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Let’stalkteens主題寫作指導GrowingpainsLanguageBankmonsymptomsofgrowingpains(parents)don’tunderstandthem/valuetheireffort(parents)havetoomuchcontrolovertheirlife(parents)expecttoomuchofthem(期望過高)Haveunrealistic(不切實際的)expectationsoftheirchildrenFailtomeet/liveuptotheirparents’expectationsStruggletokeepupwiththeirclassmatesinstudiesStruggletogetalongwithclassmates/friendsFeelleftout/isolated(孤立)byclassmatesStruggletobalancetheiracademicworkloadwithextracurricular(課外的)activitiesHavedifficultystayingawayfromdigitaldistractions(數(shù)字干擾)Finditchallengingtomaintaininterestandenthusiasm(熱情)intheirstudiesBefaced/confronted(面臨)withgreatstressandanxietyfromstudy/examsSuggestionsforaddressingparentchildtensionsForparents:Showconstant(持續(xù)的)concern/loveandsupportforteensShowrespectforteenagers’privacy(隱私)/opinionsandideasListentoteenagersactivelywithoutjudgmentSetclearboundaries(界限)andruleswhileallowingroomfornegotiation(協(xié)商)AvoidconstantcriticismandfocusonpraisingtheireffortsandachievementsCreateopportunitiesforqualityfamilytimesuchregularmealsandsharedactivitiesDon’tmakeallthedecisionsforteenagersDon’tcontroleverything/allowteenagerstohavecontrolovertheirownlivesDon’tignorechildren’sinnerthoughtsDon’tattachtoomuchimportanceto(過分重視)scoresDon’tpushthemtoohard(逼迫太緊)instudiesDon’texpecttoomuchofteensForteenagers:keepabalancebetweenrelaxationandstudyexpressgratitude(感恩)toparents/showappreciationforparents’effortsandguidanceExpressyourthoughtsandfeelingscalmlyandrespectfullymunicatewithparentslikefriendsTrytounderstandyourparents’pointofviewbyputtingyourselfintheirshoes(設(shè)身處地)Takepartinsharedactivitiesofthewholefamily/ofclassmatesDon’tblame/quarrelwithourparentsforoverprotecting/misunderstandingyouDon’tturnadeafearto(充耳不聞)parents’suggestionsDon’tlosetemper(發(fā)脾氣)easilyMakescientificplansfordailytasksandsticktothemTurntoteachersforhelpwhenfacedwithlearningdifficultiesBeopentoothers’criticismBefriendlyandhelpfultoclassmateswhenTakeresponsibilityforyourownactionsandmistakesAboutLettersofAdvice(建議信)OutlinePara.1:寫信原因(題干背景信息介紹)+寫信目的Para.2:建議的具體內(nèi)容+建議原因(切忌假大空,要具體、可行、有針對性和說服力)Para.3:希望采納建議+表達美好祝愿Usefulsentences[Thebeginningpart]呈現(xiàn)問題,表明寫作目的:1)Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning.../conveymyconcernabout...2)Youhaveaskedformyadviceabout...andIwilltrytomakesomesuggestions.3)Inresponsetoyourlettertellingmeyouhopeto...,Ihavesomeideasforyou.4)I’msorrytohearyou'rehavingdifficulty/troublein...;I’monlytoowillingtohelpyouandmytipsareasfollows…[Themainbody]建議內(nèi)容并說明建議好處:1)Ithinkthemostsuitable...foryouis...,sothat...2)You’dbetter.../It’sbetterto...Inthatway,...3)Whynotdo...?/Whataboutdoing...?/It’sstronglyadvised/suggestedthatyoushould...Thus,...4)IfIwereyou,Iwould.../Itwouldbeagoodchoiceto...Bydoingthat,...[Theendingpart]希望建議有用或被接受。1)Ihopemysuggestionscanmakeadifferencetoyou.2)Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldconsidermysuggestions.3)Ihopeyouwilltakemyadviceintoaccount/consideration.4)Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals/suggestionspractical/useful/helpful.Sample假定你是李華,你的朋友Rebecca寫信告訴你,她的母親過度關(guān)注她的學習,希望她把時間都用在學習上,她感到壓力很大,心情低落。請給她寫一封信,給出你的建議,幫助她擺脫困境。要點如下:
安慰對方;2.
提出建議(注意:1.
詞數(shù)100左右(開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出,但不計入總詞數(shù));2.
可以適當增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫。)DearRebecca,Iamsorrytohearthat____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Warmregards,LiHua【寫作點撥】一、審題定調(diào)本寫作任務(wù)要求給朋友寫一封建議信,屬于應用文。建議信是向收信人就某事提出自己的建議,并說明理由,以便讓對方接受自己的想法或主張。建議信要給出寫信的原因、建議的內(nèi)容和提出建議的理由。語氣要得當,既要委婉禮貌,又要有說服力。謀篇布局主題就如何解決和父母矛盾給朋友建議體裁應用文人稱以第一、第二人稱為主時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主布局第一部分:進行安慰,表明寫作意圖;第二部分:根據(jù)提示,給出解決朋友與父母矛盾的建議及理由;第三部分:表達希望和祝愿(希望朋友考慮建議)。SampleappreciationDearRebecca,I'msorrytohearthatyou'refeelinganxiousaboutthepressurefromyourmother.I’monlytoowillingtohelpyouandmytipsareasfollows.Tobeginwith,Iwouldsuggesthavinganopenandhonestconversationwithyourmotheraboutyourfeelings.Youshouldletherknowthatyouappreciatehersupportandconcern,butrelaxationandleisurearealsoanessentialpartofahealthyandfulfilled(充實的)life.municationiskey,anditwillhelpherunderstandyourperspective.Inaddition,ifpossible,youcouldinvolveyourteachersorschoolcounselorsintheconversation.Theycanprovideinsightsintoyourprogressandreassureyourmotheraboutyourdedicationtoyourstudies.Ihopethesesuggestionscanhelpyouaddresstheproblemswithyourmother.Wishingyoustrengthandunderstandinginthisjourney.Yourssincerely,
LiHua[plus]DearRebecca,I'msorrytohearthatyou'refeelingoverwhelmed(不堪重負的)bythepressureofyourmother’sexcessive(過度的)caresaboutyoureducation,butIcanunderstandhowitmightfeelstiflingattimes.Firstandforemost,knowthatyourwellbeingisofutmost(最大的)importance.It'spletelynaturaltoindulgeinhobbies,listentomusic,orspendtimewithfriends.Balancingacademicswithpersonaltimeisnottoomuchtoaskfor,andit'sanessentialpartofnurturing(培養(yǎng))ahealthyandfulfilled(充實的)life.Moreover,Iwouldsuggesthavinganopenandhonestconversationwithyourmotheraboutyourfeelings.Letherknowthatyouappreciatehersupport,butalsoexpresstheimportanceoffindingmomentsforrelaxationandleisure.municationiskey,anditwillhelpherunderstandyourperspective.Ihopethesesuggestionshelpyouinnavigatingthissituation(應對處境)withyourmother.Wishingyoustrengthandunderstandinginthisjourney.Warmregards,LiHuaWritingpractice[Practice1]假定你是李華,你的朋友Laura寫信告訴你,她的父母總是不讓她和朋友出去玩,過分控制她的生活,她對此很苦惱。請你按照一下要點給她回一封信。1.
安慰對方2.
提出建議注意:1.
詞數(shù)100左右(開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出,但不計入總詞數(shù));2.
可以適當增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫。DearLaura,Iamsorrytohearthat_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yourssincerely,
LiHua[Practice2]假設(shè)你是李華,你的外國網(wǎng)友Peter因迷戀游戲而被父母批評,他為此寫信向你抱怨。請給他寫一封回信,要點包括:DearPeter,Iamsorrytohearthat_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yourssincerely,
LiHuaWritingpractice參考范文[Practice1]DearLaura,I’msorrytohearthatyoufeelstressedaboutyourparents’strongdesireforcontrol.Icanunderstandhowyoumightbefeeling,soIwouldliketogiveyousomesuggestionsfrommyperspective.Tobeginwith,yourparents'intentionsarerootedinloveandadesiretokeepyousafe,sooneapproach(方法)couldbetohaveanopenandhonestconversationwiththemaboutyourfeelings.Whatyoushoulddoistopursue(追求)morefreedomwhileassuringthemthatyoucanshouldertheresponsibilityandmakesafechoices.Additionally,youcanconsiderinvolvingyourparentsinyourplans.Forexample,youcantellthemwhereyou'regoing,whoyou'llbewith,andwhatactivitiesyou'llbeengagingin(參與).Thisnotonlyreassures(使安心)thembu
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