Unit2-Grammar-and-writing-能力提升訓(xùn)練

1/1Unit2Grammarandwriting能力提升訓(xùn)練一、文段練筆FastFoodFastfood________(正變得越來(lái)越流行）inChina,especiallyamongchildrenandteenagers.First,________(它很方便且節(jié)省大量時(shí)間）.Second,youcaneithereatitthereortakeithome.Third,theenvironmentoffastfoodrestaurantsiscleanandcomfortable.Fourth,________(有優(yōu)質(zhì)的服務(wù)，且食品質(zhì)量有保證）.However,intermsofnutrition,fastfoodis________(不盡如人意).Itisusuallynotabalanceddietandlowinnutritionalvalue.Personally,it’snotalwaysgoodforpeople,especiallyforchildren.It’snecessary________(我們盡量少吃快餐）.過(guò)能力語(yǔ)言知識(shí)運(yùn)用一、書(shū)面表達(dá)(一）假如你的一位朋友在杭州開(kāi)了一家名為“陶?qǐng)@”的飯店，請(qǐng)你為他寫(xiě)一則英語(yǔ)廣告以吸引來(lái)自國(guó)外的游客。廣告應(yīng)包括以下要點(diǎn)：1.飯店提供豐富多樣的中國(guó)食物；2.食物美味可口，營(yíng)養(yǎng)均衡；3.用餐環(huán)境好；4.服務(wù)質(zhì)量高。注意：1.山詞數(shù)100左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。（二）假設(shè)你是李華，你校校報(bào)正在就“Whichismoreimportant，agoodscoreorahealthylifestyle?”這個(gè)話題進(jìn)行英語(yǔ)征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的內(nèi)容提示，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文向其投稿。1.學(xué)生的現(xiàn)狀；2.你的觀點(diǎn)和理由。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。二、短文改錯(cuò)（一）Withtheproverbgoes,“Goodhabitsbenefitfromyouallyourlife.”Enterhighschool,Iwascrazyaboutfastfoodandatetoomany.Asaresult,IwastooheavilyoverweightthatIsufferedalotfrommyawkwardappearance.Worsestill,myclassmatesplayjokesonmeattimes.Fromthenon,Imadeupmymindtoavoidsnacksandtotakeupjoggingtoloseweights.Becauseofthetimelychange,itwasnotlongafterIdidsucceedincreatingmynewimage.OnlythendidIrealizetheimportanceofforminggoodhabit.Tobehonest,thechangeinourhabitmeansalottome,whichisgoodformysuccessandhelpsmeregainconfidence.（二）DearMr.Zhang,Iamwritingtoexpressmythanks.It’skindofyoutotakemetohospitalwhenIfeelsickintheEnglishclassinthismorning.Iamquitegratefulforwhichyouhavedoneforme.Becauseofyourtimelyhelp,Icouldgettreatingintime，orIcouldn’timaginewhatitwouldbelike.Iammuchbetternow.MydoctorthinksI’vegotbadcold.AndIhavebeentoldthatIneedtostayinhospitalforseveralday.AndIneedreceivefurtherexaminationbecauseIstillhaveahighlyfever.Iamlookingforwardtobewellsoonandwithyouagaininmylivelyclass.Seeyouthen.Yours，LiHua

參考答案：五、常用表達(dá)in.文段練筆FastFoodFastfoodisbecomingmoreandmorepopular(正變得越來(lái)越流行）inChina,especiallyamongchildrenandteenagers.First,itisveryconvenientandsavesalotoftime(它很方便且節(jié)省大量時(shí)間).Second,youcaneithereatitthereortakeithome.Third,theenvironmentoffastfoodrestaurantsiscleanandcomfortable.Fourth,thereisexcellentserviceandthequalityoffoodisguaranteed(有優(yōu)質(zhì)的服務(wù)，且食品質(zhì)量有保證).However,intermsofnutrition,fastfoodisfarfromsatisfactory(不盡如人意）.Itisusuallynotabalanceddietandlowinnutritionalvalue.Personally，it’snotalwaysgoodforpeople，especiallyforchildren.It’snecessarythatweeatfastfoodaslittleaspossible(我們盡量少吃快餐）.過(guò)能力語(yǔ)言知識(shí)運(yùn)用一、書(shū)面表達(dá)(一）Oncetasted，alwaysloved.TaoyuanRestaurantisthehomeofgoodfood.WeprovidedeliciousChinesedishesandourspecialtiesincludeDongPoPorkandwonton.WealsoofferavarietyofotherChinesetraditionalfoodswithtastyflavors.Abalanceddietinourrestaurantwillgiveyouenoughenergyaswellasfiber.Thisisafunplacetoeat,especiallyatlunchtimewhenit’sfilledwithpeople,localsandtouristsalike,givingtheplacealivelyatmosphere.Goodserviceisguaranteed.OurrestaurantisbythelakesidewithgreatviewsofHangzhou’sfamoussite.Whynotpayusavisit?解析：廣告是一種使用廣泛的實(shí)用文體。廣告英語(yǔ)要多用簡(jiǎn)單句、肯定句；慎用復(fù)合句、否定句；巧用疑問(wèn)句、分離句；頻用祈使句、省略句等。寫(xiě)作本文時(shí)應(yīng)注意：1.明確寫(xiě)作目的要充分展示飯店的黨點(diǎn)，以吸引顧客。2.寫(xiě)作步驟——先介紹食物，再寫(xiě)用餐環(huán)境和服務(wù)質(zhì)量，最后發(fā)出熱情的邀請(qǐng)。3.文章語(yǔ)言——為了使宣傳有效，文字要生動(dòng)有趣，但又要實(shí)事求是，不能浮夸;語(yǔ)氣要真誠(chéng)。這篇文章是廣告題材的寫(xiě)作，要點(diǎn)齊全，符合廣告的特點(diǎn)，同時(shí)寫(xiě)作中的語(yǔ)法使用準(zhǔn)確，詞匯和句型很高級(jí)，這使文章在得分上會(huì)上一個(gè)臺(tái)階。本篇文章中還使用了廣告中常用的句型，如：Oncetasted,alwaysloved;thehomeofgoodfood；Thisisafunplaceto...;Goodserviceisguaranteed等。(二）Asstudents,weusuallyattachmoreimportancetoourscores,wetendtodevotemostofthetimetoourstudy,neglectingtheimportanceofexercising.Consequently,somestudentsarepoorinhealthandsomearefacingtheproblemofobesity.However,Istronglybelievethatahealthylifestyleismuchmoreimportant.Ahealthylifestylemeanseatinghealthyfoodanddoingexercise,whichwillbenefitusalot.Abalanceddietandeverydayexercisewillkeepusfitandenergetic.Andwithahealthybody,wewillbehappyandconfident,whichmakesitpossibleforustostudybetter.Sotogetagoodscore,weshouldfirsthaveahealthylifestyle.解析：這是一篇提示性作文，寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意從下面幾個(gè)方面來(lái)寫(xiě)：第一，學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)和生活的現(xiàn)狀以及由此產(chǎn)生的影響；第二，發(fā)表你的看法，并給出理由。這樣文章才能夠做到要點(diǎn)突出。同時(shí)由于文章說(shuō)明的是現(xiàn)在的情況，所以文章應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。文章在寫(xiě)作時(shí)邏輯清晰、要點(diǎn)突出。文章中使用了大量的高級(jí)詞組，如attachimportanceto;devote...to.benefitusalot;haveahealthylifestyle等，這使文章成了一篇優(yōu)秀的習(xí)作。二、短文改錯(cuò)(一）1.With改為As；2.去掉from；3.Enter改