（精心整理）2017-2018浙江高考讀后續(xù)寫真題范文賞析

1、2016.9 浙江高考 ：One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom. “I'm goin

2、g to find a better spot for us to camp" and walked away.With no path to follow,Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place. she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She

3、 suddenly realized that she was lost.“Tom! "she cried. "Help!"No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop fo

4、r the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落）somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a str

5、eam. To her great joy,she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now. Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a hel

6、icopter. Is that for me? Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.注意:1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應為150左右；2.應使用5

7、個以上短文文中標有下劃線的關鍵詞語：3.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；4.續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標出你所使用的關鍵詞語。Paragraph 1But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.Paragraph 2 It was daybreak when Jane woke up. 2017.6On a bright, warm July afternoon, Mac Hollan, a primary school teacher, was cycling from his home to Alaska wit

8、h his friends. One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair, but they had encouraged Mac to carry on, and they would catch up with him soon. As Mac pedaled (騎行) along alone, he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters at home. He hoped to show them this beautiful place someday.

9、Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him. “Man, that's a big dog!” he thought. But when he looked to the side, he saw instantly that it wasnt a dog at all, but a wolf, quickly catching up with him. Macs heart jumped. He found out his can of hear spray. With one hand on the bars, he fir

10、ed the spray at the wolf. A bright red cloud enveloped the animal, and to Mac's relief, it fell back, shaking its head. But a minute later, it was by his side again. Then it attacked the back of Mac's bike, tearing open his tent bag. He fired at the wolf a second time, and again, it fell bac

11、k only to quickly restart the chase（追趕）。Mac was pedaling hard now. He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful not to show down. He saw a steep uphill climb before him. He knew that once he hit the hill, hed be easy caught up and the wolfs teeth would be tearing into his flesh.At this moment

12、, Paul and Beeky were driving their car on their way to Alaska. They didnt think much of it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road. A bit later, they spotted what they, too, assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike. As they got closer, they realized that t

13、he dog was a wolf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in front of it as the wolf was catching up fast, just a dozen yards away now.注意:1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應為150左右；2.應使用5個以上短文文中標有下劃線的關鍵詞語：3.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；4.續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標出你所使用的關鍵詞語。Paragraph 1The car abrubtly stopped in front of him.Paragraph 2

14、 A few minutes later,the other two cyclists arrived.2017 11. 浙江高考 A vacation with my mother   I had an interesting childhood: It was filled with surprise and amusements, all because of my mother-loving, sweet, and yet absent-minded and forgetful. One strange family 

15、;trip we took when I was eleven tells a lot about her.   My two sets of grandparents lived in Colorado and North Dakota, and my parents decided to spend a few weeks driving to those states and seeing all the sights along the way. As the first day of our trip approached, David, my

16、 eight-year-old brother, and I unwillingly said good-bye to all of our friends. Who knew if wed ever see them again? Finally, the moment of our departure arrived, and we loaded suitcases, books, games, camping equipment, and a tent into the car and bravely drove off. We bravely d

17、rove off again two hours later after wed returned home to get the purse and travelers checks Mom had forgotten.   David and I were always a little nervous when using gas station bathrooms if Mom was driving while Dadslept:” You stand outside the door and play lookout while I

18、 go, and Ill stand outside the door and play lookout while you go.” I had terrible pictures in my mind: “Honey, where are the kids?” “What?! Oh, Gosh I thought they were being awfully quiet.” We were never actually left behind in a strange city, but we werent about to take any chances.On the fourth

19、or fifth night, we had trouble finding a hotel with a vacancy. After driving in vain for some time, Mom suddenly got a great idea: Why didnt we find a house with a likely-looking backyard and ask if we could set up tent there? David and I became nervous. To our great relief, Dad turned dow

20、n the idea. Mom never could understand our objections.If a strange family showed up on her front doorsteps, Mom would have been delighted. She thinks everyone in the world as as nice as she is. We finally found a vacancy in the next town. 注意：1. 所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應為150左右；2. 應使用5個以上短文中標有下劃線的關鍵詞語；

21、3. 續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段開頭語已為你寫好；4. 續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標出你所使用的關鍵詞語。Para1:  The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us.Para2:  We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way.2018 6 It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never befo

22、re. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle Paul, my dads friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.His wife Tina cooked us a delicious

23、 dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast. "The day starts at dawn on my farm," he sai

24、d. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens. while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze(吃草). I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool. In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a hose ride, and he said yes

25、, as long as my dad went with me. I wasnt going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains. "Dont be late for supper," Uncle Paul cried, "and keep to the track so that you dont get lost

26、!" "OK! " my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his fam house were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven(編織的）blanket

27、spread out upon the ground just for us.注意：1. 所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應為l50左右；2. 至少使用5個短文中標有下劃線的關鍵詞語：3. 續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；4. 續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標出你所使用的關鍵詞語。Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. We had no idea where we were and it got dark.參考范文一： Paragraph 1 But no more helicopters came and it was gett

28、ing dark again. Jane had to stay alone in the forest for another cold night. At that moment (時間), she felt a little sad, but she wasnt so frightened (情感). She reminded herself constantly, (心理) “ Tom must have called for those helicopters. Maybe (情感) he was in one of them and will return soon(動作)! I

29、have to guide him tomorrow.” She felt asleep (動作) and dreamed of seeing Tom (動作).Paragraph 2 It was daybreak when Jane woke up. She ate some berries and then(時間) walked along the stream, hoping (心理) to find a suitable place to guide the helicopter. She walked and walked, exhausted but full of hope.

30、Suddenly (時間), she spotted (動作) a huge flat rock. She managed (動作) to climb onto it and waited with patience. The moment (時間) the helicopter appeared (動作) again. The nearer it got (動作), the more she waved (動作) the yellow blouse. To her great joy, (情感) the helicopter didnt miss Jane this time and it

31、landed near the big rock slowly. Tom jumped off the helicopter and rushed (動作) towards Jane. They hugged each other tightly (情感) and burst into tears (情感).參考范文二：The car abruptly stopped in front of him. Mac jumped off his bicycle and dashed for the back door of the car. It was locked. He then ran ar

32、ound to the passenger door, but it was locked, as well, so he began to climb through the open window. When spotting this ,Paul quickly unlocked the door, and the frightened man dived in, slamming the door behind him. Paul looked out the back window and saw the wolf standing over Macs bike as if it w

33、ere a kill. Shortly after, the animal ran off. A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived .Mac emerged from the car and hugged his friends. “I thought I was going to die,” Mac cried to them. Mac retrieved（取回） his bicycle, and the three men resumed(繼續(xù)） their road trip, agreeing to keep in on

34、e anothers sight line. A few miles down the road, Mac pulled over and burst into tears.“The rest of the trip was amazing, but I had to let the former emotion out.”參考范文三：Para1: The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us. Mom insisted that we must make full use

35、 of it since we had brought it. David and I looked at Dad, hoping he could stop her crazy idea. To our great disappointment, he agreed. We spent a whole afternoon seeking a nice camping place and set up our tent before the night fell. It was the first time that I h

36、ad thought mom could be wise as I admiring our stunning tent. “Oh, I forgot the pillows!” what a misconception. Despite the ache of my neck, we had some great nights.Para1: We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way. The bright blue sky, the limitless green

37、grass, the group of sheep, the setting sun and the countless stars in the curtain of nights kept me spellbound. Not only did we see the picturesque scenery, we also managed to consider moms scandals as a kind of fun. I really love my Mum. To our relief, we arrived at grandparents place and went

38、 back to our home with all of four people. It was so fortunate to see my friends again.范文四：Paragraph 1Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. Instinctively, I yelled out loud, pulling back the reins hard in order to stop the horse from hurting the little creature. Badly startl

39、ed by the sudden incident, the horse sped off the track into another direction. Dad followed closely behind, calling out to tell me how to soothe the terrified horse and I did as told. Finally, the horse calmed down, but we seemed to get lost, unable to go back to the m

40、ountain road.  Paragraph 2We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. Wandering around, we were still stuck in the dilemma. Much to our delight, the sound of water in the distance caught our attention and drove us to the riverbank. Dad proposed that we should walk along the river which may lead us to the farm house and nothing seemed better than that. Time appeared to be merrier and shorte