浙江新高考作文公開課概要寫作新聞文體（課堂PPT）

1、1英語組 鄭志鵬Summary Writingfor news reports2of a news reportStructure3女孩睡前戴耳機聽歌，第二天卻再也沒能醒過來！ 你有經(jīng)常戴耳機聽歌的習慣嗎？19歲女孩Gabrielle Samuels與男友通完電話后，躺在床上用耳機聽音樂，但第二天，家人發(fā)現(xiàn)Gabrielle Samuels一直遲遲沒有起床。 推開她的房間門，就聞到一股焦味，家人們看到Gabrielle Samuels奄奄一息的躺在床上。她全身都是血跡和燒焦的痕跡，不知道經(jīng)歷了什么。 等警方趕到，Gabrielle Samuels已經(jīng)死亡。調查結果顯示，她當晚聽音樂時手機同時在

2、充電，充電器接頭短路，強大電流瞬間從耳機灌入女孩頭部。女孩的死讓家人很傷心，這本來是可以避免的悲劇。很多人喜歡在電子產(chǎn)品充電時仍繼續(xù)使用，這樣直接就把你手中的電子產(chǎn)品變成有致命威脅的危險品。Event in generalEvent in _ of the eventdetailReason4StructureRetell the event in general Retell the event in detail Conclude the reason/influenceof the event5StructureRetell the event in general Retell the

3、 event in detail Conclude the reason/influenceof the event6StructurePara. 1Para. 2Para. 3Para. 4General descriptionThe process of the story in detailThe result of the storyThe influence of the story7StructurePara. 1Para. 2Para. 3Para. 4General descriptionThe process of the story in detailThe result

4、of the storyThe influence of the story8StructureGeneral descriptionThe process of the story in detailThe result of the storyThe influence of the storyof the summary writingSentenceSentence 2Sentence 3Sentence 419SentenceHow to use oneto tell a story?10SentenceWhat should we write in the11What does c

5、onsist ofstorya?12講故事 有座山 從前13講故事 有座山。 有座廟。 有個 ，他每天都下山 。從前山上廟里和尚挑水喝14 有座山。 有座廟。 有個 ，他每天都下山 。 從前山上廟里和尚挑水喝講故事15從前山上廟里和尚whenwherewherewhowhat挑水喝16whenwherewhowhatwhyhowstoryElementsof17whenwherewhowhatwhyhow18 有座山。 有座廟。 有個 ，他每天都下山 。 從前山上廟里和尚挑水喝19從前 山上 廟里 和尚 挑水喝20Pick proper elements to write a sentence

6、 for each paragraph.whenwherewhowhatwhyhow21Pick proper elements to write a sentence for each paragraph.Para. 1Para. 2Para. 3Para. 422Pick proper elements to write a sentence for each paragraph.Para. 1Para. 2Para. 3Para. 4Recently, a wild fish restaurant in Harbin faced being shut down and a large f

7、ine.23Pick proper elements to write a sentence for each paragraph.Para. 1Para. 2Para. 3Para. 4A customer named Chen Yan exposed his being overcharged and the violent treatment of the restaurant to the public. 24Pick proper elements to write a sentence for each paragraph.Para. 1Para. 2Para. 3Para. 4T

8、he restaurant as well as some r e l e v a n t g o v e r n m e n t departments received their punishment. 25Pick proper elements to write a sentence for each paragraph.Para. 1Para. 2Para. 3Para. 4Similar cases happ e n e d elsewhere and the government will punish these actions. 26Similar cases happen

9、ed elsewhere and the government will punish these actions. Recently, a wild fish restaurant in Harbin faced being shut down and a large fine.A customer named Chen Yan exposed his being overcharged and the violent treatment of the restaurant to the public. The restaurant as well as some relevant gove

10、rnment departments received their punishment. Can we simply put sentences together into a whole passage?27Polish your writing28Polish your writing1. Use connective words2. Use special sentences291. Connective Words關聯(lián)詞30there is no doubt that31there is no doubt thatas a matter of fact32there is no do

11、ubt thatas a matter of factit is universally acknowledged that33there is no doubt thatas a matter of factas far as sb is concernedit is universally acknowledged that34there is no doubt thatas a matter of factas far as sb is concernedin my opinionit is universally acknowledged that35there is no doubt

12、 thatit goes without saying thatas a matter of factas far as sb is concernedin my opinionit is universally acknowledged that36關聯(lián)詞精華段落間邏輯句子間邏輯37段落間邏輯起合轉承firstbesides, meanwhilewhereas, whilein summary關聯(lián)詞精華句子間邏輯38句子間邏輯因果目的讓步對比therefore, thereby doingin contrastwhile, despiteso as to 舉例for instance關聯(lián)詞精

13、華段落間邏輯39_, similar cases happened elsewhere and the government will punish these actions. Recently, a wild fish restaurant in Harbin faced being shut down and a large fine.A customer named Chen Yan exposed his being overcharged and the violent treatment of the restaurant to the public. _, the restau

14、rant as well as some relevant government departments received their punishment. ThereforeBesides402. Special sentences412. Special sentences(1) 倒裝句Never will/can/should sb do sth.(2) 非限制性定語從句主句, which 422. Special sentences(1) 倒裝句Never will/can/should sb do sth.解釋：某人絕不會/能/應做某事。舉一反三：怎么用該句型寫“某人一定要做某事”

15、。Never will/can/should sb stop/ignore doing sth.432. Special sentences(1) 倒裝句Never will/can/should sb do sth.Never will/can/should sb stop/ignore doing sth.適合作為文章的_句。A. 總起 B. 總結 C. 過渡總結總結44_, similar cases happened elsewhere and the government will punish these actions. Besides實戰(zhàn)練習：將第四段主旨句改成倒裝句Besid

16、es, similar cases happened elsewhere and _.never will the government stop punishing these actions 452. Special sentencese.g. Harry Potter is an interesting book, which we all know. (2) 非限制性定語從句主句, which which指？462. Special sentencese.g. Harry Potter is an interesting book, which we all know. (2) 非限制

17、性定語從句主句, which 前一個句子里的事件與第二句有邏輯關聯(lián)，就可以用該句型合成長句。472. Special sentences(2) 非限制性定語從句主句, which 因果：He got awarded. He felt proud. 改寫：_, which made him proud. 目的：He hugged her. He wanted to show love.改寫：_, which was to show his love. 48A customer named Chen Yan exposed his being overcharged and the violent

18、 treatment of the restaurant to the public. _, the restaurant as well as some relevant government departments received their punishment. Therefore實戰(zhàn)練習：將第二、三段主旨句合成長句提示：兩段之間是什么邏輯關系？49A customer named Chen Yan exposed his being overcharged and the violent treatment of the restaurant to the public, whic

19、h led to punishment on the restaurant and some relevant government departments. 實戰(zhàn)練習：將第二、三段主旨句合成長句A customer named Chen Yan exposed his being overcharged and the violent treatment of the restaurant to the public. _, the restaurant as well as some relevant government departments received their punishment. Therefore50A customer