高三英語(yǔ)短文改錯(cuò)模擬試題及技巧解析[名師精選]

1、絕密啟用前試卷第13頁(yè)，總12頁(yè)高三英語(yǔ)短文改錯(cuò)模擬試題及技巧解析注意事項(xiàng)：1 .答題前填寫好自己的姓名、班級(jí)、考號(hào)等信息2 .請(qǐng)將答案正確填寫在答題卡上 ；卷II （非選擇題）短文改錯(cuò)（本題共計(jì)16小題，每題15分，共計(jì)240分）1.假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中 共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修 改。增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（ 為，并在其正下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞正下面寫出修改后的詞。注忌：1 .每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均限一詞；2 .只允許修改1

2、0處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。When I was in the 6th grade, my parents bought me a cell phone. I was really exciting to receive the phone. The next weekend, my family went on camping in the East Lake Park. We enjoy boating on the lake. I used our new phone to play some of my favorite song. I thought it would be b

3、rilliant idea to put my phone in a plastic bag to protecting it from water. After getting back, I took the phone in, only to find the bag full of water. I didn' t know wsave my phone and I tried laying it out to dry. Unfortunately, it started to rain. What an awfully experience!2.假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交

4、換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中 共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修 改。增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（A）,并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。 注忌：1 .每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2 .只允許修改10處，多者（從第1處起）不計(jì)分。One Saturday morning, I was watching TV with my parents when a piece of news caught our attentions. The Guangming Park

5、 called on people adopt trees. That' s exact what we hadbeen thinking about. So on the next morning, we went to the park directly. A worker there gave us a detailed introduction or showed us to the pine woods. We choose a beautiful pine tree and the worker tied a adoption card to it. When my nam

6、e was seeing on the card, I was so proud and felt a sense of responsibility at the same time. To memorize the excited moment, we took photos with our new family member- the pine tree. In one of the photos,we both smiled from the bottom of our hearts.3.假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。作文 中共有10處錯(cuò)誤，每

7、句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)（A）,并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。 注忌：1 .每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2 .只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。Beatrix Potter is a story writer whose books about animals has been translated into many languages. Beside being an author, she was regarded a successful

8、painter.Beatrix was born in 1866 and grew up in London. Interesting, she had a special love of farm life. Every year she brought her London home animals to the countryside, that she carefully observed and drew the animals. In 1901, he printed a book called The Tale of Peter Rabbit. Later, she wrote

9、many stories and they were all sold well. Many of her reader also liked her paintings. Today, people can not only visit her house and also see her books and paintings showing in a special gallery.4.假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。下面 文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除 或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（A）,并在此

10、符號(hào)下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。The first two year of primary school was the time when I started to learn English. I was teaching to make simple sentences by a teacher. Then, something unexpected and believable happened. I needed to s

11、tudy at American school. The method was total different from Chinese schools. American teachers would not force you to doing anything, and it was okay to make mistakes. Although I got a zero in my exam, but the teacher wasn Instead, he corrected them one by one and explained them for me. Under the h

12、elp of this teacher, I become interested in learning English.5.假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。下面文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（A）,并在此符號(hào)下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注忌：1 .每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2 .只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。dis? 1 tn -、. m-th題答內(nèi)X線訂裝在要不請(qǐng)嚶17gH ny

13、 ny 上一工 n 口 XILast year, I studied in Ireland and made many friends from different countries. Yesterday, Ireceive a letter from a Spanish friend, which brought back my memories of studying in Ireland. She told me about some of the other people I met them in Ireland. She also said that two of my othe

14、r friend would write to me from Italy. I felt happily and lucky because I made the lot of good friends when I was in Ireland. It was really interested for me to meet people from so much different countries. I think that we not only improved our English, but also got know people from all over the wor

15、ld and this is of great important. I will never forget this experience which influence on me is for life.6.假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中 共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修 改。增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（A）,并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。 注忌：1 .每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2 .只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處

16、起）不計(jì)分。I live on the countryside, so my neighbors are quite spread apart. However, we are eager to help each other out. Unfortunately, the couple that lives mere half a mile from us at the end of our private road has been cold. Our requests tend to be ignoring by them and they at time disagree with a

17、ll the other neighbors. However, man had an operation a week ago and couldn ' t walk. My wife was unable to make everything go smoothly. All the other neighbors put all the misunderstandings aside immediately but offered help. The action made the couple a little astonished, yet they were truly t

18、hank. It was until then when that they realize the importance of being close to others.7.假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。下面 文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除 或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（A）,并在此符號(hào)下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注忌：1 .每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2 .只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。I have a

19、little brother, who is real lovely and interesting. Beside, he is very kind and helpful. Every morning he get up early and helps take out the rubbish. When someone in trouble, he will come up to help. What is interested is that sometimes his helps will make a mess, so people won ' t blame him. I

20、nstead, they laugh and praise him on his help. At the same time, they will tell him the right thing he should do it. I love my brother, from him I can learn that kindness can make a better world.8.假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。下面 文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除 或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（A）,并在此符

21、號(hào)下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注忌：1 .每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2 .只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。Graduation finally came. My classmates and I decided to do anything. After a heated discussion, we agreed on make a video to record our experiences at school.Material collecting took us a whole week, d

22、uring that we interviewed our teachers and took pictures of every aspects of school life. The editing part after that was tough. We debated over how to put into the video. Some compromises were unavoidable, but the video was turned out perfect. When video was played at the graduation ceremony severa

23、l days late, it was well received. The students or teachers shared a great time. That surely give us a great sense of achievement.9.假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。下面 文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除 或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（A）,并在此符號(hào)下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注忌：1 .每處錯(cuò)誤及其

24、修改均僅限一詞；2 .只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。Last week, our school hold a photography competition, what theme wasKindness ” . Most students showed great interest but participated in it actively. They also exchanged practical experience. All the works shown through the WeChat platform and they won highly praise

25、 from the public. Twenty outstanding photo got the first prize and were awarded by their school.An activity offered us an opportunity to share so much kindness. It raised our awareness of help people in need. When we do an act of kindness for someone, we'something in return for - pleasure.O線“An

26、O 訂 OAct of 裝 X 題 X X 答 X X 內(nèi) X X 線 X X 訂 X X 裝 X X 在 X X 要 Xre actuilly. geO 喊請(qǐng)X 內(nèi)O10.假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中 共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修 改。增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（A）,并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注忌：1 .每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2 .只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。Last year, Zhan

27、g Pingyu paid visit to London. Worried about the time available, Zhang Pingyu had made a list of the site she wanted to see. It was the Tower which she visited first. Fancy! This solid stone, square tower had been remained standing for one thousand years. Many new buildings had expanded around it. T

28、herefore, it was still part of a royal palace andprison combined. There followed St Paul' s Cathedral built after the terrible fire of London in1666. It looked splendidly when first built. Westminster Abbey, too, was very interesting.Then just as he came out of the abbey, Pingyu heard the famous

29、 sound of the clock Big Ben, ring out the hour.The next day Pingyu was leaving London to Windsor Castle. "Perhaps I will see the Queen?" she wondered as she fall asleep.11.假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中 共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修 改。增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（A）,并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用

30、斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。 注忌：1 .每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2 .只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。The other day, we moved to the new school yard, where lies in the far north of the city. We were all on high spirits. It is much big than the old one. The classrooms are bright and clean. We have a lot of modern equipme

31、nt, making convenient for students to learn every subject. Now we can have a lot of after -class activity on the new play ground. Our teachers often play the basketball and soccer together with us. As spring approached, the flowers newly planting in the yard have just come out. With such many green

32、trees and fragrant flowers around, we feel it less hardly to study and our school life more enjoyable.12.假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中 共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修 改。增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（A）,并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。 注忌：1 .每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2 .只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）

33、不計(jì)分。Last week, I helped my grandparents prepare for his journey to Hainan. On Saturday morning, together with my grandparents, I searched for the Internet for the train schedule, the weather in Hainan and some hotel informations. In the afternoon, I went to the train station and managed to buying tw

34、o tickets for my grandparents if there was a long queue. After dinner, I packed into the suitcase the things needing by them, such as clothes, glasses, a umbrella and a map. The next morning, I went to the station to see them. Waving goodbye to them on the platform, I feel very happy for helping the

35、m and wished them a safely and pleasant journey.13.假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。下面 文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除 或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（A）,并在此符號(hào)下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注忌：1 .每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2 .只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。It is one of most exciting experiences in my li

36、fe. My relationship with the motorcycles begin when I was a child. The feelings are difficultly to explain. There is an important difference among cars and motorcycles. Cars forgive mistakes; motorcycles don important period in my life relating to the motorcycle: the beginnings and today.My father b

37、ought we a little motorcycle. My sisters and brother already knew how to ride motorcycles. I was at five years old, and I remember perfectly the first day which my father taught me to ride this little jewel. I was not afraid but I drove all afternoon on the tennis court.線t. There are14.假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之

38、間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。下面 文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除 或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（A）,并在此符號(hào)下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注忌：1 .每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2 .只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。°A famous film opens across the country last month, which was the biggest hit of the summer.Last Sunday, m

39、y farmily went to see a film. We were arrived at the cinema fifteen minutes early. We found it was crowd and people were talking about the film excited. I couldn see my favorite star Jack, who plays a clever soldier in the film. It' s a fun , filof action and some humor with“ feelings " for

40、 friend and families. They were all moved bythe words at the end of the film. I will keep it in mind what my great country is always.behind me.15.假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中 共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修 改。增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（A）,并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注忌

41、：1 .每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均限一詞。2 .只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。Dear Harry,This is my five day at summer camp. I guess I should tell you about how I do every day. First, we have breakfast around 6:30 A.M. After that, we have some free times, so I going down to the nearby river to fish to a couple of hours. But yesterday

42、, to mym題答內(nèi)線訂裝在說(shuō)要不請(qǐng)nt waitbined lotsvebeedisappointment, the only thing I catch was an old shoe. Then, in the afternoon, there havedifferent activities we can choice from, like swimming, horseback riding, and hiking.At a night, we sit around the campfire, singing songs happily or tell stories by tur

43、ns. Thatfun, and we really enjoy ourselves. OK, that' s all for now. I ' ll have a lot more tell you wheget back home.Li Ming 16.假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。下面 文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除 或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（A）,并在此符號(hào)下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注忌：1 .每

44、處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2 .只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。When I was very young, I stayed at my hometown with my grandma. She was a diligent woman. She likes to grow vegetables or takes care of all the houseworks. Though my parents often ask her to quit the work, my grandma never listen. She takes that she does as her

45、 great joy. I understand her because I see her smile and satisfied with life. Several months before, my father bought for her a new smartphone. And during the Spring Festival, I instructed her on how email and use the Internet. Aside from emailing, she thinks it feels greatly to talk to their grandc

46、hildren on WeChat.參考答案與試題解析局三英語(yǔ)短文改錯(cuò)模擬試題及技巧解析一、短文改錯(cuò)（本題共計(jì)16小題，每題15分，共計(jì)240分）1.【答案】When I was in the 6th grade, my parents bought me a cell phone. I was really exciting （改為 excited） to receive the phone. The next weekend, my family went on （去掉 on） camping in the East Lake Park. We enjoy （改為 enjoyed） boa

47、ting on the lake. I used our （改為 my） new phone to play some of my favorite song （改為 songs） . I thought it would be （添加 A a） brilliant idea to put my phone in a plastic bag to protecting （改為 protect） it from water. After getting back, I took the phone in （改為 out） , only to find the bag full of water.

48、 I didn ' t know whtc為 how） to save my phone and I tried laying it out to dry. Unfortunately, it started to rain. What an awfully （改為 awful） experience!【解析】此題暫無(wú)解析2.【答案】One Saturday morning, I was watching TV with my parents when a piece of news caught our attentions （改為 attention ） . The Guangmi

49、ng Park called on people（添力口 to adopttrees. That ' s exact exactly） what we had been thinking about. So on （刪除 on） the next morning, we went to the park directly. A worker there gave us a detailed introduction or （改為 and） showed us to the pine woods. We choose （改為 chose） a beautiful pine tree an

50、d the worker tied a （改為 an） adoption card to it. When my name was seeing （改為 seen） on the card, I was so proud and felt a sense of responsibility at the same time. To memorize the excited （改為 exciting） moment, we took photos with our new family member the pine tree. In one of the photos, we both （改為

51、 all） smiled from the bottom of our hearts.【解析】 此題暫無(wú)解析 3.【答案】Beatrix Potter is a story writer whose books about animals has （改為 have） been translated into many languages. Beside （改為 Besides） being an author, she was regarded 4添力口 a） a successful painter.Beatrix was born in 1866 and grew up in London

52、. Interesting （改為 Interestingly ） , she had a special love of farm life. Every year she brought her London home animals to the countryside, that （改為 where ） she carefully observed and drew the animals. In 1901, he （改為 she） printed a book called The Tale of Peter Rabbit. Later, she wrote many stories

53、 and they were （刪除 were） all sold well. Many of her reader （改為 readers） also liked her paintings. Today, people can not only visit her house and （改為 but） also see her books and paintings showing （改為 shown） in a special gallery.【解析】題答內(nèi)線訂裝在要不請(qǐng)派VJ >)> 上一工。 >)> ,、打】 】 】 C - - - - 韭 - - - - C

54、 】 】 】 八夕本文是一篇記敘文，記敘了 Potter的個(gè)人經(jīng)歷。4.【答案】The first two year （改為 years） of primary school was the time when I started to learn English. I wasteaching （改為 taught） to make simple sentences by a teacher. Then, something unexpected and believable （改為 unbelievable）happened. I needed to study at A（添力口 an） A

55、merican school. The method was total （改為 totally ） different from Chinese schools. American teachers would not force you to doing （改為 do） anything, and it was okay to make mistakes. Although I got a zero in my exam, but （刪除 but） the teacher wasn' t angry with me. Instead, he corrected them one b

56、y one and explained them for （改為 to） me. Under （改為 With） the help of this teacher, I become （改為 became） interested in learning English.【解析】此題暫無(wú)解析5.【答案】Last year, I studied in Ireland and made many friends from different countries. Yesterday, I receive （改為 received） a letter from a Spanish friend, wh

57、ich brought back my memories of studying in Ireland. She told me about some of the other people I met them （去掉 them ） in Ireland. She also said that two of my other friend （改為 friends） would write to me from Italy. I felt happily （改為 happy） and lucky because I made the （改為 a） lot of good friends when I was in Ireland. It was really interested （改為 interesting ） for me to meet people from so m