上海中考英語作文專題指導(dǎo).doc

.上海中考英語作文專題指導(dǎo)一、中考英語作文寫作模式“四審四注意”寫作法“四審”：一審標(biāo)題文體格式。這樣可以為下面的寫作，如人稱、時態(tài)、內(nèi)容、格式等奠定基礎(chǔ)；二審人稱。如是以第一人稱I或we為主還是以第二人稱you 或第三人稱she, he, it或they為主；三審時態(tài)。一般而言，寫作時文章應(yīng)多以現(xiàn)在時（包括一般現(xiàn)在時、一般將來時、現(xiàn)在完成時和現(xiàn)在進行時）或過去時（一般宜用一般過去時和過去進行時）為主，切忌時態(tài)混亂；四審內(nèi)容。如有提示，應(yīng)盡量按照所給提示來寫，不可偏題亂發(fā)揮，可將有關(guān)內(nèi)容提煉分解成幾句展開敘述，不可遺漏，這是很重要的一點，一般文章按who，when，where，what，how，why等要素展開?！八淖⒁狻保阂蛔⒁馊绻恼聸]有給出開頭結(jié)尾，一定要寫開頭結(jié)尾。當(dāng)然，開頭和結(jié)尾的方式不能太落于俗套，要有一定的新意，一般一兩句即可，結(jié)尾要點題，有所立意；二注意句式要富于變化，不能通篇只有一種句式或句式過于單調(diào)，否則即使無語言和內(nèi)容錯誤也難得高分，如可適當(dāng)運用if, when, although等狀語從句，I think / I hope / I believe that 等賓語從句，如用定語從句必須有絕對把握；三注意適當(dāng)運用連接詞，如on one hand, on the other hand; whats more; however等，這樣使文章更有層次、更富邏輯性，若語言和內(nèi)容沒問題, 做到第二、三項“注意”就很有希望拿組織結(jié)構(gòu)分。四注意善于運用有把握的詞匯和句型，盡量運用課本所學(xué)詞句，堅決避免不正確的“中國式英語”，更不能亂“發(fā)明”, 一般一篇文章能用8個左右的好短語或句式已很不錯。最后需要提醒考生的是，中考作文要取得高分,詞數(shù)不能太少也不能太多,筆者覺得, 以80詞左右為宜。另外，書寫一定要認(rèn)真、工整，以免造成不必要的失分。二、中考英語作文常見語言錯誤調(diào)查分析1. 時態(tài)錯誤2. 時間狀語錯誤3. 名詞單復(fù)數(shù)錯誤4. 動詞誤用5. 語態(tài)錯誤6 詞性誤用7. 介詞誤用8 某些搭配和慣用法誤用F 中考英語總復(fù)習(xí)專項訓(xùn)練題寫作專項訓(xùn)練A. 中考英語熱門寫作話題1. 關(guān)于學(xué)習(xí)Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “How to learn English well”. （以“怎樣學(xué)好英語”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點符號不占格。）Use the following points as a reference. (以下內(nèi)容供參考) When did you start learning English? (in . / . years ago)How do you learn English? (listen carefully, study with a group, read English every day .) What is difficult to learn? (listening, grammar .)_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 2. 關(guān)于興趣Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “My interest”. （以“我的興趣”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點符號不占格。）Use the following points as a reference. (以下內(nèi)容供參考) What is your interest? Why do you like it so much?_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 3. 關(guān)于寫事Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “Unforgettable memories”. （以“難忘的回憶”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點符號不占格。）Use the following points as a reference. (以下內(nèi)容供參考) What is your unforgettable memory? Why do you think it is unforgettable?_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 4. 關(guān)于計劃Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “My plan for summer holiday”. （以“我的暑期計劃”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點符號不占格。）Use the following points as a reference. (以下內(nèi)容供參考) What are you going to do during the coming summer holiday? Give at least two points._ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 5. 關(guān)于朋友Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “My good friend”. （以“我的好朋友”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點符號不占格。）Use the following points as a reference. (以下內(nèi)容供參考) Who is your good friend? What do you often do with him or her? Why do you regard him or her as a good friend?_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 6. 關(guān)于寫人Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “My English teacher”. （以“我的英語老師”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點符號不占格。）Use the following points as a reference. (以下內(nèi)容供參考) Who is your English teacher? Do you like him or her? Why do you like him or her? _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 7. 關(guān)于英語Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “I changed my ways of learning English”. （以“我改變了我學(xué)習(xí)英語的方式”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點符號不占格。）Use the following points as a reference. (以下內(nèi)容供參考) How did you learn English in the past? Why do you change your ways of learning English? How do you learn English now?_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 8. 關(guān)于旅行Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “An unforgettable trip”. (以“一次難忘的旅行”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點符號不占格。）Use the following points as a reference. (以下內(nèi)容供參考) Where did you go? What did you do during that trip? Why do you think it is unforgettable?_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 9. 關(guān)于動物Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “My favourite animal”. （以“我最喜歡的動物”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點符號不占格。）Use the following points as a reference. (以下內(nèi)容供參考) Whats your favourite animal? Why do you like it so much? _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 10. 關(guān)于網(wǎng)上購物Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “Online shopping is changing the way of our life”. （以“網(wǎng)上購物正在改變我們的生活方式”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點符號不占格。）Use the following points as a reference. (以下內(nèi)容供參考) Whats your view on online shopping? What are its advantages and dis-advantages? Please give one or two suggestions to your friends if they love online shopping._ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 11. 關(guān)于學(xué)科Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “My favourite subject”. （以“我最喜歡的學(xué)科”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點符號不占格。）Use the following points as a reference. (以下內(nèi)容供參考) Whats your favourite subject? Why do you like it best? _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 12. 關(guān)于變化Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “Changes in myself”. （以“我的變化”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點符號不占格。)Use the following points as a reference. （以下問題可供參考） Have you had any changes in yourself since you came to the middle school? Which are the most important changes? (Give at least 2 examples) What do you think of the changes?_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 13. 關(guān)于節(jié)日Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “The Lantern Festival”. （以“元宵節(jié)”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點符號不占格。)Use the following points as a reference. （以下內(nèi)容供參考） Do you like the Lantern Festival and why do you like it? What do people usually do on the Lantern Festival?_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ B. 提示性作文每個人都有自己的夢想，努力堅持終能實現(xiàn)。請根據(jù)下圖及表格中所提供的信息寫一篇文章?！疽蟆?. 所寫內(nèi)容必須包括表格中的信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2. 介紹Tom，談?wù)勀愕膲粝氩⒆詳M兩點實現(xiàn)夢想的途徑；3. 文章不少于90詞；4. 語句通順，意思連貫，語法正確，條理清楚，字跡工整。_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 2015年中考英語總復(fù)習(xí)專項訓(xùn)練題（六）參考范文A. 1.How to learn English wellEnglish is very important for us. Everyone wants to learn it well. Do you know how to learn it well? Here are my ways:Firstly, I listen to the teacher and make notes carefully in class. I review / go over my old lessons and prepare my new lessons after class. Secondly, I like speaking English with my classmates, not only in classroom, but also on the playground. Its important to improve my spoken English.Thirdly, I keep a diary every day to practise my written English.Besides, I often read English newspapers and magazines in order to enrich my knowledge on English culture.2.My interestI have a wide range of interests and enjoy doing many things in my free time. I am a lover of reading. I often read in my spare time. I read many kinds of books and newspaper. I like the stories and news in them very much. There are a lot of knowledge and interesting things as well. I am also a music lover. I like all kinds of music. I often listen to the music programmes on radio. Although I cant sing English songs well, I like them a lot. I like sports as well. I often play badminton after classes in the afternoon. I often run in the morning. When I am doing sports, I forget all my trouble and worry. Of course, sports can also help me in building my body. In short, I enjoy my life here in school. Reading books, listening to music and doing sports are very helpful to my health and my studies.3. Unforgettable memoriesHow time flies! Three years passed in a blink. Lots of memories left in my head. Teachers, classmates, hard work and above all friendship stay in mind. Looking back, I have gone through either the joy of success or the pains of failure. Teachers are friendly to us in life and always strict with us in study. Classmates and friends help me so much. With their help Ive made great progress. But Im a careless boy. And I always make mistakes which can be avoided. Senior middle school life is a new beginning and it gives me a chance to overcome my shortcomings. As it is said