寫作限時訓練五

1、寫作限時訓練五第一節(jié) 短文改錯 Last Saturday our class went to hiking in the countryside. We meet at our school gate and set off at 8:00 am. In the way, we were singing and laughing happily when a girl suddenly fell into the deep hole. She felt so frightening and even burst into tears. met On a frightened One of m

2、y classmate found a long rope and we finally got out. Fortunately, she didnt suffer seriously injuries, but it seemed that her ankle was slightly twisted. We managed to sending her to the nearest hospital. It is an experience that well ever forget, though we didnt enjoy ourselves very much that day.

3、 never send serious herclassmates 本文記敘了我們班去遠足時救助一位掉進洞里的女同學的經(jīng)歷。1. 把went后的to去掉 因go hiking為習慣用法，意為“去遠足”，故把to去掉。2. meet met 由時間狀語Last Saturday可知要用一般過去時，故把meet改為met。3. In On 表示“在路上”應用on the way，故把In改為On。4. the a 泛指“一個”深坑。5. frightening frightened 表示人“感到害怕的”應用frightened。6. classmate classmates 因One of后接名詞

4、的復數(shù)形式，故把classmate改為classmates。7. 在got與out之間加her 由語境可知，我們最終把“她”救了出來。8. seriously serious 修飾名詞應用形容詞，故把seriously改為serious。9. sending send 因manage to do sth為固定搭配，意為“設法做某事”，故把sending改為send。10. ever never 句意：這是一次我們永遠不會忘記的經(jīng)歷。表示“決不，永不”用never。ever表示“曾經(jīng)；從來”，明顯與句意不符。第二節(jié) 書面表達 假定你是李華，你班外教Ms King任教期滿即將回國。作為班長，你將代

5、表班級在告別會上發(fā)言致謝，并贈送紀念品。內(nèi)容包括： 1. 表達感激； 2. 禮物寓意； 3. 美好祝愿。注意： 1. 詞數(shù)100左右； 2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Hi, everybody. . Thank you very much! Hi, everybody. On this special occasion, I feel much honored to represent the class to express our sincere gratitude to Ms King for her excellent work. Thanks to Ms Kings gene

6、rous help as well as her great devotion and efforts, weve become more interested in English. Ms King, heres a pen container, a souvenir that weve specially prepared for you. Hopefully youll like it. What makes this pen container special is that weve all signed on it, making it a good reminder of the happy time we spent together. Now, I