned.”ManykingsandprinceswantedtomarryAtlanta,butwhentheyheardofherrulestheyknewitwashopeless.Somanyofthemsadlywenthome,butothersstayedtoruntherace.TherewasamancalledHippomeneswhowasamazedwhenheheardofAtlanta’srules.“Whyarethesemensofoolish?”hethought.“Whywilltheyletthemselvesbekilledbecausetheycannotrunasfastasthisprincess?”However,whenhesawAtlantacomeoutofherhousetorun,Hippomeneschangedhismind.“IwillmarryAtlanta—ordie!”hesaid.Theracestartedandalthoughthemenranveryfast,Atlantaranfaster.AsHippomeneswatched,hethought,“HowcanIrunasfastasAtlanta?”HewenttoasktheGreekGoddessofLoveforhelp.Shepromisedtohelphimandgavehimthreegoldenapples.Shesaid,“ThrowanappleinfrontofAtlantawhensheisrunningpast.Whenshestopstopickitup,youwillbeabletorunpastherandwin.”

注意:(1)續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;(2)請按如下格式作答。Hippomenestooktheapplesandwenttotheking.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________.Whentheracebegan,Atlantaranpasthim.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.7解題思路？讀---續(xù)---寫AtlantaHippomenesGoddessofLove1.ReadforCharactersandtheplotWhathappenedtothem?theKing8讀

SkimmingRead

thetextandtrytoanswerthefollowingquestions:(1)WhowasAtlanta?(2)WhatwereAtlanta’s

rules?(3)WhatwereHippomenes'attitudes(態(tài)度)towardstherace?(4)WhodidHippomenesaskforhelp?(5)WhatdidtheGreekGoddessofLoveadviseHippomenestodo?9(1)Who

wasAtlanta?AtlantawasabeautifulGreekprincess.(2)WhatwereAtlanta’s

rules?Whenamansayshewantsto_______her,shewillrun_________him.Ifhecannotrun____fast____her,hewillbe______.Noonewillbe__________.marryagainstasaskilledpardoned10(3)WhatwereHippomenes'attitudes(態(tài)度)towardstherace?Whyarethesemenso

foolish?Whywilltheyletthemselvesbekilled

becausetheycannotrunasfastasthisprincess?IwillmarryAtlanta---ordie!AtfirstAfterhesawAtlanta11AncientGreekprincessWealthy,pretty，goodatrunning…Shewasbeautiful;herbeautymadeThewholeworlddim.她是如此美麗，她的美使整個世界黯然失色。12(4)Who

didHippomenesaskforhelp?(5)WhatdidtheGreekGoddessofLove

advise

Hippomenestodo?Throwan______infrontofAtlantawhensheisrunning______.Whenshestopsto______itup,hewillbeabletorunpastherandwin.applepastpickGoddessofLove132.ReadfortheelementsSetting(time&place)CharactersMaincharacters:Othercharacters:Plot(Story)ConflictClimaxEndingAtlanta,

Hippomenestheking,GoddessofloveAncientGreecemarryAtlantabekilled14讀Hippomeneswantedto____________.Heaskedforhelp

_______________________.runfaster,or_______;marryheror___diefromtheGreekGoddessofLove3.PredictthedevelopmentHippomenestooktheapplesandwenttotheKing.?15續(xù)Hesaid,“___wantto______Atlanta.”__________werereadyto___.ImarryBothofthemrunWhat’stheendofthestory?________stoppedto____________onebyone.16續(xù)Whentheracebegan,Atlantaranpasthim.__________threwthegolden_____oneafteranotherinfrontof______.gotmarriedPairdisscussion:Whatmayhappenlater?HippomenesapplesAtlantaAtlantapickthemup第一步：寫好三個_______第1句：第一段________的銜接句。第2句：第一段______（須與第二段首句銜接）。第3句：第二段________的銜接句?！舨呗裕篟ule1:

讓提示句的____繼續(xù)成為續(xù)寫的第一句的___.Rule2:

讓提示句的某個關(guān)鍵詞成為一個新的____。Rule3：讓續(xù)寫1尾句的____和續(xù)寫2首句____一致，使得段落連貫一致。第二步：寫好一個______。即第二段的尾句，即文尾句.（能體現(xiàn)故事圓滿結(jié)局，或故事給我們的啟示）重難點銜接句首句后尾句首句后主語主語主語17主語主語主題句寫4個關(guān)鍵句18七三四法則一、七個“不”1、不增加人物2、不增加旁支情節(jié)3、不用過多對話4、不用負(fù)能量結(jié)局5、不在文末設(shè)置懸念6、不偏離原文主題7、不違背邏輯常理二、三個原則1、原文一致原則2、正能量原則3、曲折性原則三、四個步驟1、讀懂大意，理清文章脈絡(luò)2、細(xì)度句首，構(gòu)思框架3、增加細(xì)節(jié)，開始寫作4、修改潤色，整齊謄寫Hippomenestooktheapplesandwenttotheking.Whentheracebegan,Atlantaranpasthim.He

said,“I

want

to

marry

Atlanta.”HippomenesandAtlantawerereadytorun.Hippomenes

threw

the

golden

apples

one

after

another

in

front

of

her.第一段尾句（須與第二段首句銜接）As

a

result,

Atlanta

married

him

and

they

lived

happily

ever

after.194.Writethelist

續(xù)寫情節(jié)內(nèi)容大綱Hippomenestooktheapplesandwenttotheking.Whentheracebegan,Atlantaranpasthim.He

said,“I

want

to

marry

Atlanta.”HippomenesandAtlantawerereadytorun.Hippomenes

threw

the

golden

apples

one

after

another

in

front

of

her.As

a

result,

Atlanta

married

him

and

they

lived

happily

ever

after.5.Expandtheplot拓展情節(jié)theking或Atlanta聽后的反應(yīng)Atlanta看到金蘋果的反應(yīng)和比賽結(jié)果ThekingadvisedhimtogiveupandAtlantaalsosaid,“theraceiscancelledtoday.”

Atlantastoppedtopickeduptheapples,andHippomenes

ranpastherandwontherace.206.PolishtheWriting

(1)續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;(2)請按如下格式作答。Hippomenestooktheapplesandwenttotheking.___________________________________________________________________