九年級上冊Unit4Iusedtobeafraidofthedark.演示文稿1

英語寫作評價量表維度A等B等C等D等一結(jié)構(gòu)賦分(4分)寫作內(nèi)容結(jié)構(gòu)清晰可見,有合理性,明顯的分段。(4分)寫作內(nèi)容結(jié)構(gòu)不是很清晰,有分段。(2分)寫作內(nèi)容結(jié)構(gòu)混亂。(0分)內(nèi)容賦分(5分)符合要求,內(nèi)容充實。(5分)符合要求,內(nèi)容不充實。(3.5分)基本符合要求,內(nèi)容很不充實。(2分)跑題,偏題,不知所云。(0分)三寫作技巧詞組，句型，復(fù)合句賦分(6分)能大量使用已學固定搭配，基本句型，適當?shù)倪\用復(fù)合句組織寫作內(nèi)容,不重復(fù)且表達恰當,準確。(6分)能使用已學的固定搭配，基本句型，使用少量復(fù)合句組織寫內(nèi)容,重復(fù)少且基本準確。(4.5分)能使用3—5個已學固定搭配，基本句型，沒有使用復(fù)合句組織寫作內(nèi)容,有重復(fù),且有少量的錯誤。(3分)基本不能使用已學固定搭配和基本句型組織寫作內(nèi)容,錯誤很多。(0—2分）時態(tài)賦分(4分）能根據(jù)寫作要求和寫作內(nèi)容準確地選擇時態(tài)，準確無誤。（4分）能根據(jù)寫作要求和寫作內(nèi)容準確地選擇時態(tài)，有少量的錯誤（2分）不能根據(jù)寫作內(nèi)容準確地選擇和切換時態(tài)，通篇時態(tài)混亂，存在大量錯誤。（0分）邏輯賦分（4分）寫作內(nèi)容中句子之間，段落之間邏輯明顯，且有明顯的and，but等邏輯關(guān)聯(lián)詞，（4分）寫作內(nèi)容中句子之間，段落之間邏輯不明顯，關(guān)聯(lián)詞使用不足，不合理。（3分）寫作內(nèi)容中句子之間，段落之間邏輯混亂，無關(guān)聯(lián)詞（1分）四書寫（2分）整潔，美觀（2分）較整潔，美觀不夠（1分）不整齊，涂涂抹抹。糟糕（0分）范文一Thisweekend,ourfamilyhadabigget-together.Mygrandparentssaidtheyhaven’tseenusforalongtime.Sotheyaskedallofustocomehomethisweekend.Myuncle’sfamilyandmineallcamehomeontime.TheiradultstalkedhappilyandIplayedwithmylittlecousin.Ihaven’thadsuchagreattimeforalongtime.Thisweekend,Icouldplay,eatbigmealandreceivepresent.Ilovefamilytime.

范文二I

had

a

happy

weekend

last

week.

I

was

very

excited.

On

Saturday,

I

visited

XiHui

park

with

my

family

in

the

morning.

We

saw

kinds

of

flowers

in

the

park.

They

were

so

beautiful.

We

all

liked

them

very

much.

Then

we

watched

an

animal

show

in

the

zoo.

In

the

afternoon

we

went

shopping

in

the

supermarket.

There

were

a

lot

of

things

in

it.

We

bought

some

foods

and

tasted

them.

After

that

we

went

home.

I

watched

a

funny

cartoon.

Then

I

did

my

homework

and

helped

mother

do

some

housework.’

How

a

happy

weekends.范文三Iwas

so

happy

last

weekend.Let

me

tell

you.

On

Saturday,

I

got

up

at

seven

o’clock

in

the

morning.I

brushed

my

teeth

and

washed

my

face

before

I

ate

breakfast.Then

I

went

to

children’s

palace

and

had

a

Math

lesson.When

I

went

home,

I

ate

lunch

at

once

because

I

had

a

Music

lesson

at

noon.In

the

afternoon,I

watched

a

film

and

played

with

my

friend.

I

did

some

homework

in

the

evening,.

On

Sunday

morning,I

cilmbed

the

hill

with

my

mother

and

her

friends.In

the

afternoon,I

had

an

Engilsh

lesson.It

was

very

interesting.An

American

teacher

taught

us.And

we

were

very

happy.

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