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XB4U1ScienceFictionContentsReviewPredictionApossiblesampleCriticalthinkingSatisfactionGuaranteedWritingskillsEvaluationConclusionContinuationwritingHomeworkGladysClaffernTask1ReviewI.Basedonthefollowingrelationshipsbetweenthecharacters,canyouretellthestory?LarryBelmontClaireacouplefriendsworkforacompanytestoutTonyahouseholdrobotTask2PredictionI.Findoutthestoryline.Part1(para1-2)tobetestedoutStorylineWhatistobecontinued?ClimaxPara.1:AfterTonydisappearedfromsight,Clairewalkedslowlytoopenthedoor.Para.2:Thenextmorning,acardroveupandtookTonyaway.developmentPart2(para3-8)offeringhelpPart3(para9)doorbellringingprediction
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Paragraph2:Task2PredictionAfterTonydisappearedfromsight,Clairewalkedslowlytoopenthedoor.Thenextmorning,acardroveupandtookTonyaway.1.Whowouldcome?2.Whatwouldhappen?1.WherewouldTonybetakenaway?2.Whydidhegothere?Tips1:Learntoraisequestions.Gladys?Larry?Party?Company?Testresult?Task2PredictionII.Findouttheemotionline.ClimaxStorylineEmotionlineC:embarrassedC:alarmedPart1(para1-2)tobetestedoutPart2(para3-8)offeringhelpPart3(para9)doorbellringingC:unwillingC:admiredPara.1:AfterTonydisappearedfromsight,Clairewalkedslowlytoopenthedoor.Para.2:Thenextmorning,acardroveupandtookTonyaway.HowwouldClaire’sfeelingchange?Task2PredictionTips1:Learntoraisequestions.HowwouldClaire’sfeelingchange?Howwouldshefeelabouttheparty?AboutTony’sleavingHappy?Satisfied?Sad?
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Paragraph2:Task2PredictionIII.Predictthetime&placecluesAfterTonydisappearedfromsight,Clairewalkedslowlytoopenthedoor.Thenextmorning,acardroveupandtookTonyaway.Thenightofthepartyarrived.AtClaire’shome.ThenextmorningThecompanyTips2:Learntofindclues
I.Appreciate&analyzesomeofyourwritingsII.Discuss&tellwhetheryourstoryislogical&givereasons.GroupworkTask3EvaluationAnexcellentwritingTask3EvaluationIII.Whatdoyouthinkanexcellentwritingshouldbelike?LanguageThemeLogic
Logicalplots:1.Noextracharacters2.Noadditionalplot2.Usecorrectandvividlanguage3.PositiveandeducationalthemeTask4WritingskillsI.Howtomakeyourplotslogical?knownunknownClaire’sproblemsContinuationPara.1Tony’shelp1.notclever2.homenotelegant3.envyGladys1.makeherbeautiful2.makeherhomeelegant3.inviteGladystothepartyGladysenviedClaire:herbeautyher
eleganthousedeliciouscuisineherhandsomeTony
…Task4WritingskillsI.Howtomakeyourplotslogical?Tony’sproblemsContinuationPara.21.acompany2.ahouseholdrobot3.beingtestedout4.toleavethenextday5.title:satisfactionguaranteed1.Tony__________________thecompanyand_____________abouthisthreeweekswithClaire.2.Thecompany
was
very________with
Tony’swork.knownunknownwastakentogaveareportsatisfiedImitationActionTask4WritingskillsExample:Shescreamed,pushedhimaway,andrantoherroom.(Para.8)She________“l(fā)eavemealone”,_____toherbed,and_______allnight.仿寫:她大叫“別管我”,沖到床上,哭了整晚。II.Howtomakeyourlanguagevivid?三連動(dòng)---動(dòng)作鏈:情節(jié)緊湊,更具畫面感shoutedrancriedImitationFeelingExample:Howawfultobediscoveredbyher,Clairethought.(Para.6)Whatasweetvictory(Howamazing)tobeenviedbythosewomen!仿寫:被那些女人羨慕是多么甜蜜的勝利!Task4WritingskillsII.Howtomakeyourlanguagevivid?Action+FeelingExample:想到Tony只是機(jī)器人,Claire把自己關(guān)在房間,悲痛欲絕,哭得死去活來。RememberingthatTonywasjustamachine,Claire_______________,tears_________________herface.Task4WritingskillsII.Howtomakeyourlanguagevivid?shutherselfinstreamingdownClaire_______________,_________________inherhands.sobbedsadlyClaire雙手捂著臉悲傷地抽泣。coveringherfaceClaire_____________________,andcouldn’thelp___________.feltseizedbyaburstofsadnessClaire悲傷得忍不住哭泣。cryingbitterlyTask4WritingskillsThreerulesforcontinuationwritingAction--Response
Conflict--SolutionNegative--PositiveTheprocessofcontinuationwriting
Step1:ThoroughreadingStep2:LogicalplottingStep3:VividwritingSummary:Howtowriteanexcellentwriting?ClaireTonyTask5Apossiblesample
AfterTonydisappearedfromsight,Clairewalkedslowlytoopenthedoor.
Itwasthenthat
ClairerealizedthatTonyhadopenedthecurtainsofthefrontwindow.Herguestshadseeneverything!
Thewomenwere
impressedbyClaire,thehouseandthedeliciouscuisine.Justbeforetheyleft,ClaireheardGladys
whisperingtoanotherwomanthatshehadneverseenanyonesohandsomeasTony.Whatasweetvictorytobe
enviedbythosewomen!Shemightnotbeasbeautifulasthem,butnoneofthemhadsuchahandsomelover.
Thenshe
remembered—
Tonywasjustamachine.She
shouted"Leave
me
alone"andrantoherbed.Shecriedallnight.
Task5Apossiblesample
ThenextmorningacardroveupandtookTonyaway.
Thecompany
was
very
pleasedwith
Tony'sreportonhisthreeweekswithClaire.Tonyhad
protectedahumanbeing
from
harmwhenhe
preventedClairefromfallingoffaladder.Hehadalsoopenedthecurtainsthatnightsot
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