Unit5-寫作課-公開課課件（二）

UNIT5MUSIC

WrittingLesson

——固陽縣第一中學授課班級：高一（3）班授課教師：邊穎Lookatthepictures.Find

thesame（相同的）word

ineverypage(頁）

Thesloganof2008BeijingOlympicGames:oneworld,

onedream.Fengjie

dreamstomarryahandsomeandrichhusband.Theboysare

dreamingaboutbeingsoilders.Whichwordappearsagainandagain?dreamWhattowriteaboutdreamsinEnglish?Whattowriteaboutyourdream?1.theimportanceofdreams(夢想的意義）2.introduceyourdreams(描述你的夢想）3.thereasonsforyourdream(有夢想的原因）4.theactionsneededtotake(需要采取的措施）5.futureplanning（未來的計劃）Jobs：醫(yī)生doctor;工程師engineer;

演員actor;記者reporter;

導游tourguide;烘焙師baker;廚師cook;農(nóng)夫farmer;律師lawyerReview復習與回顧1.dream(n./v.)夢想2.haveadream有夢想3.dreamtobe夢想成為4.dreamaboutdoing夢想做5.inorderto為了6.inthefuture在未來7.thereasonwhy...的原因是Preview預習與鞏固1.realizeone'sdream實現(xiàn)夢想2.formagoodhabit養(yǎng)成良好習慣3.tryone'sbesttodo盡力做某事4.devoteoneselftodoingsth/sth全神貫注做某事

Step1theimportanceofyourdream夢想的意義Let'strytomakesentence.(造句練習）提示：playanimportantpartin

在...中扮演重要角色eg:Dreams___________________

inourlife.夢想在我們的生命中扮演著重要角色。areplayinganimportantpartStep2IntroduceYourDream介紹你的夢想Let'strytomakesentence.(造句練習）提示：dreamtobe+職業(yè)夢想成為..Idreamtobeadoctor.我夢想成為一名醫(yī)生。舉一反三：蘇志超夢想成為一名籃球運動員。SuZhichao______________

abasketballplayerdreamstobeAskandAnswer1.Whatisyourdream?Idreamtobe()().2.Whatisher/hisdream?She/Hedreamstobe()().Step3describethereasonsforhavingsuchadream描述擁有這樣夢想的原因例子：Thereasonwhy

Iwanttobeateacher

isthatIamfondofteaching.我想要做老師的原因是我喜歡教學。befondofdoing喜歡做某事1）

dancerbefondofdancingsingerbefondofsingingdesigner--befondofdesigning拓展2

）earnmoney賺錢

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）helpothers幫助他人

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）gainhappinessandsatisfaction

獲得幸福感和滿足感提示：Thereasonwhyisthat...

的原因是Let'stry1.我選擇做（歌手）的原因是（我喜歡唱歌）ThereasonwhyIwanttobea______isthat_________________.2.我選擇做（設(shè)計師）的原因是（它能帶來幸福和滿足感）。ThereasonwhyIwanttobea______isthat____________________________.singerIamfondofsingingdesigneritcanbringhappinessandsatisfactionStep4youractionstorealizeyourdreams實現(xiàn)夢想需要采取的行動提示：inorderto為了

realizeone'sdream實現(xiàn)夢想例子：為了實現(xiàn)夢想，我會提高自己。Inordertorealizemydream,Iwillimprovemyself.

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相關(guān)短語：

拓展

1.形成學習的好習慣

formagoodhabitoflearning

2.提高自身

improveoneself

Let'stry1.為了實現(xiàn)夢想，我要提高自己。Inorderto____________,Iwill__________.2.為了實現(xiàn)夢想，我要養(yǎng)成良好的學習習慣。__________torealizemydream,Iwill________________________.realizemydreamimprovemyselfInordertoformagoodhabitoflearningStep5Futureplanning未來計劃提示：devoteoneselfto+(n.)/doing專心致志做某事例子：如果我能做一名老師，我將會專心致志的教書育人。IfIcanbeateacher,Iwilldevotemyselfto

teachingstudents.舉一反三：如果我能做一名警察，我將會專心致志的工作。IfIcanbe________,iwill___________tomyjob.apolicemandevotemyself

總結(jié)1.夢想的意義

playanimportantpartin2.你的夢想是

Idreamtobe+職業(yè)3.有夢想的原因

thereasonwhy...isthat…4.實現(xiàn)夢想行動

Inordertorealizedream,Iwillimproveoneself5.未來計劃：

IfIcanbe…Iwilldevotemyselfto

Let'shaveatryWritedownyourdreamsonyournotebooks.Conclusion英文寫作需注意的細節(jié)：（1）語言準確：文章在標點符號，語法，用詞上無誤。時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時（2）詞句豐富：用詞避免重復瑣碎，適當時候用高級詞匯，比如我的夢想是…Ihaveadream,It's…;Idreamtobe…明顯后者更高級（3）行文流暢：比如需要繼續(xù)說明拓展的時候，用besidesthat,inaddition,exceptthat等連接會讓文章顯得更加有序。（4）注意開頭結(jié)尾。開門見山，直擊要點，結(jié)尾歸納前文，進行總結(jié)。（5）控制字數(shù)，符合要求。MyDream

Dreams___(be)playing___importantpartinourlife.Idream______ateacher.Thereason___IwanttobeateacheristhatIamfondof_____(teach).What‘smore,Itcanearnmoneyformyfamily.Moreimportantly,Igainmuch_______(happy)andsatisfactionfromit._______（為了）realizemydream,Iwillformagoodhabitof______(learn)___improvemysel