考研英語21--寫作大作.ppt

Writing,Helen,2019/7/2,2,1 寫作基本語法,（1）被動客觀表達原則,例： As is seen from the picture, As is depicted in the picture It is vividly depicted in the picture that It is universally acknowledged that It is believed that （2）無縮寫原則 Id like toI would like to cantcannot isntis not,2.1 替換詞突破 2.1.1 常用詞 to the best of my knowledge, I hold important: imperative It is imperative that (should) (建議) (3) show: unfold It is unfolded that (寓意) 2.1.2 例舉 , such as ,2019/7/2,Writing,3,2短文寫作詞句選擇,2短文寫作詞句選擇,2.2 寫作功能句型 2.2.1 描述圖畫 （1）個體群體化原則1 兩幅圖片 Some, like +圖中人物 in the picture, do sth, while others, like +圖中人物 in the drawing, do sth. 一幅圖片,2019/7/2,Writing,4,2短文寫作詞句選擇,2.2 寫作功能句型 2.2.1 描述圖畫 （1）個體群體化原則2 寫作公式 Those who do sth. Those who tried every means to avoid their duty of looking after their elders should bear in mind that they are much indebted to their parents for their birth and growth.,2019/7/2,Writing,5,2.2 寫作功能句型 2.2.1 描述圖畫 （2）雙重否定原則 寫作公式 This picture reveals a not-uncommon phenomenon of+n./that+從句 2005 This picture reveals a not-uncommon phenomenon of how elders are treated by their grown-up children in some of the families in China.,2019/7/2,Writing,2短文寫作詞句選擇,2.2 寫作功能句型 2.2.1 描述圖畫 （3）強調(diào)原則 寫作公式 It is that makes it adj. to do sth 2002 It is love that makes it possible to overcome all difficulties. 2008 It is teamwork that makes it possible for them to go anywhere they want to.,2019/7/2,Writing,2短文寫作詞句選擇,2.2 寫作功能句型 2.2.1 描述圖畫 （4）廣泛化原則1 寫作公式 It has been universally acknowledged that that anyone who wants to should possess. 眾所周知，.是想要做的人必須具備的。 2008 It has been universally acknowledged that the ability of teamwork is the most essential qualification that anyone who wants to achieve success should possess.,2019/7/2,Writing,8,2短文寫作詞句選擇,2.2 寫作功能句型 2.2.1 描述圖畫 （5）廣泛化原則2 寫作公式 寫作公式 Of all the changes that have taken place in during , perhaps the most far-reaching has been the inexorable decline/sharp increase in . Of all the ，.is the most / the best. 2009 Of all the changes that have taken place in the communication means during the past half a century, perhaps the most far-reaching has been the inexorable decline in face-to-face intercourse.,2019/7/2,Writing,9,2短文寫作詞句選擇,（2）廣泛化原則,2010 Of all the changes that have taken place in international culture during the past half a century, perhaps the most far-reaching has been the sharp increase in culture blending.,2019/7/2,10,2008 Of all the changes that have taken place in English-language newspapers during the past quarter-century, perhaps the most far-reaching has been the inexorable decline in the scope and seriousness of their arts coverage.,2.2 寫作功能句型 2.2.2 闡述寓意 （1）動詞名詞化原則1 寫作公式 The real implication/meaning/indication of the author/picture(s) is that 2003 The real implication of the author is that everyone has to meet difficulties in their life experience, so we have to make adequate preparations for them.,2019/7/2,Writing,12,2短文寫作詞句選擇,The author implies that.,2.2 寫作功能句型 2.2.2 闡述寓意 （1）動詞名詞化原則2 寫作公式 公式 It is beyond imagination that 2003 We cant imagine a society full of adults having the ability like seven-year-old children. It is beyond imagination that a society is full of adults .,2019/7/2,Writing,13,2短文寫作詞句選擇,3短文寫作思路形成,3.1 有圖作文思路形成 三段安排 等邊六邊形結構三段論,2019/7/2,Writing,14,首段 3-4句,中間段5-6句,尾段 3-4句,3.1 圖畫描述段 三至四句(50-55詞)：第一句對畫面簡單概括且配有同位成分；第二三句描述畫面內(nèi)容（兩幅圖每幅圖一句，一幅圖找兩個因素各一句）；第四句將圖畫下方中文翻譯為英語（如果有） This is an interesting and thought-provoking picture which depicts/describes The picture shocks us beyond description in that it depicts/describes,2019/7/2,Writing,15,3短文寫作思路形成,3.2 寓意說明段+原因分析段 （1）五至六句(80-90詞)：第一句說明寓意(承上啟下)；第二句說明原因如下；第三四句一個原因及擴展；第五六句一個原因及擴展。 具體化切忌以理說理。 （2）常見原因法律法規(guī)不完善、教育體制不健全、個人意識較薄弱(選一，原創(chuàng)一),2019/7/2,Writing,16,3短文寫作思路形成,常見原因,The lack of serious punishment according to the laws and regulations is the core reason of , which provides the chances for people to do the misdeeds/wrongdoings. Peoples awareness is not that strong in , which is decisive to the phenomenon. The distorted/insufficient/inadequate education may lead to the pervasiveness of ,2019/7/2,Writing,17,3.2 寓意說明段+原因分析段 （1）五至六句(80-90詞)：第一句說明寓意(承上啟下)；第二句說明原因如下；第三四句一個原因及擴展；第五六句一個原因及擴展。 具體化切忌以理說理。 （2）常見原因法律法規(guī)不完善、教育體制不健全、個人意識較薄弱(選一，原創(chuàng)一) （3）擴展方式舉例論證、數(shù)據(jù)論證、借用常識、引用權威、結果推導,2019/7/2,Writing,18,3短文寫作思路形成,（1）舉例論證 For example, for instance, take for example, provides an illustration. （2）數(shù)據(jù)論證 As is shown in the statistics of a recent survey launched by a non-profit institution, the increase/decline of is so prominent that the results caused by it may be concluded as follows. The national statistics on indicate ,原因擴展方式,(3) 借用常識 As is known to everyone, . It is of everyones commonsense that . (4) 引用權威 As an influential person puts it, “”. (原因), which echoes a famous persons remark, “”. (5) 結果推導 Hence, the results caused by it may be concluded as follows.,原因擴展方式,3.2寓意說明+原因分析段,原因分析常用過渡句： The following reasons may be responsible for the meaning deduced above. There are two main reasons accounting for the symbolic meaning. The main reason for the phenomenon is that. Another major reason is that It is mainly because .It is partly decided by the fact that,2019/7/2,Writing,21,3.3 寓意說明+舉例說明,舉例說明常用過渡句： Abundant of examples would demonstrate the phenomenon, while the following one, I suppose, would suffice. Here is an example. Take for an example/instance. provides us with a great example.,2019/7/2,Writing,22,3.4 建議措施段,三至四句(50-55詞)：第一句過渡詞(accordingly, as is mentioned above插入)引出重復論點；第二句改善建議(消極意義)或提升方式(積極意義)；第三句表明期待結果。 改善建議常用表達方式： It is high time that (did) It is imperative for that (should) (3) 提升方式常用表達方式： As enhancing the sense of , we would benefit more from ,2019/7/2,Writing,23,2.5 建議措施段,(4) 表明期待結果常用表達方式： Only in this way/by doing this can we both and embrace a brighter tomorrow.,2019/7/2,Writing,24,2006年范文 As is vividly depicted in the photos above, a man writes Beckhams name on his face, and the other spends 300 Yuan making a Beckhams hairstyle. Undoubtedly, the photos have subtly reflected the social phenomenon that idol worship is prevalent among the youth nowadays. Beckham represents the image of sport hero whose handsome appearance and unparalleled football skills are passionately adored by all the sports fans. Likewise, several teenage girls won their fame overnight in The 2005 Super Girl Contest in China, which provoked nationwide noisy debates on the value and harm of admiring these idols. Generally speaking, young people are inclined to adore the people who excel in appearance, intelligence or talent.,In my opinion, idol worship, the thought-provoking social phenomenon, is a double-edged sword which can deeply influence the growth of young people. If we simply worship the idols by imitating their hairstyles or pursuing fashions unreasonably, the obsession will certainly waste us a great deal of money or time, endangering the efficiency of our work. On the contrary, we will lead a positive and fruitful life if we endeavor to improve ourselves by bridging the gap between our models and us. Therefore, the latter attitude should be adopted to direct our way of life.,As is depicted in the picture, a car, with a beer bottle on it, is steering by a drunk driver at a fast speed. The cartoon reveals a n