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翻譯選材來(lái)源于編譯平臺(tái)上的該文本是赫芬頓》于2014年12月13日的一篇健康類(lèi)。筆者對(duì)整篇文章進(jìn)行了翻譯，主要內(nèi)容為最健康的10個(gè)州被評(píng)選的原因以及影響人健康的重要因素分全文的關(guān)于最近評(píng)選出10個(gè)健康指數(shù)最高的州，文章就影響為筆者一直在編譯平臺(tái)上做稿件的編譯以往相關(guān)的積累可降低翻譯過(guò) （如圖關(guān)整理，以便于翻譯過(guò)進(jìn)行查閱（詳見(jiàn)附件二）翻譯中的及策來(lái)源的平行文本或醫(yī)學(xué)詞典，如： 就primarycarephysicians一詞為例展示對(duì)該問(wèn)題的解決過(guò)程。原文：…Whenitcomestothequalityofclinicalcare,onceagain,thehealthieststatesstoodout.Sixofthese10stateswereamongthetop10nationallyfortheconcentrationofprimarycarephysiciansandhighestfigureinthe在中進(jìn)行搜索，結(jié)果顯示primarycarephysicians有“初級(jí)原文：…Whiletherehavebeenvastimprovementsininfant-ratesandsmokingratesoverthelastseveraldecades,theUnitedStatesstillstruggleswithobesityanddiabetesinparticular.，譯文：…雖然在過(guò)去的幾十年里的嬰兒率和吸煙率有了很大的改善,但如今的人民仍飽受肥胖癥和的折磨。(見(jiàn)附錄1)，主語(yǔ);句法重形合,要求句子各成分特別清楚,以免結(jié)構(gòu),影響句意。而漢語(yǔ)則是顯著的語(yǔ)言,突出,主語(yǔ)不突出;句法重意合,指代關(guān)系主語(yǔ)難以一眼看清,需要讀者用心識(shí)別因而在英譯漢過(guò),確定主語(yǔ)時(shí)須考慮原文：…Yet,accordingtoRandall,“Weknowthatjusthavinghealthinsuranceisn’tenough.It’salsoaccesstocare,andmakinggoodwereceivewhenwedoaccessthehealthcaresystem.”譯文：…然而，博士說(shuō)道“我們深知光有醫(yī)療是遠(yuǎn)遠(yuǎn)不夠的，健康還涉及到、生活方式的選擇以及醫(yī)療系統(tǒng)中臨床護(hù)理的質(zhì)量”達(dá)信息焦點(diǎn)的一個(gè)重要語(yǔ)序的不同安排就是為了適應(yīng)表示不同信息焦點(diǎn)的原文：…Negativehealth eswerefarlesscommoninthehealthieststatesthanintheleasthealthyones.Theprevalenceofdueinparttorisingobesityrates.厲，努力學(xué)習(xí)專(zhuān)業(yè)知識(shí)，搜索的可用資源，爭(zhēng)取早日成為一名合格的譯者。Nida,EugeneA..OnTranslation|M|.譚載喜譯.中國(guó)對(duì)外翻譯公司,1984李長(zhǎng)栓.非文學(xué)翻譯. :外語(yǔ)教學(xué)與研究 源文本來(lái)源：24/7Wall ByThomasC. Source10MostHealthyStatesinAmericansarebynomeansthehealthiestpeopleintheworld.Whiletherehavebeenvastimprovementsininfant-mortalityratesandsmokingratesoverthelastseveraldecades,theUnitedanddiabetesinparticular.Lastyear,thenation’sobesityrateincreasedto29.4%ofadultsfrom27.6%theyearbefore.雖然在過(guò)去的幾十年里，的嬰兒死亡率和吸煙率有了很大的改善,但如今的人民仍飽受肥胖癥和的折27.6%29.4%。，，TheUnitedHealthFoundation’s2014HealthRankingsreportexaminedbothdeterminantsandhealthes.Itincludedsuchfactorsashealthybehaviors,qualityofhealthcare,health,thepresenceofdiseasesanddeathsfromillnessesacrossthenation.Healthvariesconsiderablybetweenstates.Basedonthisyear’seditionofAmerica’sHealthRankings,HawaiiandMississippiareonceagainthehealthiestandleast2014年健康衛(wèi)生健康Negativehealtheswerefarlesscommoninthehealthieststatesthanintheleasthealthyones.TheprevalenceofdiabeteshasincreaseddramaticallyinUnitedStatesinrecentyears,升的肥胖率。在健康指數(shù)最高的10allofthehealthieststates,thenationalrateofnearly10%ofadults.Inaddition,themajorityofthehealthieststateswerealsocardiovasculardeathsper州,成人均低于發(fā)病10%這些城市也是10大心血管率最低Thecostofpoorhealthcanbemeasuredinyearsoflife.TheCentersforDiseaseControlandPrevention(CDC)tracksprematureyearslostwhenpeopledonotlivetoage75.Thisyear,theCDCestimatedthatnearly7,000yearswerelostforevery100,000allofthehealthieststates,onewhich,Massachusetts,led身體狀況不佳往往會(huì)影響的長(zhǎng)短。疾病控制和預(yù)防中心研究過(guò)75和預(yù)防中心統(tǒng)計(jì)，每十萬(wàn)個(gè)人加起70005345nationwith5,345estimatedyearslostper100,000people.Healthybehaviorandhealth.AccordingtoDr.RhondaRandall,thechiefmedicalofficerfortheUnitedRetireeSolutionsandasenioradvisortotheUnitedHealthFoundation,theUnitedStateshastackledissueslikeinfantmortalityandsmokingphysicalinactivityandobesity.Thosearethingsthatarecompleywithinourcontrol,”Randallsaid.Lessthan75%ofAmericansreportedregularphysicalactivity.Innineofthethan70%ofpeopleexercised

，?？档闹饕蛩?。醫(yī)療退休人員解決方案的首席醫(yī)療官及衛(wèi)生基金會(huì)高級(jí)顧問(wèn)朗達(dá)·博士（RhondaRandall）表示已經(jīng)解決了嬰兒死亡率和吸煙等問(wèn)題定期鍛煉身體的人不超過(guò)75%。然70%。，。Moneyandemploymentclearlyyrolesinhealth.Thehealthieststates wealthiest,andeachhada eabovethemedianin2013.Allbutoneof入均高于平均收入同年數(shù)據(jù)顯示healthieststatesalsohadaunemploymentratethanthe均低于7.4%的失業(yè)率因?yàn)楹芏鄏ateof7.4%lastyear.國(guó)人的工作都配有醫(yī)療，所以失unemploymentratesimprove率低意味著的人可以享受醫(yī)療likelihoodofreceiving險(xiǎn)10個(gè)最健康的州的醫(yī)療覆蓋insurance,asmanyAmericans均高于國(guó)內(nèi)醫(yī)療覆蓋率，其中有coveredthroughtheirwork.All個(gè)州的無(wú)醫(yī)療居民比率比國(guó)內(nèi)平thehealthieststatesalso14.6%bettercoverageratesthannationalcoveragerate.Andthreeofthe10states,percentageofresidentshealthcoveragewaslessthanthenationalfigureofknowthatjusthavinghealthinsuranceisn’tenough.It’saccesstocare,andmakinggooddecisionsforourlifestylechoices,andthenthequalityofaccessthehealthcaresystem.”Whenitcomestothequalityofclinicalcare,onceagain,thethese10stateswereamongthetopofprimarycarephysicians,andMassachusettshadmorethan200doctorsforevery100,000residents,thehighestfigureinthecountry.Randallwentontosaythathealthreallyneedsto

然而博士說(shuō)道光有醫(yī)療是遠(yuǎn)遠(yuǎn)不夠的，健康還涉及到、生活方式的選擇以及醫(yī)療保6個(gè)州位居十大基層，前領(lǐng)先。，understoodbroadly.“It’snotcare,orwhenyougotoseeyourdoctor,it’salsoabouttheenvironmentwithwhichwelive.”asafeenvironment.Ninthgradershadrelativelylowchancesofgraduatinghighschoolinmanyoftheleasthealthystates,forexample.Additionally,theviolentwerefarhigherthanthenationalrateof387sper率遠(yuǎn)遠(yuǎn)高于每10萬(wàn)人387起事件的率Publicisyetanothercontributor.WhiletheUnitedStatesspent$90percapitaonpublichealthservices,severalthehealthieststates—國(guó)家政策是另一個(gè)影響健康的因素。雖然每年平均為每位公。。Vermont,Massachusetts,andNorthDakota—spentmorethan$100perresident.Yet,amajorityofthehealthieststatesactuallyspentlesspercapitaonpublichealthexinedthat“publichealthspendingisanimportantmeasure,whichiswhyweincludedit.But,it’salsoimportanthoweffectivetheprogramsarethatthemoneyusedfor…Itis于國(guó)家人均花費(fèi)解釋道“公共BasedondataprovidedbyUnitedHealthFoundation’sAmerica’sHealthRankings,24/7thehighestandlowestoverallscores.Thesescoreswerebasedontwoseparatecategories:determinantsand 健康數(shù)據(jù)《24/7華爾街》評(píng)出了