讀后續(xù)寫講解課件 高考英語一輪復習

讀后續(xù)寫講解寫作步驟：“四步答題法”。閱讀—擬稿—潤色—成稿。Step1Reading閱讀，理清故事情節(jié)，找出5W+1How。畫出關鍵詞，根據所給的段落首句預測后續(xù)故事1.Makesenseofthemainplotsofthepassage.2.Analyzethetwogivensentences&underinekeywordstopredictwhatistofollow.Step2Draft擬稿

workoutanoutline

Step3Polish潤色

1.Usethekeywordsandphrasesinthepassage.2.usedifferentsentensestructures.checkwhethertheverbformsandwordsspellingiscorrect.step4Present(成稿）Producethefinalwork.Writecorrectly，neatlyandpretty!Jennywasaprettyeight-year-oldgirl.Onedaywhensheandhermotherwerecheckingoutatthegrocerystore,Jennysawaplasticpearlnecklace,bywhichshewastotallydefeated.Howeagerlyshewantedit!Butwhenshesawtheprice,herheartsankalittle.Shegathereduphercourageandaskedhermotherifshewouldbuyitforher.Hermothersaid,“Well,itisaprettynecklace,butitcostsanawfullotofmoney.Icanbuyyouthenecklace,butwhenwegethome,weshouldmakeupalistofhouseworkthatyoucandotopayforthenecklace.”Jennyagreedimmediately,feelingaburstofjoy.Sohermotherboughtthepearlnecklaceforher.Jennyworkedonherhouseworkdeterminedlyandearnestlyeveryday.SoonJennypaidoffthepearls.Jennyhadaverylovingdaddy.WhenJennywenttobed,hewouldreadJennyherfavoritestory.Onenightwhenhefinishedthestory,hesaid,“Jenny,doyouloveme?”“Oh,yes,Daddy,youknowIloveyou.”thelittlegirlsaiddelightedly,withabroadsmileonherface.“Well,then,givemeyourpearls.”Hearingthat,Jennyfrozethere,ananxiousexpressiontwistingherface.“Oh!Daddy,notmypearls!ButyoucanhaveRosy,myfavoritedoll.Rememberher?Yougavehertomelastyearformybirthday.Okay?”“Ohno,darling,that’sokay.”Herfatherbrushedhercheekwithakiss,gentlyandcalmly.“Goodnight,littleone.”Aweeklater,herfatheronceagainaskedJennyafterherstory,“Doyouloveme?”“Ohyes,Daddy,youknowIloveyou.”thelittlegirlmurmuredsoftly,tryingtoescapefromherfather’seyes.“Well,then,givemeyourpearls.”“Oh,Daddy,notmypearls!ButyoucanhaveRibbons,mytoyhorse.Doyourememberher?Sheismyfavorite.”Thelittlegirlbegged.“No,that’sokay,”herfathersaid,smilingbroadlyandsweetlyandbrushedhercheekagainwithakiss.“Godblessyou,littleone.Sweetdreams.”續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；Paragraph1：Severaldayslater,whenJenny’sfathercameintoreadherstory,Jennywaswaitinganxiouslyforhimonthebed.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2：Holdingtheplasticpearlhisdaughteroffered,thefatherdraggedoutabluebox.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________第一步，迅速獲取故事情節(jié)（5W+1H)1.who:Jenny(themajorcharacter),herdaddy,hermother2.when:at

night3.where:Jenny’sbedroom,thestore3.What:astoryaboutadaughter’sloveforherfatherthanherloveforapearlnecklace

4.Why:herfatheraskedherdaughtertogivetheplasticpearlnecklaccetohim.5.How:Jennydecidedtogivethenecklacetoherfather第二步，理清人物情感變化。

第三步：分析所給的兩段首句與上文的聯系

Severaldayslater,whenJenny’sfathercameintoreadherstory,Jennywaswaitinganxiouslyforhimonthebed.Holdingtheplasticpearlhisdaughteroffered,thefatherdraggedoutabluebox.兩段首句定一框Predict:WhathappenedatJenny?What’sthebluebox?Think:Whatcanbeinferedfrom“offered”inthesecondsentence?第二步，理清人物情感變化

plothowdidtheemotionchange?Beginning:para1-2

Development:para3-4climax:5-6

wastotallydefeatedherheartsankalittlefrozeanxiousexpressiononherfaceescapefromherfather’seyeslove續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；Paragraph1：Severaldayslater,whenJenny’sfathercameintoreadherstory,Jennywaswaitinganxiouslyforhimonthebed.Whenlisteningtothestory,Jennywastotallyabsent-minded,withherhandsholdingthenecklacetightlyandfirmly.Whenthestorycametoanend,unexpectedly,Jennyofferedherbelovednecklacetoherfather,withherfingerstremblingautomatically.Nooneknewwhatthenecklacemeanttoher.Shewhisperedtoherfather,softlyandgently,“Daddy,youknowIloveyoumorethanthenecklace.”Then,thenecklaceslidintoherfather’shandsdeterminedly.

Paragraph2：Holdingtheplasticpearlhisdaughteroffered,thefatherdraggedoutabluebox.MuchtoJenny’samazement,abeautifulrealpearlnecklacelaypeacefullyinthebox,whichsetherheartracing.Jennyfrozethere,athrilledexpressiontwistingherface.BeforeJennywasabletosaysomething.herfatherbrushedawarmkissonherfaceandgatheredherintohisarms.Holdingthegenuinenecklaceinherhand,Jennyliftedherlip,tearsbeginningtoblurhervision.3.她的心有點沉了herheartsinkalittle鼓起勇氣gatherupone’scourage花費一大筆錢costanawful(極壞的，非常)lotofmoney感到一陣喜悅feelaburstofjoy堅決而認真地做家務workonherhouseworkdeterminedlyandearnestly臉上帶著燦爛的笑容withabroadsmileonherface焦慮的表情扭曲著她的臉ananxiousexpressiontwisti