2017-2018譯林版8A英語(yǔ)期末專(zhuān)項(xiàng)復(fù)習(xí)：書(shū)面表達(dá)(含答案).doc

8A期末書(shū)面表達(dá)范文一、書(shū)面表達(dá)(20分)溱湖風(fēng)景區(qū)（Qin Lake National Wetland Park）位于泰州市西北部，面積26平方公里，是中國(guó)最重要的濕地之一。1、許多不同種類(lèi)的鳥(niǎo)兒全年生活在那兒，濕地的魚(yú)很多，鳥(niǎo)兒很容易找到食物。2、它是觀鳥(niǎo)的極好的地方。每年，許多游客去溱湖觀鳥(niǎo)。3、但是，許多人不知道濕地的重要性。他們（列舉至少一個(gè)人們破壞濕地的行為）4、政府采取的措施及作為學(xué)生我們?cè)撛趺醋?。Qin Lake National Wetland Park is in the northwest of Taizhou. It covers an area of 26 square kilometers. It is one of the worlds most important wetlands in China. Many kinds of birds live in Qin Lake all year round. There are many fish in the wetland, so the birds can easily find food. Its a perfect place to go birdwatching. Every year, a lot of tourists go to Qin Lake to watch the birds. However, many people dont know the importance of the wetlands. .評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)： 1.（1720分）內(nèi)容完整、表達(dá)充分(至少12句，學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮的部分表達(dá)得有理有據(jù))、層次結(jié)構(gòu)清晰、語(yǔ)言流暢、地道，有少量錯(cuò)誤。2.（1316分）內(nèi)容完整，表達(dá)較充分（至少10句，學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮的部分尚能表達(dá)得有理有據(jù)）、層次結(jié)構(gòu)較清晰、語(yǔ)言較流暢、地道，有少量錯(cuò)誤。 3.（912分）內(nèi)容較完整，但表達(dá)不夠充分（只要適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮即可），層次結(jié)構(gòu)較不太合理、語(yǔ)言不夠流暢、地道，有較多語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。4.（58分）內(nèi)容不完整，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)錯(cuò)誤較多，不能完整表達(dá)意思。 5.（04分）內(nèi)容不完整，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)錯(cuò)誤很多，僅有幾個(gè)單詞可讀，不能表達(dá)出與提示內(nèi)容相關(guān)的意思。二、書(shū)面表達(dá)（滿(mǎn)分10分）某英語(yǔ)報(bào)社舉行“國(guó)寶-熊貓”征文比賽，請(qǐng)你以“Giant pandas”為題，根據(jù)提示要點(diǎn)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇80詞左右的短文參賽。提示要點(diǎn): 1、人們都喜歡大熊貓，它們黑白相間，貌似熊，平靜而溫和；2、它們只生活在中國(guó)，現(xiàn)僅存一千只左右，數(shù)目越來(lái)越少； 3、大熊貓生活的地方在變成農(nóng)田，人們?yōu)楂@取毛皮而捕殺它們； 4、如果再不采取措施，世界上將再無(wú)大熊貓了。參考詞匯: quiet and peaceful farmland killfor fur take actionsAll people like giant pandas. They only live in China. Giant pandas are beautiful. They are black and white. They look like bears. They are quiet and peaceful. They eat bamboo shoots and leaves. Now there are only about a thousand pandas in the world. Their number is getting smaller and smaller, because their living areas are becoming farmlands. Also, people hunt them for their fur. Since they are in great danger, we must take actions to protect them, or there will be no giant pandas in the world.書(shū)面表達(dá)評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：第五檔：（9-10分）能寫(xiě)明全部要點(diǎn)，語(yǔ)言基本無(wú)誤或有少量拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤，行文流暢，表達(dá)清楚。 第四檔：（7-8分）能寫(xiě)明大部分要點(diǎn)，語(yǔ)言有一些錯(cuò)誤（句子結(jié)構(gòu)或動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤1-2處），但行文基本流暢，表達(dá)基本清楚。第三檔：（5-6分）能寫(xiě)明一些要點(diǎn)，語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤較多（句子結(jié)構(gòu)或動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤3-4處）。但意思基本連貫，表達(dá)基本清楚。第二檔：（3-4分）能寫(xiě)出少數(shù)要點(diǎn)，語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤較多，意思不連貫，影響意思表達(dá)。第一檔：（0-2分）只能寫(xiě)出若干單詞，無(wú)可讀的句子。三、書(shū)面表達(dá)（滿(mǎn)分15分）請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示寫(xiě)一篇短文。要求：要點(diǎn)齊全，書(shū)寫(xiě)工整，不少于60個(gè)單詞。 假如你是李峰， 是上海陽(yáng)光中學(xué)一名八年級(jí)學(xué)生， 你的學(xué)校最近建立了一個(gè)保護(hù)野生動(dòng)物俱樂(lè)部Friend of Nature。請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一封申請(qǐng)信，要求加入俱樂(lè)部。要點(diǎn)如下：1、你的身份和你想成為俱樂(lè)部成員的愿望。2、說(shuō)明你的興趣和愛(ài)好。3、你對(duì)野生動(dòng)物的熱愛(ài)以及對(duì)保護(hù)它們的重要性的認(rèn)識(shí)。(認(rèn)識(shí)不少于兩點(diǎn)。)4、每個(gè)星期天上午9點(diǎn)到10點(diǎn)可以參加俱樂(lè)部活動(dòng)。5、聯(lián)系方式E-mail: Li F.四、書(shū)面表達(dá)(20分)幫助Sandy寫(xiě)一篇請(qǐng)求加入觀鳥(niǎo)協(xié)會(huì)的申請(qǐng)（80字左右）1. 我想成為觀鳥(niǎo)俱樂(lè)部的一員。2我是八年級(jí)的學(xué)生，我對(duì)足球很古感興趣，我最喜歡的科目是音樂(lè)和歷史。3我熱愛(ài)鳥(niǎo)類(lèi)，了解更多鳥(niǎo)類(lèi)知識(shí)。熱愛(ài)大自然。4我想做點(diǎn)事保護(hù)鳥(niǎo)類(lèi)，每個(gè)星期六下午3-5點(diǎn)可以參加活動(dòng)5聯(lián)系方式：Tel:Dear Sir or Madam,I would like to join the Birdwatching Society.First, let me introduce myself. I am sandy. And Im a grade 8 student. My favourite sport is football. I also become interested in music and history.I would like to be a member of the Birdwatching Society. I enjoy the natural world so much that I love birds. At the same time I want to learn much about birds. I think it is important for me to protect them. So I want to take part in all kinds of activities from 3 p.m to 5 p.m on Saturdays.I will be very happy if I can be a member of the Birdwatching Society. You can call me onIm looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully,Sandy五、書(shū)面表達(dá)（滿(mǎn)分10分）2014年8月3日，云南省昭通市魯?shù)榭h境內(nèi)發(fā)生6.5級(jí)地震，造成重大人員傷亡。我們應(yīng)該為云南的人們做些什么呢? 當(dāng)?shù)卣鸢l(fā)生時(shí)，我們應(yīng)該怎么辦呢? 請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文。內(nèi)容如下：可以做的事情：1.捐錢(qián)物給他們； 2.地震來(lái)臨時(shí): 1.保持冷靜；2.遠(yuǎn)離建筑物，最好；不要跳下樓，.會(huì)更安全一些。3. 注意：1.要點(diǎn)齊全、語(yǔ)意連貫、語(yǔ)法正確、書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范； 2.詞數(shù)70左右；開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。A big earthquake happened in Yunnan Province on August, 3rd this year. Its reported that many people died or became homeless.As a middle school student, I think we can raise some money to help them. We can also collect some books and stationery for the children in Yunnan. We can make some posters to let more people know and help them.We cant stop an earthquake, but we should keep calm when it happens. We should stay far away from buildings. Wed better run to an open area as fast as we can. Never try to jump down from the windows. Staying in a corner of your room or under a desk is safer. Call for help if possible.I think everyone should learn the ways of protecting themselves when they are facing danger. At the same time, we should help each other when having difficulty. 六、書(shū)面表達(dá) (本大題共10分)假設(shè)你是李華，在網(wǎng)上看到了Wildlife Protection Club (野生動(dòng)物保護(hù)俱樂(lè)部) 招募志愿者的廣告。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一封信給俱樂(lè)部主席Mr. Brown，申請(qǐng)加入該俱樂(lè)部，并表示，如果能加入，將會(huì)很開(kāi)心。請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格信息和提示完成申請(qǐng)信。學(xué)校Sunshine Secondary School 年級(jí)八年級(jí)品德勤奮, 樂(lè)于助人 愛(ài)好籃球和旅游，從小喜愛(ài)動(dòng)物申請(qǐng)理由聯(lián)系方式051087654321， 注意：1詞數(shù)70左右，信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)； 2信須包括所有要點(diǎn)，申請(qǐng)理由用2-3句適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3不得透露班級(jí)、姓名等任何個(gè)人信息，否則不予評(píng)分。Dear Mr. Brown,I read your advertisement on the Internet and I would like to join the Wildlife Protection Club. I am a student in Grade 8 at Sunshine Secondary School. I am very hard-working and helpful. I love playing basketball and travelling. I loved animals when I was very young. I would like to learn more about animals. And I hope to do something for animals. I will be very happy if I can be a member of your club. Please call me onor e-mail me at . I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely,Li Hua七、書(shū)面表達(dá)（本題共20分）良好的習(xí)慣成就美好的未來(lái)。作為青少年，如何培養(yǎng)良好的習(xí)慣呢？請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示以 “How to Develop Good Habits”為題寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文。詞數(shù)90左右（開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。How to Develop Good Habits學(xué)習(xí)上課認(rèn)真聽(tīng)講，做筆記；每天按時(shí)完成作業(yè)；閑暇時(shí)多讀課外書(shū)籍；生活每周鍛煉3至4次；多吃蔬菜、水果，少吃垃圾食品；補(bǔ)充補(bǔ)充一至兩點(diǎn)良好的習(xí)慣，并談?wù)勊鼈儗?duì)身心健康的影響。要求：1. 要點(diǎn)齊全，條理清楚，語(yǔ)句通順，不要逐字翻譯。 2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)校名及姓名，否則不予評(píng)分。I think its very important for us to develop good habits. As teenagers, what should we do? In my opinion, we should listen to the teacher carefully and take notes when necessary. It is a good habit to finish the schoolwork on time every day. In spare time, we had better read some books to get more knowledge. Also, we should eat more fresh fruit and vegetables and less junk food. Its necessary for us to take exercise for three or four times a week. Whats more, to get enough sleep, go to bed early and dont stay up late. Always remember to wash our hands before meals to keep clean. Exercise is fun and relaxing. Its healthy for the mind and body. Healthy lifestyle helps us get good grades and live happily.九、書(shū)面表達(dá)（共10分）美國(guó)女孩Amy是你班上新來(lái)的學(xué)生，她想了解學(xué)校的課外活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)一篇70詞左右的短文，告訴她有關(guān)情況。 (開(kāi)頭與給出，請(qǐng)接著寫(xiě)。)1、課外活動(dòng)時(shí)間：每天下午下午3：30至4：50；2、可以在操場(chǎng)上打球（籃球、足球、排球、乒乓球）；3、有很多興趣小組：繪畫(huà)、象棋、唱歌、舞蹈、中國(guó)功夫 (Chinese Kongfu) 等；4、最受歡迎的是中國(guó)工夫，因?yàn)榭梢詮?qiáng)身健體。Welcome to my class, Amy. I am very happy to introduce to you the after-school activities in my school. Our after-school activities are from 3.30 pm to 4.50 pm every day. You may play football, basket ball, volleyball or table tennis in the school field. Besides that, the indoor activities are drawings, chess, singing, dancing and Chinese Kongfu. Chinese Kongku is the most popular activity because it helps to make us strong and keep fit. I hope you will enjoy as much as you could during your stay in China.十.寫(xiě)作（10分）根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)提示寫(xiě)一篇題為Protecting Our Nature的作文，字?jǐn)?shù)6左右。要點(diǎn)： 過(guò)去我們有藍(lán)天白云，地上有大量的各類(lèi)動(dòng)、植物。 現(xiàn)在我們看到森林面積大量地減少，人們獵殺許多動(dòng)物，有的動(dòng)物人們見(jiàn)不到了。 我們應(yīng)該做一些事情來(lái)保護(hù)自然，關(guān)愛(ài)自己，讓人們與自然和睦相處。In the past, we had white clouds and blue sky. There are a lot of different kinds of animals and plants. But now we can see the area of forests is becoming smaller and smaller. People hunt and kill many animals. Some animals are dying out or have died out. We should take actions to protect our nature. Loving nature is loving ourselves. Let people and nature be friendly to each other.書(shū)面表達(dá)評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：說(shuō)明：先根據(jù)文章整體內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言表達(dá)確定檔次，然后在該檔次內(nèi)評(píng)出分?jǐn)?shù)。第一檔（109分）完全符合題目要求，表達(dá)清楚，內(nèi)容豐富。使用多種語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和豐富的詞匯，語(yǔ)言通順，語(yǔ)意連貫，具有邏輯性。允許有個(gè)別語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。第二檔（87分）符合題目要求，表達(dá)基本清楚，內(nèi)容完整。語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯基本滿(mǎn)足文章需要，語(yǔ)言基本通順，語(yǔ)意基本連貫，有少量語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，但不影響整體理解。第三檔（65分）部分內(nèi)容符合題目要求，表達(dá)不清楚，內(nèi)容不完整。語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯錯(cuò)誤較多，語(yǔ)言不通順，影響整體理解。第四檔（43分）與題目有關(guān)的內(nèi)容不多，不能表達(dá)自己的思想。只是簡(jiǎn)單拼湊提示詞語(yǔ)，所寫(xiě)內(nèi)容難以理解。第五檔（20分）只寫(xiě)出個(gè)別詞語(yǔ)。十一、書(shū)面表達(dá)（本大題共5分） 近年來(lái)霧霾天氣（haze）越來(lái)越嚴(yán)重。請(qǐng)就此話(huà)題寫(xiě)一篇80詞左右的短文。內(nèi)容提示：1. 因?yàn)殪F霾天氣，學(xué)生的戶(hù)外活動(dòng)比以前少了；2. 人們不得不戴面罩（mask）出行, 道路上也發(fā)生了更多交通事故；3. 空氣污染問(wèn)題嚴(yán)重，不利于健康；4. 每個(gè)人都應(yīng)該采取措施來(lái)保護(hù)環(huán)境。例如注意：1. 短文須包括所有要點(diǎn)，不必逐句翻譯，要求語(yǔ)句通順、意思連貫；2. 第4個(gè)要點(diǎn)的內(nèi)容須適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3. 短文開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。 These years the haze weather appears more and more often. Because of the haze weather, students have fewer outdoor activities than before. X k B 1 . c o mPeople have to wear masks when they go out. Also, there are more traffic accidents on the road.Air pollution has become a serious problem. It is bad for our health. Everyone should take action to protect the environment. For example, we can change our life style. We can ride bikes or take buses when we go out. I plan to plant more trees in the future.十二.書(shū)面表達(dá)(20分) 假如你是王林。你所在學(xué)校的“愛(ài)心俱樂(lè)部(Helping Hands Club)”將招收新會(huì)員。你想加入該俱樂(lè)部，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面表格和圖片的內(nèi)容，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一封自薦信。要求:1.表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫; 2.要點(diǎn)須包括表格和四幅圖片中的信息; 3.表格中“加入目的”一欄內(nèi)容由考生自定; 4.詞數(shù):80左右，信的開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear Chairman, I am a boy student from Class 1, Grade 3. Id like to be a member of the Helping Hands Club. I am strong. I work hard at my lessons. I tike helping others. I get on well with my classmates and often help them with their lessons. On my way home, I often help old people cross the street. On the bus, I always give my seat to women with babies. Sometimes, I pick up rubbish in the park. If I join the club, I will be able to make more friends. Besides, I can do more for others. Ill be glad if Im accepted. I am waiting for your answer. Yours;Wang Lin十三、書(shū)面表達(dá) （10分）旅游不僅可以放松我們的心情，還可以開(kāi)闊我們的視野，豐富我們的知識(shí)。去年暑假你和你的父母乘飛機(jī)去北京游玩了兩天。請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示寫(xiě)一篇短文，要求要點(diǎn)齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，語(yǔ)句通順，表達(dá)流暢，字?jǐn)?shù)在80左右。要點(diǎn)：1.第一天我們?nèi)ヅ篱L(zhǎng)城，并且拍了許多照片，很累但是很快樂(lè)。2.第二天我們參觀了頤和園（The Summer Palace）人很多。 看到很多花，景色非常漂亮。我們了解到了很多關(guān)于我們國(guó)家的東西。3.第三天，去購(gòu)物，逛街，吃美味的食物。Last summer, we took a plane trip to Beijing. On the first day, we went to climb the Great Wall and took many photos. We were tired but very happy. On the second day, we visited the Summer Palace. There were too many people. We saw a lot of flowers and it had a very beautiful view. We learned a lot about our country there. On the third day, we went shopping in Wangfujin Street. We had delicious food there.We had a great time there.十四.書(shū)面表達(dá)(20分)地球上所有動(dòng)物都是地球的主人，人與動(dòng)物共享同一家園。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表提示，以“Protect earth and love animals”為題寫(xiě)一篇英文演講稿，在學(xué)校舉辦的“第一屆英語(yǔ)節(jié)”活動(dòng)中作專(zhuān)題演講。演講稿應(yīng)包含表中所有要點(diǎn)，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。詞數(shù)80左右。你的觀點(diǎn)人類(lèi)和動(dòng)物擁有共同的家問(wèn) 題1. 亂砍亂伐、濕地減少；2. 動(dòng)物生存空間越來(lái)越少；3. 解決辦法1. 政府制訂法律保護(hù)動(dòng)物；2. 我們學(xué)生重 要 性如果我們不采取行動(dòng), Protect earth and love animalsGood morning, everyone! Today I am very happy to be here to give a speech. Humans share the same home with other animals. However, people cut down too many trees so that the area of the wetlands becomes smaller and smaller. And people