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大題10讀后續(xù)寫
》明考情-笈方向》?
歷年考情
體裁:讀后續(xù)寫的語篇均為記敘文,有部分夾敘夾議。故事性強,情節(jié)有一定起伏,如2022年全國新高
考I卷,作者在越野賽跑前發(fā)現(xiàn)學(xué)生David打算放棄比賽,情節(jié)由此展開,吸引讀者并為續(xù)寫留下空間。
難度:文章詞匯和語法難度適中,高中生通過日常學(xué)習(xí)積累可理解。但部分文章會出現(xiàn)熟詞生義、地道短
語等增加理解難度,如2024年部分真題中出現(xiàn)的一些特定情境下的詞匯用法。敘事結(jié)構(gòu)上,多遵循時間
或事件發(fā)展順序,邏輯清晰,便于學(xué)生梳理情節(jié)脈絡(luò),但也要求學(xué)生能精準把握細節(jié),為續(xù)寫做準備。
命題規(guī)律
從選材上來看,語篇選材情節(jié)曲折,邏輯性強。讀后續(xù)寫所提供的語篇材料一般是具有正能量而且故事性
比較強的文章。一般來說,文章內(nèi)容通俗易懂,故事線素的邏輯性較強,寫作要求續(xù)寫的部分多是故事的
高潮或結(jié)局。例如2022年全國新高考I卷的讀后續(xù)寫,所給文章講述了作者在一次越野賽跑前發(fā)現(xiàn)學(xué)生David
打算放棄比賽。續(xù)寫部分內(nèi)容大致為了解清楚原因之后,在作者的鼓動下,David勇敢地參加了比賽。
從語言特點上來看,讀后續(xù)寫原材料一般是記敘文,或夾敘夾議類體裁,敘述性語言和描寫性語言相結(jié)合。
語言生動、細膩、富有感情,簡潔樸素,畫面感強。因此,考生在續(xù)寫過程中,應(yīng)該體會原材料故事中的
語言特點,繼而完成語言風(fēng)格契合度高的短文。
考向預(yù)測
預(yù)測2025年高考對于讀后續(xù)寫的考查:
1.難度穩(wěn)中有升:詞匯方面,可能出現(xiàn)更多高級詞匯、學(xué)術(shù)詞匯或特定領(lǐng)域詞匯;語法結(jié)構(gòu)上,長難句、
復(fù)雜句式的比例可能增加,對學(xué)生語法理解和運用能力要求更高。如在故事中出現(xiàn)一些涉及專業(yè)知識(如
科技、藝術(shù))的詞匯,或者使用較多的非謂語動詞、各類從句嵌套的句子。
2.更注重思維考查:在情節(jié)設(shè)計上,要求學(xué)生的續(xù)寫情節(jié)更具創(chuàng)新性、合理性和邏輯性,不能過于平淡或
俗套。同時,對學(xué)生批判性思維的考查可能加強,如要求學(xué)生對故事中的某個觀點、行為進行評價并續(xù)寫
相關(guān)情節(jié),考查學(xué)生獨立思考和分析問題的能力。
◎研大題-梃能力
主題與情節(jié)分析(占比約40二)
語言風(fēng)格與人物情感(占比約30%)
讀后續(xù)寫考點
段■句攫示:段苜句常隱含時間、地點或關(guān)疑動作,需緊扣提示膜開(如“Ju”??Ihejwereabout?ogiveup.「11示精
r4-折).
邏輯銜接(占比約20。。)
:伏第呼應(yīng):需回應(yīng)原文伏筆(如2021年全國2卷中提到的Fm)sleriou5leUcr”需在摟號中N9續(xù)).
5合理結(jié)局:結(jié)局需符合逑《!(如“助人故事-以成功幫助收尾,,倡險故事..以脫院或懣悟結(jié)束).
詞匯豐富性:避免重震用詞(如“hnpp、”—"cklightcd/<?verjoy?r);
語言能力(占比約10%):句式多樣性:交替使用簡單句、然合句、非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)(如Heringthtrnoise,hefroze");
~r
—銜接手段:使用邏輯連接詞(MeMimhik.Houever/EvenlHdly).代詞指代(idthe》)和詞匯發(fā)現(xiàn).
典例
【2024新課標I&II卷】ImetGunteronacold,wetandunforgettableeveninginSeptember.Ihadplannedtofly
toViennaandtakeabustoPragueforaconference.Duetoabigstorm,myflighthadbeendelayedbyanhourand
ahalf.ItoucheddowninViennajust30minutesbeforethedepartureofthelastbustoPrague.ThemomentIgot
offtheplane,Iranlikecrazythroughtheairportbuildingandjumpedintothefirsttaxiontherankwithouta
secondthought.
ThatwaswhenImetGunter.ItoldhimwhereIwasgoingbuthesaidhehadn*theardofthebusstation.I
thoughtmypronunciationwastheproblem,soIexplainedagainmoreslowly,buthestilllookedconfused.WhenI
wasabouttogiveup,Gunterfishedouthislittlephoneandrangupafriend.Afteraheateddiscussionthatlasted
forwhatseemedlikeacentury,Gunterputhisphonedownandstartedthecar.
Finally,withjusttwominutestosparewerolledintothebusstation.Thankfully,therewasalongqueue(隊歹!j)
stillwaitingtoboardthebus.Gunterparkedthetaxibehindthebus,turnedaround,andlookedatmewithabig
smileonhisface.nWemadeit,"hesaid.
JustthenIrealisedthatIhadzerocashinmywallet.IflashedhimanapologeticsmileasIpulledoutmy
Portuguesebankcard.Hetrieditseveraltimes,butthecardmachinejustdidnotplayalong.Afeelingof
helplessnesswashedovermeasIsawthebusqueuethinningout.
Atthismoment,Gunterpointedtowardsthewaitinghallofthebusstation.There,attheentrance,wasacash
machine.Ijumpedoutofthecar,madeamadrunforthemachine,andpoppedmycardin,onlytoreadthe
message:"Outoforder.Sorry."
注意:
(1)續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個左右;
(2)請按如下格式在答題紙的相應(yīng)位置作答。
IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.
Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,IcalledGunteraspromised.
瞎
讀后續(xù)寫的滿分公式:
“精準審題抓伏筆+邏輯合理扣段首+描寫細膩升情感+語言豐富顯功底”
1.精準審題,鎖定原文伏筆
Step1速讀原文,抓核心要素:
人物關(guān)系(如父女、朋友、人與動物);
沖突類型(誤解、危險、目標障礙);
情感線索(焦慮一釋然、孤獨一溫暖)。
Step2分析段首句,明確續(xù)寫方向:
1)段首句功能:
第一段首句:推動情節(jié)高潮;
第二段首句:引導(dǎo)結(jié)局升華。
情節(jié)設(shè)計:遵循“沖突一解決一升華”模板
模板公式:沖突激化一行動嘗試(失敗)一轉(zhuǎn)折點-問題解決一情感/哲理升華
2)高分技巧:
a.加入細節(jié)動作:
b.呼應(yīng)原文伏筆:
3.語言升級:情感描寫與句式多樣性
1)情感描寫細膩化:
情感基礎(chǔ)表達升級表達
緊張Shewasnervous.Herpalmssweated,andherbreathquickened.
感動Shewasmoved.Tearsofreliefwelledupinhereyes,blurringhervision.
決心、Hedecidedtotry.Asurgeofdeterminationcoursedthroughhimashegrippedtheropetighter.
2)句式多樣化:
三f謂語作狀語:Hearingthedog'swhimper,sherushedtoitsside.
倒裝句:Notonlydidtheysavethedog,buttheyalsolearnedthevalueofcompassion.
比喻彳修辭:Thestormoutsidemirroredtheturmoilinherheart.
雪式
【福建師范大學(xué)附屬中學(xué)2024-2025學(xué)年高三上學(xué)期期末考】Foryears,swimmingwasoneofthose
thingswhereIthought:"I'mnotgoodatit,andIneverwillbe."Thatthoughtlingeredtheremostofmychildhood.
ThisallchangedlastyearwhenthecompanyIworkedforannouncedthattheyweregoingtoarrangea
swimrun,aracewhereyoupartiallyswimandpartiallyruntofinishtherace.Ofcourse,itwasavoluntaryactivity
andIwasnotgoingtoparticipate.
However,astheweeksprogressed,Istartedthinkingtomyself."Whatwoulditfeelliketobreakthroughmy
comfortzoneandfinallyfacemyinsecurity?^^Tohelptheswimrunparticipantspreparefortherace,thecompany
arrangedanopportunitytolearnhowtoswimfreestylewithaswiminstructor.Iultimatelydecidedtoatleast
participateinthefirstswimminglesson.
Iwasmentallypreparedtobetheworststudentduringthelesson.However,asitturnedout,Ihadplentyof
co-workersthatwereequallybadatswimming.Afterafewswimminglessons,Ievengotcomplimentsforhow
quicklyImanagedtoimprove.NotonlyhadIshatteredmyoldbeliefaboutmydisabilityinwater,butsomething
elsehadstartedtostir.Ihadgottenatasteforswimmingandwascurioustoseewhereitcouldleadme."How
woulditfeelliketobecompletelycomfortableinthewater?991wondered.
IstartedgoingtothepublicbathhousetopracticethefewtipsIhadgottenfromtheswimminginstructor.I'd
watchYouTubevideosandtryandmimicthemovementsbymyselfinthewatertothebestofmyabilities.
Withoutadoubt-inthebeginning,Ilookedlikeadrowningmonkey.Iwouldswim;Iwouldsink,coughing
upwater,andrepeatitalloveragain.Fdgetyelledatforswimmingtooslowatthefreestylerange.However,I
focusedontheprocessandthesoon-to-benewskillsetthatIdidnotgetdiscouragedbytheslowprogressnorthe
occasionalscolding.
注意:
1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;
2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
Paragraph1:
Thethoughtsofglidingthroughwatereffortlesslywaswhatkeptmegoing.
Paragraph2:
Regardingtheswimrun,Ieventuallydecidedtoparticipate.
、倒大題?拿高分八
Passage(1)
【安徽省合肥市第一中學(xué)2024-2025學(xué)年高三上學(xué)期12月階段性診斷檢測】IfIhadn'tbeenafailed
violinistImightneverhavebecomeawriter.
WhenIwasinfourthgrade,thepublicschoolIattendedhadacovetedorchestraprogram.Isignedupto
learntheviolin,alongwithmyfriendIreneCervantes.Wewerebothobsessedwiththeviolinandtheprospectof
beingintheorchestra.Everyweek,IreneandIwalkedtogetherthroughourworking-classneighborhoodtoour
before-schoolmusiclessons,proudlyholdingourblackviolincases.
Mr.Baumgartner,theorchestrateacher,wasverystrict.Heemphasizedthatifanythinghappenedtothe
instrumentweplayedwe'dbecutfromtheprogrambecausetheschoolcouldnotaffordtoreplaceit.Weall
understood.
Iwasn'tverygoodattheviolin.Nomatter,destinyintervenedandtheterriblethinghappened:Iwas
practicingathomewhenthebridgepoppedoffmyviolinandflewacrosstheroom,thestringscollapsingbefore
myeyes.
TerrifiedofMr.Baumgartner^reaction,andhavingnoideathiswasacommonviolinisfsmishap(because
thebridgeisheldinplacebythetensionofthestrings),Itriedtofixit.Itiptoedintothegarageandsecuredthe
bridgebackinplacewithglobsofanunfamiliarglue,makingsureitwouldnever,ever,popoffagain.Itwasonly
slightlycrooked.IprayedthatMr.Baumgartnerwouldn'tnotice.
Ofcourse,hedid.AndwhenIsawthecolordrainfromhisface,Iknewmyfatewassealed.Sadly,hepatted
meonthebackandtoldmethatmaybeIcouldjointheorchestranextyear.WhenIcried,hesuggestedthatIjoin
singingclub,whichoftensangduringassemblieswiththeorchestra.
Ididswitchtosingingclub,whereIstayed,thinkingI'dfoundmyplace.Asluckwouldhaveit,the
elementaryschoolgleeclubautomaticallyfedintothejuniorhighchorus.Insteadofaviolinist,Iwouldbeasinger
inanorchestraofvoices.Don'tbeconfused.Ididn'thaveagoodvoice,butinthemidstofsomanyothers,Icould
blend.
注意:
⑴續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個左右;
⑵請按如下格式在答題紙的相應(yīng)位置作答。
OneMondayafterabigperformance,myEnglishteacheraskedifanyonewasinterestedinwritinganarticle
abouthis/hersingingexperience.
IsawIreneCervantesyearslateratahighschoolreunion.
Passage(2)
【福建省泉州市四校聯(lián)考2024-2025學(xué)年高三下學(xué)期開學(xué)】Mostpeoplethinkthatprocrastination(拖延
癥)isanegativehabit.Butpeoplelikemewhoroutinelyputoffdoingassignments,arelikelytodefendour
“slower“approachtogettingtasksdone.
Pmtheonlyprocrastinationinmyfamily.Myparentsandsisterwereallbomwiththe"doitrightnow^^gift.
Theyarealwaysinarush,asifcloselyrushedbyaninvisibledeadline.Personally,Ipreferamorerelaxedpace.
Whenmyparentsvoicedtheirconcernaboutmytendencies,saying"Don'tputoffuntiltomorrowwhatyoucando
today,9,“Noway!”Iresponded,confidentlypresentingmyresearchasadefense.Itsaidpeopleprocrastinatedwhen
theyneedtosolveaproblemorcommittoatopicorproject.Inthesecases,delayingadecisioncanbebeneficial.
Thiswasbecauseourmindscontinuetoreflectonproblemsevenwhenwewerenotactivelythinkingaboutthem,
whichcouldleadtomorecreativesolutions.Myfindingsfilledmewithsatisfactionandpride.Mymethodof
gettingthingsdonewasjustasgoodasmysister's...orsoIthought.
Atschoolwe'dbeentalkingaboutarchitectureanddesign.AspartofthefinalassessmentmyteacherMr.
Smithannouncedanexcitingprojectthateachstudentwouldhaveamonthtocomplete.Wewereexpectedto
chooseourmaterials,constructasmallbuildingandmakeuseofthingswehadlearnedinclass.Notonlywouldthe
winnersreceiveextracredit,butthewinningconstructionswouldbeproudlydisplayedinthecafeteria.a<Ihaveno
cluehowIcouldgetitdone,^^myfriendNatesighedindespair.Ididn'tsayanything.NotbecauseIsharedhis
anxietybutbecauseIwasnotnervousatall.Ilovedhands-onprojects!Picturingmybrilliantworkexhibitedinthe
cafeteria,IwasfullyconvincedthatIwoulddefinitelyproducesomethingthatcouldimpresseveryone.Sorelaxed
wasIthatIdidn'tgiveitasecondthoughtforweeks.
注意:
1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;
2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
BeforeIknewit,Ihadonlyonedayleftfortheproject.
Thattaughtmeagreatlesson.
Passage(3)
【廣東省紅嶺中學(xué)2024-2025學(xué)年高三下學(xué)期第五次統(tǒng)一考試】OnNewYear'sEve,theairwasfilled
withexcitementandexpectation.Everykidwasoverjoyed,andonesuchkidwaslittleJohnny.Johnnywasthrilled
becausehewasgoingtothemarketwithhisfathertobuyvariousitemsthatheliked.Themarketwasbustlingwith
activity,andallthebusinessesweredecoratedwithcolorfullights,creatingafestiveatmosphere.
AsJohnnyandhisfatherwalkedthroughthemarket,theyweresurroundedbythesoundsofvendorscalling
outtheirwares,thelaughterofchildren,andtheclatterofshoppingcarts.Theairwasfilledwiththescentof
freshlycookedfoodandthebrightlightsofthedecorations.Johnny'seyeswidenedinwonderashetookinthe
sightsandsoundsofthebustlingmarket.
Whilewanderingthroughthemarket,Johnny'sattentionwasdrawntoashopwithalargenumberofcaged
birds.Thebirdswereconstantlyslammingtheirbeaksagainstthecageinadesperateattempttoescape.Manyof
themweredrippingwithblood,andtheirfeatherswereruffled(豎起)anddirty.Johnnyfeltapangofsorrowand
wasdeeplymovedbytheplight(困境)ofthebirds.
Unabletocontrolhisemotions,Johnnyapproachedtheshopkeeper."Whyhaveyoucapturedthesehelpless
birds?”heinquired,hisvoicetremblingwithconcern.Johnnythoughttohimselfthatitwasnotrighttolimit
someone'sfreedom,especiallyforinnocentcreatureslikethesebirds.
TheshopkeeperlookedatJohnnywithamixtureoffrustrationandsadness.don'tlikeit,“headmitted,
“butIdon'thaveanyotheroptions.Ineedthejobandalsorequirefundstofeedmyfamily.9,Listeningtothe
shopkeeper'sexplanation,Johnnyunderstoodthecomplexityofthesituation.Heturnedtohisfatherandsaid,“Dad,
canwebuythesebirdsandsetthemfree?^^Meanwhile,hewassearchingformoneyinhispocket.ctWhataboutall
thoseitemsyouwereplanningtobuy,Johnny?Whatifthemanloseshisjob?”Johnny'sfatherinquired.
注意:
1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;
2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
Forabriefmoment,Johnnywasconfusedandslightlyanxious.
TheshopkeeperwasoveijoyedandhandedthecagetoJohnny.
Passage(4)
【湖北省武漢市第一中學(xué)2024-2025學(xué)年高三上學(xué)期12月聯(lián)考】Peoplealwayssaythatwithexercise,
puttingonyourshoesisthehardestpart.ButforEmma,thiswasalie.Therealpainalwaysstartedwhenallthe
studentsweregatheredonthetrack,readytorun.Itwasn'tthefatiguesheminded,itwasthelooksothersgaveher.
Emmawasbiggerthanothersofherage.Backinprimaryschool,sheremembersherclassmatesaskingherwhy
herthighs(大腿)weresobigandherchestsowide.Ontheoutside,shelookedbig,butontheinside,shefeltas
smallasapea.AndPEclasswaswhenshefeltathersmallest.
Notallherclassmatesmadeherfeeluncomfortable,though.Itwasmainlyagroupofgirlsandboys一the
loud,outspoken,popularkids.AlthoughtheycouldrunfasterthanEmma,theypreferredtojogabitbehindher,
burstingoutinlaughtereverynowandthen,commentingonhowEmmajogged.
Justonemoreyear,Emmakepttellingherself.Onemoreyearandrilhavegraduatedandwon'thavetotake
thisstupidPEclassanymore.Shejustwantedtosurviveit.
ButeverythingchangedwhenanewgirlcalledKitjoinedtheclass.Shehadshort,jet-blackhair,brighteyes,
andalongscaracrosstheleftsideofherface.Herentranceintotheclassroomthatdaywasmetbydozensof
curiouseyes.
Althoughtheirteacher,MsHardy,didn'taskKitforapersonalintroduction,uponputtingherbagdownon
herdesk,Kitrose,saying,“Hi,everyone,nicetomeetyou,FmKit.Iloveboxing,animationandfashion.You
mightbewonderingaboutmyscar.IgotitwhenIwasyoungwhenIfelloffmybike.Luckily,Ididn'tgethurt
moreseriously.IfsnowlikeacooltrademarkofalltheadventuresIhadasakid.”
AfterKifsintroduction,Emmasimplysatthere,herheartpoundingandmouthwideopen.Howcould
someonebesoconfident?Eventhepopularkidsweresittingthereinshock.
注意:
1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;
2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
Atlunchtime,EmmawassittingatherusualtablewithafewotherclassmateswhenKitwalkedoverto
them.
OnFriday,itwastimeforthefearfulPEclass,butthistime,Kitwaswithher.
Passage(5)
【華中師范大學(xué)第一附屬中學(xué)2024-2025學(xué)年高三下學(xué)期開學(xué)】Theboysintheblockweregoingtohave
aroller-skating(滑旱冰)racenextSaturday.Theyweredividedintotwoteams:theSunnysidersandthe
Shadysiders,withfiveboysoneachteam.AndywasontheSunnysiders.Theylostlastyear,sotheyweredesperate
towinthistime.ButAndyknewhisshortlegsmadeithardforhimtoskatefast.
Oneday,Andywasgreetedbyapleasant“Hello“ashewasputtingonhisroller-skates.Helookedupand
sawhisnewneighbor,Francis.46Hello!”herepliedcheerfully,noticinghisneighbor'slonglegs.uWannaskatewith
me?Lookatyourlonglegs!Justtherightkindtomakeyouagoodskater.9,"I'dloveto.Youknow,I'mreallygood
atrollerskatingandIusedtohelpmyteamwin.^^Francissaid,histonenowheavywithsadness.atButIlostmy
rollerskatesandmymomjustcannotaffordtobuymeanotherpair.^^
AndythoughtitwasashameforFrancis.Asanewcomer,therewereundoubtedlymanymomentswhenhe
musthavefeltlonely.Andythoughttohimself,wonderingwhathecoulddoforFrancis.Buthehadtosaygoodbye
inahurrysincetheteamweremeetingintheopenspaceonthecornertotalkoversomeplans.
Whentalkingtotheteamcaptain,Andysuggestedaddinganotherboytotheirteam,Francis.Butthecaptain
said"No"astheteamknewnothingabouthim.Besides,theShadysiderswouldn'tletthemtakeonanextraplayer.
Inthefollowingdays,Andypracticedveryhardwithhisteam.Thencamethedaybeforetheracewhenhe
sawFrancisonthesidewalk,watchingthemskatepast,hiseyesfilledwithasenseofloss.SomehowitupsetAndy,
andhisdesiretohelphisnewneighborresurfaced.Thenhethoughtofawaythatcouldnotonlyhelphisteamwin,
buthelpFrancisfitin.
注意:
(1)續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個左右;
(2)請按如下格式在答題紙的相應(yīng)位置作答。
HerushedtoFrancis,excitedtotellhimhisplan.
Thenextday,theracebeganasscheduled.
Passage(6)
【廣東省深圳市高級中學(xué)2024-2025學(xué)年高三上學(xué)期第三次診斷考試】AFour-leggedGuardianAngel
SnowhadjustmeltedoffthegroundthatAprildayatourhouseinReginaBeach,Saskatchewan.Ihadjust
cleanedupthepoolinpreparationforsellingthehouse.Theyearbefore,Ihadlostmyjobwiththeprovincial
government,andnowourfinancialsituationwasgrim.Indespair,Ihadfinallyputthehomeonthemarket,anda
realestateagentwasduetoshowuplaterthatday.Evenworse,IwouldhavetogiveupmybelovedGreatDane
(大丹犬)Brigitte,becauseIcouldnolongeraffordthecostoffeedingit.Thethoughtoflosingthedogandour
beautifulhomewasalmostmorethanIcouldbear.
Deepindespair,Isattypingupresumesandcoverletters.OutofthecomerofmyeyeIcouldseemy
thirteen-month-oldson,Forrest,ashelayonthecarpet,playingnearourbig,gentlenanny-dog,Brigitte.Itseemed
asifBrigittewasalwaysmeanttobeinthisfamilyandsheturnedouttobeaperfectcompanion.
BrigittecametoourhouseonChristmasevewhenthedoorbellrangandIwassuresomeofmyChristmas
packageshadarrived.Irantothedoorandswungitopen,butnoonewasthere.Isensedsomethingandlooked
down,onlytofindabeautifulGreatDanesittingthere,lookingupatmewithbig,intelligenteyes.Therewasno
waythatshecouldhaverungthedoorbellbyherself,wasthere?Perhaps,someonehadfoundthepuppy
somewhereandleftherthere,andthenrangthedoorbellandranaway.TheyaccuratelyguessedIwouldwelcome
anadditionalfamilymemberandtakecareofher.
Thinkingofthese,Icouldn'thelpheavingasighandwentstraightbacktowork.However,Ihadn'ttyped
morethantwosentenceswhenBrigittebeganbarkingfuriouslyandrunningbackandforthtotheslidingglassdoor
overlookingourpool.
Iracedtoseewhatwashappeningandnoticedthattheslidingdoorwasslightlyopen.Suddenly,Irealized
Forrestwasnowheretobeseen.Inpanic,Iopenedthedoorandranoutside.
注意:
1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;
2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
ThereIwassurprisedtoseeBrigitte,whowasterrifiedofwater,diveintothepool.
Finally,thedoctorsaidForrestwasallrightandcouldbereleasedfromhospital.
Passage(7)
【河北省滄衡名校聯(lián)盟2024-2025學(xué)年高三下學(xué)期開學(xué)考試】Rushingintothesupermarketthatfall
afternoon,IdidnotknowIwouldgettobeapartofsomethingbeautiful.Inallhonesty,Ican'tevenrememberwhy
Iwasinthisgrocerystore.Inevershoppedhere.ItwasoutofmywayandoutofthecirclethatIlivedmylife
within.Butitwasmeantformetobethereatthisparticulartime.
Afterselectingmyitems,Iproceededtothecheckoutline.Inoticedayoungwomaninthelineinfrontof
me.Herclotheswereworn,andshelookedsotired.Shehadatoddler(學(xué)步的兒童)whocouldnothavebeen
morethanthreeandanewbornbabywhowasjustafewweeksold.Thetoddlerwasrunningandjumpingaround
justliketoddlersdo.Thebabywascrying.Myheartwentouttoher.Ihadbeeninhershoeswithmyowntwosons.
Shemanagedtogethergroceriesonthemovingbeltdespiteallthechaosofherkids,andtheclerkstarted
checkingoutheritems.AsIstoodbehindher,Inoticedthatshewaslosingpatiencewithherkidsbutdidn'tknow
whattodo.Shewastryingtobalancebothtaskswithoutcausingahugedisturbance.Ibegantowhisperaprayerof
peaceandstrengthoverthiswoman.Thelinebehindmecontinuedtosnakeitswayintoanotherpassage.The
pressurewasgrowing.
AsIwatchedher,IrememberedthetimewhenIhadbeeninagrocerystorewithatoddlerwhowasrunning
aroundandascreamingbaby.Irememberedthemean,oldmanbehindmeandtheinappropriatecommenthemade
onmeasIcheckedout.Thatmemorytookmeawayfromthecheckoutlineforamoment.WhenIcamebacktothe
present,Irealizedthattheyoungwomanwaslookingatafewitemsandtryingtodecidewhatsheneededtoput
back.
注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;
2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
Thepeopleinlinebehindmeweregettingimpatient.
Iwasabouttopayforthewoman,butthemanbehindofferedtosharethecost.
Passage(8)
【湖南師范大學(xué)附屬中學(xué)2024-2025學(xué)年高三下學(xué)期2月月考】ThesunwassettingoverSpringdale,
castingshadowsacrossthebusycommunitycenter.Agroupofteenagers,themembersoftheSpringdaleYouth
Committee,gatheredatatable.Theylookeddeterminedandworried.AmongthemwasEmily,asmartbutoften
unnoticedgirlwholoveshelpingothers.
Forweeks,theyhadbeenorganizingafundraisingeventforthelocalhomelessshelter,astheshelter
struggledtoassisttheincreasingnumberofindividualsseekinghelp.Thebigdaywasoneweekaway,and
everythingwasset-untiltheydiscoveredanothergrouphadasimilarcharityeventonthesameday.Thiscould
dividethepeoplewhomightcomeandthedonationstheyhopedtoget.
“Wecan'tchangethedatenow,“saidTom,aseniormember,hisvoicefilledwithfrustration."We'vealready
sentoutinvitations,andtheplaceisbooked.^^Emilylistenedquietlytothediscussion.Sheknewchangingthedate
wasn'tpossible,butshealsorealizedcompetingwithanotherworthycausecouldhurtbothsides.
Afterthemeetingendedwithoutasolution,Emilydecidedtotakeaction.Shespentthenextdaylookinginto
waystoworkwiththeothergroup,hopingtofindawaythatwouldhelpboththehomelessshelterandtheother
cause.
Thenextday,shecametothecommitteewithasuggestion."Whatifwejoinourevents?^^sheasked.ctWe
couldshareresources,worktogetheronpromoting,andmostimportantly,makesurebothcausesaresupportedby
thecommunity.^^
Thememberslookedateachother,somedoubtful,othersinterested."That'sagreatidea,Emily,buthow
willwegetthemtoagree?^^Laura,anothermember,asked.Emilyhadalreadythoughtthisthrough.uriltalkto
theirorganizerandshowthemthebenefitsofajointevent.9,Sheknewthepathaheadwouldbechallenging,butshe
wasdeterminedtomakeithappenforSpringdaleanditspeople.
注意:
1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;
2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
Para1ThecommitteeagreedtoletEmilyleadthiseffort.
Para2Afterdaysofnegotiation,Emilyfinallygotapositivereply.
Passage(1)
[2024浙江1月卷】Evaspentthefirstweekofhighschooltryingtokeepherheadabovewater.Oneofthe
majorheadachesforherwasfindingherwayinthehugeschoolbuilding.Itwasasix-storybuilding.Oneachfloor,
hallwaysstretchedinfourdirections,leadingtoclassrooms,laboratories,andteachers5offices.Somewhereinthe
building,therewasalsoalibrary,acafeteria,andagym.
Havingapoorsenseofdirection,Evafounditimpossibletogetaroundinsuchahugebuilding.Allthedifferent
hallwaysandroomsweretoomuchtothinkabout,letalonecommittomemory.Shedecidedthatshewould
memorizewhereherclasseswereandthenpretendthattherestoftheplacedidn'texist.
InherfirstPEclass,EvawasshockedwhenCoachPittannouncedthateveryonehadtorunonemilearoundthe
trackoutside.Shesearchedthefacesofherclassmatesforsignsofpanic.Therewasnothingshefearedmorethan
havingtorunawholemile.ToEva,"amile^^wasusedtodescribelongdistances.Itwastenmilesfromherhometo
hergrandfather^,andthatalwaysseemedlikealongway,eveninacar!
WhenCoachPittblewhiswhistle(口肖子),Evafiguredshewouldbeleftinthedust.However,whilesomeofher
classmatesedgedahead,othersactuallyfellbehind.Ifsjustthebeginning,aashethought.^^rilcomeinlastforsure.
SoonEvabegantobreathehard,withherheartpoundingandlegsshaking.Feelingdesperate,Evastartedusing
amindtrickonherself.Shestoppedthinkingabouttheword"mile."Instead,shefocusedonreachingtheshadowcast
onthetrackbyanoaktreeupahead.Thensheconcentratedonjoggingtothespotwherethetrackcurved(拐彎).
Afterthat,shetriedtoseeifshecouldcompleteherfirstlap.Onelapturnedintotwo,thenthree,thenfour.
注意:
1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;
2,請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
Paragraph1:
WhenCoachPittsaid“Nicework!”toheratthefinishline,Evawassurprised.
Paragraph2:
Evadecidedtousethesametricktodealwiththeschoolbuilding.
Passage(2)
【2023年新高考全國I&II卷】WhenIwasinmiddleschool,mysocialstudiesteacheraskedmetoentera
writingcontest.Isaidnowithoutthinking.Ididnotlovewriting.MyfamilycamefromBrazil
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