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考研作文魔塊.............................................................1

2010年..................................................................1

2007年..................................................................2

2006年..................................................................4

2005年..................................................................7

2004年..................................................................9

2002年.................................................................10

2001年.................................................................11

2000年.................................................................13

考研作文魔塊

2010年

Writeanessayof160-200wordsbasedonthefollowingdrawing.Inyouressay,

youshould

1)describethedrawingbriefly,

2)explainitsintendedmeaning,andthen

3)giveyourcomments.

Thisisaninteresting/vividpicturefullofinstruction/profound

implicationsandittellsushowDrosperoustheflowerofcultureis,卬憶asthe

wayofcultureintegrationisroughlysimple.Obviously,wecouldtellfromthe

abovepicturethatfloatingintheairisthedeliciousodouroftheculture

integration,withvariousschoolsofcivilizationstirringupinthehotpot.Itisa

perfectexampleofthe$hoNageofmulti-cukurism.Nowadaysfast-foodcultureis

invadingcmrworld,whereDseudo-expeHsdemonstratetheirmusclesrecklesslyin

public.

WhileIamlookingatthiscartoon,Ican'thelplosinginfurtherthought

andsearchingforanswerstothisphenomenon.Tomysadness,Ihavefound

thatnotmanypeoplearoundmehavethepatie/Uforfurtherandprofound

self-cultivatiorLThefirstandforemostgoestothesocietyw/zergquickefficiency

andresultistheonlybenchmarktoevaluatethesuccessesofDrojectsorscholars.

Naturally,fast-foodcultureisextremelypopularamongus,sinceitmeetsourneedof

quickL卬datingofoureducationregardlessofhowshallowandpretentiousitis.

What'smore,withtherapidsocialdevelopmem,DeoplearefacingRreatDressure

andtheyareshortoftimeforaim)foundbaseofself-cidtivati(m.Theyhayeagreedy

hungerforsuccessesorpromotion.

Wearesoluckytoliveinsuchaperiodwithcivilizedpolicyandrapid

socialdevelopment.Withmoreandmorepeoplegivinggreatattentiontothe

restorationofmulti-culturi5mandthewaysofcultureintegrationandwiththe

increasingeffortsandcarecomingfromthecentralgovernmentandoursociety

tohelpyoungergenerationstriveforarichandfulfilledlife.Iamsoconfidentthat

moreandmoreyoimgpeoplewillleadamagnificentlifepeacefully,enjoyingthe

beautyofculturekaleidoscope.

2007年

Writeanessayof160-200wordsbasedonthefollowingdrawing.Inyouressay,

youshould

1)describethedrawingbriefly,

2)explainitsintendedmeaning,andthen

3）supportyourviewwithanexample/examples.

我的總體分析：這是一篇意義分析型作文，我采取的寫(xiě)作段落安排是：第

一段描繪圖片，引出主旨：自信。第二段，分析自信在生活中的積極意義。第

三段是寫(xiě)怎樣才能在活中實(shí)現(xiàn)它。

（學(xué)生習(xí)作）

Thisisaninterestingpicturefullofinstructionandittellsusthemessage:

aslongasthereisenoughself-confidence,wewillachievesuccess.Obviously,we

couldtellfromtheabovepicturethatthetwounconfidemmen,whoareplaying

football,imagetheiropponentverypowerfulbutregardthemselvesasthe上巾Itis

aperfectexampleofDeoplebecomingthevictimoftheshortageofself-confidence.

Materiallyandspiritually,wecaneasilyrecognizethesignificanceof

confidenceintermsofachievingsuccess.Ontheonehand,confidenceisthekey

tosuccess.Thkethedisabledathletesasanexample.Theywerenotconqueredbythe

misfortimesbutwerefullofself-confidencetoconquerthem.Ontheotherhand,if

Deopleloseself-confidence,theyareboundtofailintheend.Therefore,thispicture

remindsaspositive/、howcrucialconfidenceisinourdailylife.

Consideringallthepointsdiscussedabove,itisadvisablethatwehighly

valueself-confidenceandapplyitinourstudyandwork.Lifeisfairandevery

oneenjoysequalopportunitiesintheirlife.Therefore,weshouldturneue/

possibleODportunityimorealityandstriveforbetterlife.

（對(duì)文章的語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤已進(jìn)行了修改

點(diǎn)評(píng)：對(duì)圖的理解是對(duì)的，這是寫(xiě)自信對(duì)人生的影響的問(wèn)題的，要如何正

確對(duì)待世界和身邊的優(yōu)秀的人。

總體評(píng)價(jià)：作文寫(xiě)得不錯(cuò)，語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤少，表達(dá)比較清晰準(zhǔn)確。

（修改后附講評(píng)）

Thisisaninteresting/vividpicturefullofinstruction/profound

implicationsandittellsus〃。卬impowantconfidenceisinour圖片反映的是

正確的人生觀或者世界觀缺失的問(wèn)題，要學(xué)會(huì)提煉抽象出主題詞）.Obviously,we

couldtellfromtheabovepicturethatthegoal-keeDerbelievesthatthegoalistoo

bigfordefensewhilethestrikersimplythinksthatthegoal?kee】）eriscomparablytoo

bigfortherelativelysmallgoal!（為了突出效果,可以選用一些表達(dá)相對(duì)大小的字

眼）Itisaperfectexampleoftheshortageofconfidencebringingpeople

unexpectedresultsandsometimesevenfailure.

〃第二段是分析出現(xiàn)這樣現(xiàn)象的原因，主要是激烈的競(jìng)爭(zhēng)和不可預(yù)知的未

來(lái)所導(dǎo)致的結(jié)果。

WhileIamlookingatthiscartoon,Ican'thelplosinginfurtherthought

andsearchingforanswerstothisphenomenon.Tomysadness,Ihavefound

thatnotmanypeoplearoundmehaveconfidenceinthemselves.Thnfirstand

foremostgoestotheinfluenceofsocialcompetitionandpressureuponus.他are

forcedtocompetewithtalemedpeopleandstriveforlimitedsocialresourcesuchas

jobs,ODDOH憂(yōu)nitiesandDromotions.What'smore,Deoplearenotbomwiseor

leamtandlifeislikeinastornipsea.Nooneknowswhatwillwaitforusin

thefutureandwehavetostruggleforbettersolutionstoourquestionsorproblems.

Now（mdermoreandmoreDeoplearedrivenmadcmdbecomelessconfidentabout

theirlifeandeve孔themselves.

〃第三段，寫(xiě)“展望未來(lái)”或者“解決方案”都可以，這也與第三點(diǎn)要求：give

youcomment.相符，同時(shí)也與第二段相呼應(yīng)，給人以希望。展望未來(lái)的應(yīng)該寫(xiě)

一些重大政策及其意義，這樣可以隨便提一下解決方案。

（結(jié)束方案一）Wearesoluckytoliveinsuchaperiodwithcivilized

policyandrapidsocialdevelopment.Withmoreandmorepeoplegivinggreat

attentiontothememalhealthofyoungpeopleandwiththeincreasingeffortsand

carecomingfromthecentralgovernmentandoursocietytohelpyamger

generationstrivefi）rarichcmdcolorfullife.Iamsoconfidentthatmoreandmore

youngDeoplewillenjoyamagnificentlifeconfidemlyinthewaythatisuniqueto

themselves.Rememberwearebomuniquelydiff^remandvaluable.（一定要給人希

望,在提及政策時(shí),可以對(duì)政策的目的作說(shuō)明,這樣就可以提一下解決方案了）

〃上面一段采用的是展望未來(lái)，下面一段是用解決方案的方法寫(xiě)的。

（結(jié)束方案二）Consideringallthepointsdiscussedabove,itissensible

thatwetakeeffectiveandefficientmeasurestoresolvethisproblem.Tobegin

with,thegovernmentissupposedtostrengtheneducationhelpingyoimger

generationbuilduptheirself-ccmfidencecmdrestoretheirhealthymentalworld.

Furthermore,itisadvisablethatmediacmdsocietyenhancethepublic

oftheimDortanceofself-confidence.Asfarasweareconcerned,weshouldtakea

positiveoutlooktounderstandtheworld.Onlybysuchdoingscanwemakeour

livesmoremeaningful.

2006年

把崇拜寫(xiě)在臉上花300元做個(gè)“小貝火”

在BIX貝克區(qū)劃一英國(guó)足球明型.

有兩幅圖片，圖1把崇拜寫(xiě)在臉上；圖2花300元做“小貝頭”

注：Beckham是英國(guó)足球明星

有兩張照片，一張照片上有一位男士臉上寫(xiě)著足球明星的名字，另一張照片上

有一個(gè)男子在理發(fā)，他要求理發(fā)師為他設(shè)計(jì)一個(gè)小貝克漢姆的發(fā)型。

Studythefollowingphotoscarefullyandwriteanessayinwhichyoushould

1.describethephotosbriefly,

2.interpretthesocialphenomenonreflectedbythem,and

3.giveyourpointofview.

（學(xué)生習(xí)作）

Thisisaninteresting/vividpicturefullofinstruction/profoundimplication

andittellsushowserioustheattitudesofwhattoDurstieinlifeave.Obviously,we

couldtellfromtheabovepicturethatonepersonsignedtheizavzeofBeckhamon

hisleftface,whileanotherspentasmuchas300YuanforohairstyleofBeckhan.It

isaperfectexampleofpeopledisregardingthevalueswemustpursue.

〃第二段是分析出現(xiàn)這樣現(xiàn)象的原因

WhileIamlookingatthiscartoon,Ican'thelplosinginfurtherthought

andsearchingforanswerstothisphenomenon.Tomysadness,notmanyDeople

aroiuidmehauecmadvisableoutlookofpursuit.Thefirstandforemostgoestothe

influenceofforeigncultureinourcountryinrecentyears.Youngfellowsaretracing

fashion.What?smore,withtherapiddevelopmentofsociety,peoplekeconomic

needshavelargelybeenfulfilledandtheydon'tknowwheretheyshouldgonext.

〃第三段，我認(rèn)為圖片的應(yīng)該是讓我們提出一個(gè)解決這樣現(xiàn)象的方案，寫(xiě)”

展望未來(lái)”還不如寫(xiě)“解決方案”好，這也與第三點(diǎn)要求：giveyoucomment.相符，

同時(shí)與第二段相呼應(yīng)，展望未來(lái)的應(yīng)該寫(xiě)在一些重大意義的地方比較好，比如

說(shuō)可持續(xù)發(fā)展、捐贈(zèng)等。下面的內(nèi)容兩種方式都寫(xiě)了，呵呵，我水平還很差，

恐怕寫(xiě)的不怎么好。

Wearesoluckytoliveinsuchaperiodwithcivilizedpolicyandrapid

socialdevelopment.Withmoreandmorepeoplegivinggreatattentiontothe

valuesofpursuit,withincreasingeffortsandhelpcomingfromthecentral

governmentandoursociety,Iamsoconfidentthatpeoplew〃/enjoya

magnificentlifebecausetheyarerunningforsomethingwithtmemeaning.

〃上面一段采用的是展望未來(lái)，下面一段是用解決方案的方法寫(xiě)的。

Consideringallthepointsdiscussedabove,itissensiblethatwetake

effectiveandefficientmeasurestoresolvethisproblem.Tobeginwith,the

governmentissupposedtostrengtheneducationhelpingbuild即thecorrect

outlooktowardtheworld.Furthermore,itisadvisablethatmediaandsociety

enhancethepublicaww幾essofspiritualpursuit.Onourpart,weshouldtakea

rationalattitudetowardtheworld.Onlybyenforcingthesemeasures,canwe

makeourlivesfullofmeaning.

（對(duì)文章的語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤已進(jìn)行了修

點(diǎn)評(píng)：對(duì)圖的理解是對(duì)的，這是寫(xiě)人生觀及世界觀的問(wèn)題的，要如何正確

對(duì)待世界和身邊的事物，在抽象出主題詞時(shí)，要注意簡(jiǎn)便捷用詞。

總體評(píng)價(jià)：作文寫(xiě)得不錯(cuò)，語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤少，表達(dá)比較清晰準(zhǔn)確。

（修改后附講評(píng)）

Thisisaninteresting/vividpicturefullofinstruction/profound

implicationsandittellsushowseriouslyouryoungergenerationissufferingfrom

theshortageofaproperworldview（圖片反映的是正確的人生觀或者世界觀缺失

的問(wèn)題，耍學(xué)會(huì)提煉抽象出主題詞）.Obviously,wecouldtellfromtheabove

picturethatoneman“polishes“hisleftfacebyhavingthecharactersofBeckham,

awell-knownfootballstarpainted,whileanothermanspendsasmuchas300I，。"

incloningthehairstyleofBeckham's.（為了突出效果,可以選用一些帶有諷刺的字

眼）Itisaperfectexampleofouryounggeneration'spuzzleinconstructingtheir

lifevalue,virtuescmdproperworldviews.Eeoplekcryingtorestorethetraditional

Chineseva山es,vi門(mén)uesandproperword應(yīng)evvs.）

〃第二段是分析出現(xiàn)這樣現(xiàn)象的原因，主要是主流媒體報(bào)導(dǎo)的影響和個(gè)人

終生教育的影響。

WhileIamlookingatthiscartoon,Ican'thelplosinginfurtherthought

andsearchingforanswerstothisphenomenon.Tomysadness,Ihavefound

thatnotmanypeoplearoundmehaveapositiveoutlookofwhattopursueinthe

future.Thefirstandforemostgoestotheinfluenceofthesweepingmediareports

ofthegossipsofcelebrities'maritalaffairs.Ircmically,thefixmt-Dage幾evvsare

dominatedbysensationalscandalsinsteadofthosewhichccmmovepeopletotears

orinspiretheirimaginations.Comingiooureyescivethestoriesof

one-night-great-fortuneforthefewestluckydogs.Peoplearelostinthesesocial

values.Whafsmore,w萬(wàn)力therapidsocialdeyelopment,personal

educationisgreatlyoverlookedandtheirmaterialneedsbecometheonlythingthey

careabout.Nowondertimehaswitnessedthatmoreandmorepeopleavecrazy

aboutcloningtheiridols'lifestylesandattitudes.

〃第三段，寫(xiě)“展望未來(lái)”或者“解決方案”都可以，這也與第三點(diǎn)要求：give

youcomment.相符，同時(shí)也與第二段相呼應(yīng)，給人以希望。展望未來(lái)的應(yīng)該寫(xiě)

一些重大政策及其意義，這樣可以隨便提一下解決方案。

（結(jié)束方案一）Wearesoluckytoliveinsuchaperiodwithcivilized

policyandrapidsocialdevelopment.Withmoreandmorepeoplegivinggreat

attentiontotherestorationoftraditionalChinesevalues,virtuesandworldviews

andwiththeincreasingeffortsandcarecomingfromthecentralgovernment

andoursocietyiohelpy?！◣譯ee火eneraticmstrivefor〃richandcolorfullife,Iam

soconfidentthatmoreandmoreyoungpeoplewillenjoyama父nificemlife

confidemlyinthewoythatisuniquetothemselves.Rememberwearebomimiquely

deferentandvaluable.（一定要給人希望,在提及政策時(shí),可以對(duì)政策的目的作

說(shuō)明,這樣就可以提一下解決方案了）

〃上面一段采用的是展望未來(lái)，下面一段是用解決方案的方法寫(xiě)的。

（結(jié)束方案二）Consideringallthepointsdiscussedabove,itissensible

thatwetakeeffectiveandefficientmeasurestoresolvethisproblem.Tobegin

with,thegovernmentissupposedtostrengtheneducaticmhelpingrestorethe

properworldyiewsamon父yoim父ergeneration.Furthermore,itisadvisablethat

mediaandsocietyenhancethepublic4卬—evessoftheimportanceofcorrectlife

attitudes.Asfarasweareconcerned,weshouldtake〃positiveoutlookto

understandtheworld.Onlybysuchdoingscanwemakeourlivesmore

meaningful.

2005年

Directions:

1.describethedrawing

2.interpretitsmeaning

3.giveyourcommentonit.

現(xiàn)在的作文要求基本上都是上面三點(diǎn)O

（學(xué)生習(xí)作）

Thisisaninterestingpicturefullofinstructingmeaningandittellsusthe

importanceoffinanciallysupportingoldandhelpless%川s.（全篇主旨，不知概括

準(zhǔn)不準(zhǔn)確）Obviously,wecouldtellfromtheabovepicturethatfour

children,whoareverygoodgoal-keeper,areplayinga“footballmatchwhilethe

footballisthefather.Itisaperfectexampleoftakingcareofparentsandmaking

theirlateryearenjoyableandhappM寫(xiě)what。呵呵，我在這里想提一下問(wèn)，如

果與主旨相呼應(yīng)的話(huà)，應(yīng)寫(xiě)贍養(yǎng)父母的屬性，贍養(yǎng)父母的屬性肯定是正面的，

而圖畫(huà)是畫(huà)的孩子虐待父母，不知會(huì)不會(huì)離題。）

WhileIamlookingatthispicture,Ican'thelplosinginfurtherthought

andsearchingforanswerstothisphenomenon.Tomysadness,asthepicture

show,Ifindthatmanypeopleshirkthedutyoffinanciallysupportingtheold.The

firstandforemostreasongoestothedeclineoftraditionmoralvalues.Someelderly

peopleareoftenill-treatedbytheirownchildrenwhentheybecomeoldandhelpless.

Anotherreasongoestointerests.Somechildrenrefusetoaffordtheexpenditure.（我

這里寫(xiě)的是分析不尊敬父母的原因，不知算不算解釋圖畫(huà)的意思，即滿(mǎn)足麗'

中的第二點(diǎn)要求。）

Wearesoluckytoliveinsuchacriticalperiodwithcivilizedpolicyand

rapidsocialdevelopment.Relevantlawsandregulationstoprotectparentshave

beenmade.Withmoreothereffortscomingfromourcentralgovernmentand

oursociety,Iamsoconfidentthatparentswillenjoyapeacefullifeintheirlater

yearsverysoon.（展望未來(lái)）（204words）（題目耍求的是givemyowncomment.

現(xiàn)在已采取的政策，是否還需補(bǔ)充）。.

點(diǎn)評(píng)：對(duì)圖的理解是對(duì)的，不過(guò)有些局限，這是寫(xiě)老有所養(yǎng)的問(wèn)題的，要

如何對(duì)待老年人，而不僅僅是自己的老父母。是寫(xiě)老年人的福利問(wèn)題的，不能

只是說(shuō)老父母（不能就事論事，要上升到一定的高度），這樣寫(xiě)會(huì)主題不突出的。

再者，對(duì)模板的運(yùn)用不夠靈活，在概括中心時(shí)，不一定就只是用importance一

類(lèi)的詞，也可以用從句或者短語(yǔ)，可以突出什么性質(zhì)的問(wèn)題，其的嚴(yán)重性如何，

這也是提出問(wèn)題的一種常見(jiàn)方式。What也指是什么性質(zhì)的問(wèn)題，嚴(yán)重性如何，

后果怎樣。不要有理解上的局限。

總體評(píng)價(jià)：作文寫(xiě)得不錯(cuò)，語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤少，表達(dá)比較清晰準(zhǔn)確。

（修改后附講評(píng)）

Thisisaninterestingpicturefullofinstructionandittellsushowserious

theproblemofoldpeople"swelfareisandhowurgentlyoursocietyshouldfigureout

aproperwaytofinanciallysupportthehelplessoldpeopleoutoftheirtrouble.（對(duì)

于全篇主旨，可以用各種形式表達(dá)，但關(guān)鍵是要與隨后的行文相適應(yīng)，最關(guān)鍵的是

要使文章更容易控制，這,句是寫(xiě)要求二:interpretitsmeaning）Obviously,we

couldtellfromtheabovepicturethatfourchildren,whoshouldrepaytheir

parentsfselflessloveattheiroldage,areplaying“football“ofkickingtheirold

fatheraroundwithoutmercy.Leftinskymightbetheiroldman'shelplesscryfar

sunivaL（我只是想使描寫(xiě)生動(dòng)一些，這樣可以減少在第二段對(duì)當(dāng)前社會(huì)現(xiàn)象的

描述，這一句是寫(xiě)要求一：describethedrawing）Itisaperfectexampleofour

overlookingofoldpeoplefswelfarementallyand.（第，段是要提出問(wèn)題,

寫(xiě)明問(wèn)題的是什么，程度如何，是何性質(zhì)等。）.

WhileIamlookingatthispicture,Ican'thelplosinginfurtherthought

andsearchingforanswerstothisphenomenon.Tomysadness,asthepicture

show,Ifindthatmanypeopleshirkthedutyoffinanciallysupportingtheold.The

firstandforemostreasongoestothedeclineoftraditionmoralvaluesandthe

losingofmoraleducation.Youngpeopletendtohemoreandmoreself-centeredand

enjoytheirsmallworldhappily.Asaresult,theiroldparentsareintheirway,

stoppingthemfromhappiness.Unfortunately,ill-treatmentbytheirownchildren

wouldbeunavoidablewhentheybecomeoldandhelpless.Anotherreasongoesto

societyitself.Youngpeoplearenowfacingincreasingsocialpressureandsomeof

themarestrugglingtomakeendsmeet.Thereforeitisnoteasyforthemtohelptheir

oldparentsfinancially.Fortheseyoungpeople,itisnotamatterofwillingnessbut

thatoffinancial（這里應(yīng)該寫(xiě)不尊敬父母的原因，不過(guò)寫(xiě)作的目的是

給人希望，讓人對(duì)社會(huì)充滿(mǎn)信心，所以應(yīng)該一分為二的看待不尊敬父母的現(xiàn)象,

有的是不愿意，而有的是根本沒(méi)有能力。只有在該段寫(xiě)明白原因后，最后一段

才能略寫(xiě)。注意對(duì)問(wèn)題的分析也可以視為是滿(mǎn)足要求三：siveyourcommenton

it.）

Wearesoluckytoliveinsuchacriticalperiodwithcivilizedpolicyand

rapidsocialdevelopment.Withmoreandmorepeoplegivinggreatattentionto

thewelfareofoldpeople,withrelevantlawsandregulationstoprotectoldpeople

fromill-treatmentandwiththeincreasingeffortsandhelpcomingfromthe

centralgovernmentandoursociety,Iamsoconfidentthatoldpeoplewillenjoy

apeacefullifeintheirlateryearswiththeirchildrenandgrandchildren.（展望未來(lái),

這一段的黑體字，都可以背下來(lái)做為模板的一部分，這一段也是滿(mǎn)足要求三：

giveyourcommentonit.只不過(guò)是從解決問(wèn)題的角度來(lái)寫(xiě)的）

我加強(qiáng)了最后一段的內(nèi)容，對(duì)原因的描述也加深了一些，將文章加長(zhǎng)只為了給出一個(gè)

內(nèi)容豐富的范文，你可以好好對(duì)比看，并背誦。最好是將所有我改過(guò)或?qū)戇^(guò)的文章好好對(duì)

比記憶。

2004年

Thisisaninterestingpicturefullofinstructingmeaningandittellsusthe

importanceofmodesty.Obviously,wecouldtellfromtheabovepicturethatthe

momentwhenarunnerarrivesatthedestinationisthemomenthefindsthatanew

beginningisjustaheadofhim.Itisaperfectexampleofhowtomakecontinuous

progress.

WhileIamlookingatthispicture,Ican'thelplosinginfurtherthought

andsearchingforanswerstothisphenomenon.Tomysadness,Ifindthatnot

manypeoplearoundmemakecontinuousprogress,thoughtheymadeachievements

intheirlives.Onemostimportantreasonisthattheybecomeover-proudafter

theirsuccesses^andwouldn'tlistentoothers'adviceattentivelyasbefore.However,

lifeislikesailinginastormysea,andtheyareboundtorunintofailureintheend.

Therefore,thispictureremindsuspositivelythatcontinuousprogressrelieson

modestysincemodestymakesusclearofwhoweare.Andwecanuseothersfstrong

pointstoenhanceandimproveourown.

Takemeasanexample.Iwasonceavictimofbeingtooproud.Igotfullmark

inmathexaminhighschool,andIstronglybelievedthatIwasmuchclevererthan

others.Igavelittletimeforpreparationandgoing-over.Anditwouldnotbelongfor

metoseeabigfailureinmathexam.Thiseventgavemeagoodlesson.

Wearesoluckytoliveinsuchacriticalperiodwithcivilizedpolicyand

rapidsocialdevelopment.Withmoreeffortscomingfromourcentral

governmentandoursociety,wearehappytoseeasoundsocialenvironment

withmanyopportunitiesforsuccess.Withsuchgoodconditions,Iamso

confidentthatmoreandmorepeoplewouldmakecontinuousprogressbecause

wearelearningtobemodest.(310)

寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：要一分為二地看問(wèn)題。

從負(fù)面：成敗之原因、教訓(xùn)。

從正面：寓意、經(jīng)驗(yàn)、意義。

2002年

Thisisaninterestingpicturefullofinstructingmeaningandittellsusthe

popularityofthesweepingworldwidecultureexchange.Obviously,wecouldtell

fromtheabovepicturethatacharmingandmodernAmericangirldressesin

classicaltraditionalChinesesuit.Itisaperfectexampleoftheharmonyof

multi-culturecombination.

WhileIamlookingatthispicture,Ican'thelplosinginfurtherthought

andsearchingforanswerstothisphenomenon.Tomyhappiness,Ifindthatthe

firstandforemostreasonistheglobalizationoftheworldeconomy.Nocountrycan

prospergreatly,ifitadoptsapolicyofclosingitsdoor.Andanotherreasonwould

gotothechangingsocialattitudetowardmulti-cultures.Moreandmorepeople

believethateachculturehasitsownadvantagesanddisadvantages.Andwecanuse

theirstrongpointstoenhanceandimproveourown.

Wearesoluckytoliveinsuchacriticalperiodwithcivilizedpolicyand

rapidsocialdevelopment.Withmoreandmorepeoplegivinggreatattentionto

multi-culturecommunication^withrelevantlawsandregulationstoprotect

traditionalculturalheritageandintangibleculturalheritagefromill-treatment

andwiththeincreasingeffortsandhelpcomingfromthecentralgovernment

andoursociety,Iamsoconfidentthattheharmonyofmulti-culturecombination

willbecomecommonplaceinourdailylifeverysoon.

2001年

1)showyourunderstandingofthesymbolicmeaningofthepicturebelow,

2)giveaspecificexample,and

3)giveyoursuggestionastothebestwaytoshowlove.

Thisisaninterestingpicturefullofinstructionandittellsustheimportance

ofself-giving（對(duì)于全篇主旨，可以用各種形式表達(dá)，但關(guān)鍵是要與隨后的行文相

適應(yīng)，最關(guān)鍵的是要使文章更容易控制，這一句是寫(xiě)要求一：showyour

understandingofthesymbolicmeaningofthepicturebelow）Obviously,wecould

tellfromtheabovepicturethataburningoillampdrivesthedarknessawayand

givesusabrightworld.（我只是想使描寫(xiě)生動(dòng)一些，這一句是寫(xiě)耍求二：givea

specificexample以圖為例子證明）Itisaperfectexampleofpeopleenjoyinga

betterlifewhenwarmandlightdriveawaycoldnessand（寫(xiě)物不是目的，

最后還是要寫(xiě)人；過(guò)程和結(jié)果都可以視為what,關(guān)鍵在于用詞表達(dá)）

WhileIamlookingatthispicture,Ican'thelplosinginfurtherthoughtand

searchingforanswerstothisphenomenon.Tomyhappiness,Ifindthatloveand

carefromothersmakeourlifedifferentandenjoyable.Self-givingissomethingto

happiness,socialacceptanceandmeaningfullife.Iunderstandthisthroughmyown

experience.（還是在寫(xiě)what,寫(xiě)結(jié)果和屬性）

Takemeasanexample.............Atthattime,Iknewthatself-givingisstrength

tochangeourlivesandworld,Ifindthatitissopleasanttohelpotherswhentheyare

introuble.（如果寫(xiě)了一個(gè)帶個(gè)性的例子，一定要做個(gè)總結(jié)，突出該事例的意義或

者主題）

Wearesoluckytoliveinsuchacriticalperiodwithcivilizedpolicyand

rapidsocialdevelopment.Withmoreandmorepeoplegivinggreatattentionto

thewelfareofhelplesspeople,withrelevantlawsandregulationstoprotectwomen

andchildrenfromill-treatment,withincreasingeffortsandhelpcomingfromthe

centralgovernmentandoursociety,Iamsoconfidentthatmoreandmorepeople

willbetouchedgreatlyandtakeactiverolestohelpotherswhenself-gi