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讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)練習(xí)指導(dǎo)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)材料：Iwasasinglemotherinmy20swholivedclownandoutwithmydaughterPeggyinasmallapartment,strugglinghardtomakeourneedsmeet.Oneday,Iheadedtothedowntownforaninterview.Isatclowninthestreetcar,andthereagainsttheseatwasabeautifulsilkumbrellawithasilverhandledecoratedwithgoldscrolls,amongwhichtherewasanamecarved.Onimpulse（沖動(dòng)）1determinedtofindtheownermyself.Igotoffthestreetcarintheheavyrainandthankfullyopenedtheumbrellatoprotectmyself.ThenIsearchedatelephonehookforthename.Ifounditimmediatelyandcalledit,waitingpatiently,andthenaladyanswered."Yes,"shesaidinsurprise,withextremeexcitement,"liwasmyumbrellawhichhadbeenstolenayearago."SoappealingwasherpleasurethatIforgotIwaslookingforajobandwentdirectlytohersmallhouse.Shetooktheumbrella,withtearyeyes,explainingwithchokedvoicethattheumbrellawasgivenbyherparents,nowdead.Herhappinessatretrieving（找回）thisspecialpossessionwassuchthattohaveacceptedherrewardwouldhavespoiledsomething,soIrefusedherofferandleft.Thefollowingmonthswerehard.Icanonlyobtaintemporaryemployment,forasmallsalary.Whatwasworse,IhadjustlostmylastjobbeforeChristmas,withonlyfifteendollarsleft.Unlessamiraclehappened,IwouldbehomelessinJanuary,foodlessandjobless.Ihadprayedsteadilyforweeks,andtherehadbeennoanswerbutthiscoldnessanddarkness.TheairwasfullofChristmasmerriment,withthebellsringingandchildrenshoutinginthebitterduskoftheevening.ButthereshouldbenoChristmasforme,Iknew,nogifts,noremembrancewhatsoever.Thinkingofthis,Icouldn'tcontrolmytearsonmywayfrontthestreetcartohome,butImanagedasmilesoIcouldgreetmylittledaughter.Sheopenedthedoorformeandthrewherselfinmyarms,screamingjoyouslyanddemandingdesirablyforherChristmasgift.ThereIstood,frozen,overwhelmedbymisery.注意：所續(xù)寫(xiě)短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；Paragraph1:Suddenly,thedoorbellrangandPeggyrushedtoanswerit,callingthatitmustbeSantaClaus.Paragraph2:Suddenly,anoteattachedtoonepackagecaughtmyeyes..【詳解】通過(guò)閱讀所給文章可知，上文講述了單親媽媽帶著女兒艱苦生活去市區(qū)尋找工作，發(fā)現(xiàn)了一把精致的雨傘，決定尋找雨傘的主人，找到主人后，拒絕雨傘主人的答謝。后來(lái)媽媽圣誕節(jié)前失業(yè)，雪上加霜，窮途末路，傷心絕望，而女兒滿心歡喜地期待圣誕禮物，媽媽卻不知所措……【情節(jié)】續(xù)寫(xiě)部分分為兩段：第一段開(kāi)頭是：突然，門(mén)鈴響了，Peggy跑去開(kāi)門(mén)，說(shuō)這一定是圣誕老人。所以后文應(yīng)該是講述母女倆收到包裹的事情，包裹是給作者的，作者感到很驚喜。第二段開(kāi)頭是：突然，一個(gè)包裹上的一張紙條引起了我的注意。本段應(yīng)該寫(xiě)作者知道了寄包裹的人就是之前歸還雨傘的主人，在那個(gè)寒冷的圣誕節(jié)作者因?yàn)樗呐e動(dòng)感到異常溫暖?！菊Z(yǔ)料庫(kù)】greetsbheartily：由衷地問(wèn)候某人can'thelpclappingone'shands：情不自禁地拍起手來(lái)inrapture/withecstasy/withmerriment/withsheerexhilaration：欣喜若狂beoccupiedwithloadsof…：滿是大量的…inaconfused/puzzledtone/voice：用疑惑的語(yǔ)調(diào)/聲音belostinadeepthought：陷入沉思holdthenotetightly：緊緊握著紙條onthevergeoftears：快哭了withacurrentofwarmthspreadingovermybody：一股暖流傳遍全身afreezingcold/bone-chillyChristmas：在寒冷/刺骨的圣誕節(jié)myheartwasbrimmedwithappreciation:我的心充滿了感激PraytoGod/Godheardmybenediction：向上帝祈禱/上帝聽(tīng)到了我的祈禱asurgeofinnerpeacecamefloodingmeinwaves：一股內(nèi)心的平靜涌上來(lái)淹沒(méi)了我fuelsbwithgreathope：使某人充滿希望范文Paragraph1:Suddenly,thedoorbellrangandPeggyrushedtoanswerit,callingthatitmustbeSantaClaus.Iheardnman>reetPegayheartily,tellingherthattherewereseveralChristmaspackagesandthenhandthemtoPegHV,whocouldn'thelpclappingherhardsinraptureatthenews.Apparently,hewasadeliveryman,hisarmsoccupiedwithloadsofparcels.Isaidinaconfusedtore,“Sir,itmustbeamistake”,buthecheckedmyname,confirmeditandleftimmediately.Iwaslostinadeepthought,wonderingwhowoulddelivermesuchunexpectedChristmasgifts,whilePeggysatdownorthefloorandbegantochecktheparcelswithsheerexhilaration.Paragraph2:Suddenly,anoteattachedtoonepackagecaughtmyeyes.Comingintomvsightweresomebriefwords,savin日，“Thankyouforreturningmyumbrella,whichmeansalottome.MerryChristmas!”ItwasthatladywhosentmesurprisingRifts.Holdingthenotetightly,Iwasorthevergeoftears,withacurrentofwarmthspreadingovermvbodv.OnthisfreezingcoldChristmas,Ihadnomoneyforrent,withonly15dollarsleftinmypocket.Butmyheartwasbrimmedwith