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閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。A12yearoldboysawsomethinginashopwindowthatsethisheartracing.Itwasajewelbox.Buttheprice—fivedollars—wasfarbeyondReubenEarle’smeans.However,heopenedthedoorandwentinside.Standingproudandstraight,hetoldtheshopkeeperwhathewanted,adding,“ButIdon’thavethemoneyrightnow.Canyoupleaseholditformeforsometime?”“I’lltry,”theshopkeepersmiled.“Iwillraisethefivedollarsandnottellanybody,”Reubensaidtohimself.Hearingthesoundofhammeringfromasidestreet,Reubenhadanidea.PeoplebuilttheirownhomesinBayRoberts,usingnailspurchasedinsacks(麻布袋)fromalocalfactory.Sometimesthesackswereabandoned,andReubenknewhecouldsellthembacktothefactoryforfivecentsapiece.Thatdayhefoundtwosacksandsoldtothemaninchargeofpackingnails.Theboy’shandtightlyheldthefivecentpiecesasheranhome.Nearhishousestoodtheancientbarn(谷倉).Reubenfoundasodatinanddroppedhiscoinsinside.Thenheclimbedintothetopofthebarnandhidthetin.Allsummerlong,despitehouseworkathomeReubenkepttohissecrettask.Oftenhewascold,tiredandhungry,butthethoughtoftheobjectintheshopwindowsustainedhim.Mother’sDayhade!Heuncoveredthetincan,pouredthecoinsoutandbegantocount.Heneeded20centsmore.Hehadtofindfourmoresacksandsellthembeforethedayended.TowardseveningReubenarrivedatthefactory.Thesackbuyerwasabouttolockup.“Mister!Pleasedon’tcloseupyet”ThemanturnedandsawReuben,dirtyandsweatstained.“ebacktomorrow,boy.”“Please,Mister.Ihavetosellthesacksnow—please.”注意：1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好。Paragraph1:ThemanheardaslightshakeinReuben’svoiceandcouldtellhewasclosetotears.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Thenheplacedtheparcel(包裹)inReuben’shands.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________續(xù)寫中需要回答的問題?WhywasReubeninahurrytosellthesacks??BecausetomorrowwasMother’sDay,andheneededthemoneyfromsellingthesackstobuyaspecialgiftforhismom.?WhatdidthesackbuyerdoafterhearingReuben’sstory??Thesackbuyersoftenedhistone,inspectedthesacksReubenbrought,andcountedouttwentycentsforhim.?WhatwasintheparcelthatwasplacedinReuben’shands??TheparcelcontainedthebeautifuljewelboxthatReubenhadbeenlongingtobuyforhismother.?HowdidReuben’smotherreactwhenshereceivedthegift??Reuben’smother’seyeswelledupwithtears,andshesaiditwasthemostbeautifulthingshehadeverseen,expressinghergratitudetoReuben.?HowdidReubenfeelaftergivingthegifttohismother??Reubenfeltthatallhishardworkwasworthitandsmiledhappily.?故事主旨?Thestoryshowsthepowerofloveanddetermination.Reuben’sdeeploveforhismotherdrovehimtooveredifficultiesandworkhardtobuyheragift,demonstratingthatwithloveandperseverance,onecanachievetheirgoals.?故事山?Beginning:Reubensawajewelboxintheshopbutcouldn'taffordit.Hedecidedtoraisemoneybysellingabandonedsacks.?Middle:Reubenspentallsummercollectingandsellingsacks,facinghardshipsbutremainingdetermined.OnMother'sDay,hewasshortof20centsandurgentlyneededtosellfourmoresacks.?End:ThesackbuyerhelpedReuben,andhefinallyboughtthejewelbox.Hismotherwasdeeplytouchedwhenshereceivedthegift.?故事發(fā)展線索?Reuben'sdiscoveryofthejewelbox→Hisdecisiontoraisemoneybysellingsacks→Hiscontinuouseffortsthroughoutsummer→HisurgentneedformoneyonMother'sDay→Buyingtheboxandgivingittohismother.?情感線索?Reuben'sinitialexcitementforthejewelbox→Hisdeterminationtoearnmoneydespitedifficulties→HisanxietyonMother'sDaywhenshortofmoney→Hisjoyandfulfillmentaftergivingthegift.?續(xù)寫布局與框架?Paragraph1:FocusonReuben'sencounterwiththesackbuyer.First,describethesackbuyer'sreactiontoReuben'splea.Then,haveReubenexplainhisreasonforurgency.Finally,showthesackbuyerhelpingReubenandReubenrushingtotheshop.?Paragraph2:StartwiththeparcelbeingplacedinReuben'shands.Then,describeReubenopeningtheparcel,buyingthebox,andrunninghome.Endwithhismother'sreactionandReuben'sfeelingofsatisfaction.?續(xù)寫注意事項?承接原文:Usedetailsfromtheoriginaltext,suchasReuben'smotivation(Mother'sDaygift)andhismethodofraisingmoney(sellingsacks).?整體設(shè)計:Ensuretheplotflowssmoothly.Thesackbuyer'schangeofheartshouldseemnatural,andReuben'sactionsaftergettingthemoneyshouldfollowalogicalsequence.?巧妙設(shè)計:Addemotionaltouches,likethesackbuyerbeingtouchedbyReuben'sstoryandReuben'smother'stearfulreaction,tomakethestorymoreengaging.?高分語句?呼應(yīng)原文:“ThemanheardaslightshakeinReuben’svoiceandcouldtellhewasclosetotears.”ThisechoesReuben'sdesperatesituationasdescribedintheoriginaltextwhenhewasshortofmoney.?高級句型:“Touchedbytheboy’ssincerity,themansaid,‘Alright,letmeseewhatyouhave.’”Theuseofthepastparticiplephrase“Touchedby...”addsamoresophisticatedstructure.?主題表達(dá)&意義延伸?直接引語點明主旨:“Oh,Reuben,it’sthemostbeautifulthingI’veeverseen.Thankyou,mydear.”ThisshowsthevalueofReuben'sgiftinhismother'seyes,highlightingthelovebetweenthem.?促成轉(zhuǎn)變，引發(fā)感悟:Reuben'sjourneyfromnothavingenoughmoneytofinallygivinghismotherapreciousgiftcanmakereadersrealizethepowerofdeterminationandlove.?借象征物點明主旨:ThejewelboxsymbolizesReuben'sloveforhismother.Hishardworktoobtainitemphasizestheimportanceofmakingeffortsforlovedones.?學(xué)生寫作示范?Paragraph1:?ThemanheardaslightshakeinReuben’svoiceandcouldtellhewasclosetotears.Helookedatthedirty,tiredboyandfeltatwingeofpity.“Whatdoyouneedthemoneyforsobadly?”heasked.Reubentookadeepbreathandsaid,“Iwanttobuyapresentformymom.It’sMother’sDaytomorrow,andI’vebeensavingupforthisspecialboxforher.Please,Mister.”Themannodded,“Okay,kid.I’lltakeyoursacks.Butyoushouldgohomeandgetsomerestafterthis.”Reubenthankedhimwithabigsmileandrantowardstheshop,hisstepslightwithhope.?Paragraph2:?ThenheplacedtheparcelinReuben’shands.Reubenopeneditcarefully,hiseyeslightingupatthesightofthejewelbox.Hepaidtheshopkeeperandheldtheboxlikeitwasthemostpreciousthingintheworld.Ashereachedhome,hecalledout,“Mom!”Hismothercameoutofthelivingroom.“Thisisforyou,Mom,”hesaid,handingherthebox.Hismotheropeneditslowly,andwhenshesawthebox,hereyesfilledwithsurpriseandhappiness.“Reuben,it’swonderful.Thankyousomuch.”Reubenfeltawarmglowinside,knowingthathismonthsofhardworkhadpaidoff.【答案】ThemanheardaslightshakeinReuben’svoiceandcouldtellhewasclosetotears.“Whydo