演講稿的寫法

1、演講稿的寫法【試題呈現(xiàn)】假設(shè)你是班長，班上即將舉行一次英語班會，主題為“How to control the fast-growing of population”，你首先發(fā)言，談?wù)勀壳叭丝谠鲩L的情況、控制人口的措施以及自己對此問題的看法。請根據(jù)提示寫一篇演講稿。1.參考詞匯：family program(計劃生育)； reward(獎勵)2.參考措施：計劃生育政策、給獨生子女家庭以獎勵等3詞數(shù)：120個左右。Dear friends,At present, there is a widespread concern over .【審題點撥】這篇作文要求學(xué)生以應(yīng)用文形式寫出一篇演講稿。雖然形式

2、上是口頭，但行文上還是應(yīng)該書面(轉(zhuǎn)自：wWw.bdFqy. 千 葉帆 文摘:演講稿的寫法)。在寫作中，同學(xué)們要規(guī)范表述，靈活處理，語言精練。具體地講還應(yīng)該注意： 1寫前認(rèn)真審題，分幾個自然段落來寫作，不能漏掉任何一個要點；2不能生硬地逐條翻譯，應(yīng)正確使用承上啟下的過渡詞使文章內(nèi)容緊湊，語言連貫流暢?！玖?xí)作一】Dear friends,At present, there is a widespread concern over the fast-growing of population.Population problem has bee more and more serious.How t

3、o control the fast-growing of population? This is a very difficult but necessary question.As we know, the population is increasing at about 8% per year.A sudden large increase in the number of people leads to many problems, such as resource shortage, environmental pollution, heavy transportation and

4、 so on.Therefore, its high time we did something about it.Firstly, the government should carry out the family program strictly.If someone breaks the rules, the government should punish them, so that people can obey the rules well.Carrying out family program can control the population and improving t

5、he health of people.Second, the government should reward those people who obey the rules.It can encourage more couples to carry out family problem.In addition, its a good idea to announce the family problem.In conclusion, people around the world should be aware of the real situation of the fast-grow

6、ing of population.I believe strongly that if every couple can carry out family program, our home the earth will bee much better!Thank you for listening.(谷城一中高二（25）班 任明珠)點評 這是一篇中檔習(xí)作。其優(yōu)點是：（1）本文覆蓋所有的主要內(nèi)容；語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯方面的應(yīng)用基本準(zhǔn)確；結(jié)構(gòu)清晰明了，段落層次分明。（2）文中各段落之間使用了適當(dāng)?shù)倪^渡語，句子之間使用了合理的邏輯銜接詞，如：as we know，such as，therefore，i

7、n addition等。（3）文中嘗試使用了較復(fù)雜的語法結(jié)構(gòu)，如：.so that people can obey the rules well (結(jié)果狀語從句)Carrying out family program can control .(動名詞短語作主語)I believe strongly that if every couple can .(復(fù)合句)Its high time . (從句中用虛擬語氣)還有較高級詞匯，如：be aware of，in conclusion，reward等。（4）用了Firstly，Secondly，in conclusion逐一提出解決問題的建議，使

8、得文章有條有理，敘事簡練。不足之處：本文之所以為中檔作文，原因在于該生的語言基本功略有不足，有待提高。（1）內(nèi)容上有些啰嗦，文章字?jǐn)?shù)超過了題目要求的120字左右，第二、三兩個自然段可以合并縮寫。（2）語言結(jié)構(gòu)上出現(xiàn)了一些問題，如：“How to control the fast-growing of population?”用提問的形式很好，但這不是一個完整的句子，應(yīng)改成“How can we control the .?”“.control the population and improving the health of people.”中improving與control是并列謂語，所

9、以應(yīng)將improving改成improve。（3）作者過多地重復(fù)使用某些詞組搭配，其中carry out the family program出現(xiàn)了三次，obey the rules出現(xiàn)了兩次。重復(fù)使用同一表達(dá)方式會顯得作者詞匯不夠豐富、表述貧乏。因此，在寫作中應(yīng)盡量避免重復(fù)，使句式多樣化，給閱卷老師好的印象。（4）文中有少量表達(dá)錯誤，如“增長了多少”應(yīng)該說“.is increasing by about 8% per year”；“.those people who .”習(xí)慣于直接說“.those who .”；還有“Its a good idea to announce the family program”所表達(dá)的意義有點讓人費解，按上下文改為“Its a good idea to make the policy known to all”更好?！玖?xí)作二】Dear friends,At present, there is a widespread concern over the fast growing of po