語(yǔ)篇分析實(shí)例分析(version3)21課件

從語(yǔ)篇分析角度入手，

提升試題評(píng)析課的

思維品質(zhì)訓(xùn)練

廣東番禺中學(xué)

黃麗從語(yǔ)篇分析角度入語(yǔ)篇分析試題評(píng)析模式（1）2017年高考閱讀D篇篇章分析宏觀分析篇章體裁：說(shuō)明文微觀分析語(yǔ)法銜接：指代詞匯銜接：重現(xiàn)、同現(xiàn)說(shuō)明對(duì)象：Abuild-it-yourselfsolarstillAsolarstill語(yǔ)篇分析試題評(píng)析模式（1）2017年高考閱讀D篇篇章分析宏

Abuild-it-yourselfsolarstill（蒸餾器）isoneofthebestwaystoobtaindrinkingwaterinareaswheretheliquidisnotreadilyavailable.

DevelopedbytwodoctorsintheU.S.DepartmentofAgriculture,it’sanexcellentwatercollector.Unfortunately,youmustcarrythenecessaryequipmentwithyou,sinceit’sallbutimpossibletofindnaturalsubstitutes.

Theonlycomponentsrequired,though,area5＇5＇sheetofclearorslightlymilkyplastic,sixfeetofplastictube,andacontainer—perhapsjustadrinkingcup—tocatchthewater.Thesepiecescanbefoldedintoaneatlittlepackandfastenedonyourbelt.ItsfunctionthenecessaryequipmentTheonlycomponentsmilkyplasticplastictubeacontainerdrinkingcupThesepieces上義詞下義詞 Abuild-it-yourselfsolarst 2.Toconstructaworkingstill,useasharpstickorrocktodig

ahole

fourfeetacrossandthreefeetdeep.

Trytomaketheholeinadampareatoincreasethewatercatcher’sproductivity.

Placeyourcupinthedeepestpartofthehole.

Thenlaythetubeinplacesothatoneendrestsallthewayinthecupandtherestofthelinerunsup—andout—thesideofthehole.3.Next,covertheholewiththeplasticsheet,securingtheedgesoftheplasticwithdirtandweightingthesheet’scenterdownwitharock.

Theplasticshouldnowformacone(圓錐體)with45-degree-angledsides.Thelowpointofthesheetmustbecentereddirectlyover,andnomorethanthreeinchesabove,thecup.關(guān)注句式的使用 2.Toconstructaworkingst33.Whatdoestheunderlinedphrase“thewatercatcher”inparagraph2referto?A.Thetube.B.Thestill.C.Thehole.D.Thecup.34.What’sthelaststepofconstructingaworkingsolarstill?Digaholeofacertainsize. B.Putthecupinplace.C.Weightthesheet’scenterdown.

D.Covertheholewiththeplasticsheet.33.Whatdoestheunderlinedp 4.Thesolarstill

works

bycreatingagreenhouseundertheplastic.

Groundwaterevaporates(蒸發(fā))andcollectsonthesheetuntilsmalldropsofwaterform, rundownthematerialandfalloffintothecup.

Whenthecontainerisfull,youcansucktherefreshmentoutthroughthetube,andwon’thavetobreakdownthestilleverytimeyouneedadrink.How：furtherexplanation 4.ThesolarstillworksHow35.Whenasolarstillworks,dropsofwatercomeintothecupfrom

.theplastictubeB.outsidetheholeC.theopenairD.beneaththesheet35.Whenasolarstillworks,Pa1:thebuildingmaterialofasolarstillPa2-3:thebuildingprocedureP4:theworkingprincipleofasolarstillPa1:thebuildingmaterialofPage

93.語(yǔ)篇分析模式24.回顧篇章總體框架， 畫(huà)出篇章結(jié)構(gòu)圖3.理清4個(gè)關(guān)系 段落與篇章、段落與段落、 句子與段落、句子與句子

2.尋找段落主題句段落大意

1.典型篇章（具備文體的典型特征）一二三四Page

9Page93.語(yǔ)篇分析模式24.回顧篇章總體框架，3

1.典型篇章（議論文）1.(廣州一模C篇)1.典型篇章（議論文）1.(廣州一模C篇)PA1:BillGatesrecentlypredictedthatonlinelearningwillmakeplace-basedcollegeslesssignificant,andfiveyearsfromnow,studentswillbeabletofindthebestlecturesintheworldonline.IapplaudMr.Gates.Butwhat’stakingussolong?Pa2:Asearlyas1997,MIT(麻省理工）decidedtopostvideosofalluniversitylecturesonline,forfree,forallpeople.Buttoday,howmanystudentshaveyoumetwhomasteredadvancedmathematicsornuclearphysicsfromanMITonlinevideo?Unfortunately,theanswerisnotmany.WhydoestheauthorquotewhatBillGates’predictionaboutonlinelearninghere?Leadstothetopic.Raisetheproblem/question.PA1:BillGatesrecentlypredicPa3:Theproblemisthepoorqualityofonlineeducationwebsitesandtheexperiencetheyprovidetostudents.ThosewhogototheMITwebsiteandwatchcoursesonlinearesurelyverysmartpeople,butifsnotlikeplayingavideogamesuchasWorldofWarcraft.Onlythemostardentstudents,thosewhoarehighlymotivated,willdevotethemselvestostudyingtheseboringonlinevideos.Pa4:Therealquestioniswhywearen’tspendingmoretodevelopbetteronlineeducationplatforms.WhereistheAvatarofeducation?Thinkaboutthis.ThemarketforHollywoodfilmsperyeariswortharound30billionUSD.Educationintheworldisatrillion-dollar-a-yearmarket,hundredsoftimesbiggerthanHollywoodmovies.Yetthemostexpensivedigitallearningsystemeverbuiltcostwellunder100milliondollars.遞進(jìn)式問(wèn)題原因分析，找到問(wèn)題的根源AnalyzethereasonsPa3:Theproblemisthepoorqu Pa4:Therealquestioniswhywearen’tspendingmoretodevelopbetteronlineeducationplatforms.Whereisthe

Avatarofeducation?Thinkaboutthis.ThemarketforHollywoodfilmsperyeariswortharound30billionUSD.Educationintheworldisatrillion-dollar-a-yearmarket,hundredsoftimesbiggerthanHollywoodmovies.Yetthemostexpensivedigitallearningsystemeverbuiltcostwellunder100milliondollars.

31.WhydoestheauthormentionHollywood? A.ToshowthatHollywoodproducesmanysuccessfulmovies.

B.Toprovethateducationismoreprofitablethanentertainment. C.Toarguethatmoviedirectorsshouldproduceeducationalcontent.

D.TourgethatmoremoneybespentdevelopingeducationalwebsitesTopicsentence舉例是為了證明觀點(diǎn)服務(wù)。本題實(shí)際問(wèn)這個(gè)段落的主題是什么？ Pa4:TherealquestioniswhyPa5:BillGates’predictionisgoingtohappen.Thereisnodoubtaboutit. Butitwillonlyhappenwhenwecreatehighleveleducationalcontentandexperiencesthatengageandexcitemorethanhaseverbeenpossibleintherealworld.What’sthewriter’sattitudetowardsonlinelearning?positiveHowcanweturntheminreality?OffersolutionsTheauthor’sattitudestowardonlinelearningandhissolutionstoit.首尾段呼應(yīng)Pa5:BillGates’predictionisPa1:Pa2:Pa3-4:Pa5:Leadstothetopic.Raisetheproblem/question.AnalyzethereasonsTheauthor’sattitudestowardonlinelearningandhissolutionstoit.12345Pa1:Leadstothetopic.Raiset熟悉英語(yǔ)作者的思維特點(diǎn)英語(yǔ)篇章建構(gòu)的特點(diǎn)建立某些題材、類(lèi)型、模式、連續(xù)體的圖式典型文體謀篇布局的特點(diǎn)，語(yǔ)言特色5.總結(jié)提升（1）--純語(yǔ)言學(xué)習(xí)角度熟悉英語(yǔ)作者的思維特點(diǎn)英語(yǔ)篇章建構(gòu)的特點(diǎn)建立某些題材、5.總結(jié)提升（2）--備考解題角度好處：1.拋棄只見(jiàn)樹(shù)木，不見(jiàn)森林的做法，提升學(xué)生對(duì)典型文體篇章結(jié)構(gòu)的理解；2.不僅理解字面意思，更關(guān)注段落與篇章，段落之間，句子與段落，句子與句子的關(guān)系3.邏輯分析能力的提升直接帶動(dòng)七選五和完形填空解題能力的提升5.總結(jié)提升（2）--備考解題角度好處：1.拋棄只見(jiàn)樹(shù)木，Page

18提升對(duì)語(yǔ)言的感受力核心素養(yǎng)Page

181.人物的情感態(tài)度2.由淺及潛3.語(yǔ)言邏輯思維4.提升思維品質(zhì)Page18提升對(duì)語(yǔ)言的感受力核心素養(yǎng)Page體會(huì)：1.好的教學(xué)方法一定吻合人的認(rèn)知心理學(xué)。人獲取信息的通道：視覺(jué)：大于70%聽(tīng)覺(jué)：15%其他：…2.講評(píng)課一定要做課件。課件是老師教學(xué)思維/解題思路的外化,幫助學(xué)生最大限度地獲取老師的信息，實(shí)現(xiàn)高效教學(xué)。體會(huì)：1.好的教學(xué)方法一定吻合人的認(rèn)知心理學(xué)。有高果效有高果效Thankyou!Thankyou!從語(yǔ)篇分析角度入手，

提升試題評(píng)析課的

思維品質(zhì)訓(xùn)練

廣東番禺中學(xué)

黃麗從語(yǔ)篇分析角度入語(yǔ)篇分析試題評(píng)析模式（1）2017年高考閱讀D篇篇章分析宏觀分析篇章體裁：說(shuō)明文微觀分析語(yǔ)法銜接：指代詞匯銜接：重現(xiàn)、同現(xiàn)說(shuō)明對(duì)象：Abuild-it-yourselfsolarstillAsolarstill語(yǔ)篇分析試題評(píng)析模式（1）2017年高考閱讀D篇篇章分析宏

Abuild-it-yourselfsolarstill（蒸餾器）isoneofthebestwaystoobtaindrinkingwaterinareaswheretheliquidisnotreadilyavailable.

DevelopedbytwodoctorsintheU.S.DepartmentofAgriculture,it’sanexcellentwatercollector.Unfortunately,youmustcarrythenecessaryequipmentwithyou,sinceit’sallbutimpossibletofindnaturalsubstitutes.

Theonlycomponentsrequired,though,area5＇5＇sheetofclearorslightlymilkyplastic,sixfeetofplastictube,andacontainer—perhapsjustadrinkingcup—tocatchthewater.Thesepiecescanbefoldedintoaneatlittlepackandfastenedonyourbelt.ItsfunctionthenecessaryequipmentTheonlycomponentsmilkyplasticplastictubeacontainerdrinkingcupThesepieces上義詞下義詞 Abuild-it-yourselfsolarst 2.Toconstructaworkingstill,useasharpstickorrocktodig

ahole

fourfeetacrossandthreefeetdeep.

Trytomaketheholeinadampareatoincreasethewatercatcher’sproductivity.

Placeyourcupinthedeepestpartofthehole.

Thenlaythetubeinplacesothatoneendrestsallthewayinthecupandtherestofthelinerunsup—andout—thesideofthehole.3.Next,covertheholewiththeplasticsheet,securingtheedgesoftheplasticwithdirtandweightingthesheet’scenterdownwitharock.

Theplasticshouldnowformacone(圓錐體)with45-degree-angledsides.Thelowpointofthesheetmustbecentereddirectlyover,andnomorethanthreeinchesabove,thecup.關(guān)注句式的使用 2.Toconstructaworkingst33.Whatdoestheunderlinedphrase“thewatercatcher”inparagraph2referto?A.Thetube.B.Thestill.C.Thehole.D.Thecup.34.What’sthelaststepofconstructingaworkingsolarstill?Digaholeofacertainsize. B.Putthecupinplace.C.Weightthesheet’scenterdown.

D.Covertheholewiththeplasticsheet.33.Whatdoestheunderlinedp 4.Thesolarstill

works

bycreatingagreenhouseundertheplastic.

Groundwaterevaporates(蒸發(fā))andcollectsonthesheetuntilsmalldropsofwaterform, rundownthematerialandfalloffintothecup.

Whenthecontainerisfull,youcansucktherefreshmentoutthroughthetube,andwon’thavetobreakdownthestilleverytimeyouneedadrink.How：furtherexplanation 4.ThesolarstillworksHow35.Whenasolarstillworks,dropsofwatercomeintothecupfrom

.theplastictubeB.outsidetheholeC.theopenairD.beneaththesheet35.Whenasolarstillworks,Pa1:thebuildingmaterialofasolarstillPa2-3:thebuildingprocedureP4:theworkingprincipleofasolarstillPa1:thebuildingmaterialofPage

303.語(yǔ)篇分析模式24.回顧篇章總體框架， 畫(huà)出篇章結(jié)構(gòu)圖3.理清4個(gè)關(guān)系 段落與篇章、段落與段落、 句子與段落、句子與句子

2.尋找段落主題句段落大意

1.典型篇章（具備文體的典型特征）一二三四Page

30Page93.語(yǔ)篇分析模式24.回顧篇章總體框架，3

1.典型篇章（議論文）1.(廣州一模C篇)1.典型篇章（議論文）1.(廣州一模C篇)PA1:BillGatesrecentlypredictedthatonlinelearningwillmakeplace-basedcollegeslesssignificant,andfiveyearsfromnow,studentswillbeabletofindthebestlecturesintheworldonline.IapplaudMr.Gates.Butwhat’stakingussolong?Pa2:Asearlyas1997,MIT(麻省理工）decidedtopostvideosofalluniversitylecturesonline,forfree,forallpeople.Buttoday,howmanystudentshaveyoumetwhomasteredadvancedmathematicsornuclearphysicsfromanMITonlinevideo?Unfortunately,theanswerisnotmany.WhydoestheauthorquotewhatBillGates’predictionaboutonlinelearninghere?Leadstothetopic.Raisetheproblem/question.PA1:BillGatesrecentlypredicPa3:Theproblemisthepoorqualityofonlineeducationwebsitesandtheexperiencetheyprovidetostudents.ThosewhogototheMITwebsiteandwatchcoursesonlinearesurelyverysmartpeople,butifsnotlikeplayingavideogamesuchasWorldofWarcraft.Onlythemostardentstudents,thosewhoarehighlymotivated,willdevotethemselvestostudyingtheseboringonlinevideos.Pa4:Therealquestioniswhywearen’tspendingmoretodevelopbetteronlineeducationplatforms.WhereistheAvatarofeducation?Thinkaboutthis.ThemarketforHollywoodfilmsperyeariswortharound30billionUSD.Educationintheworldisatrillion-dollar-a-yearmarket,hundredsoftimesbiggerthanHollywoodmovies.Yetthemostexpensivedigitallearningsystemeverbuiltcostwellunder100milliondollars.遞進(jìn)式問(wèn)題原因分析，找到問(wèn)題的根源AnalyzethereasonsPa3:Theproblemisthepoorqu Pa4:Therealquestioniswhywearen’tspendingmoretodevelopbetteronlineeducationplatforms.Whereisthe

Avatarofeducation?Thinkaboutthis.ThemarketforHollywoodfilmsperyeariswortharound30billionUSD.Educationintheworldisatrillion-dollar-a-yearmarket,hundredsoftimesbiggerthanHollywoodmovies.Yetthemostexpensivedigitallearningsystemeverbuiltcostwellunder100milliondollars.

31.WhydoestheauthormentionHollywood? A.ToshowthatHollywoodproducesmanysuccessfulmovies.

B.Toprovethateducationismoreprofitablethanentertainment. C.Toarguethatmoviedirectorsshouldproduceeducationalcontent.

D.Tourgethatmoremoneyb