3.3公開課“概要寫作”.ppt

,高考新題型之概要寫作,Summary,whatthesummarywritingis,thecriteriaofagoodsummary,howtowriteagoodsummary,1,2,3,5,Afterthisclass,Ihopeyouwillknow:,普通高等學(xué)校招生全國統(tǒng)一考試英語科考試說明,概要寫作：提供一篇350詞以內(nèi)的短文，要求考生基于該短文寫出一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。（滿分25分）,評分原則,本題總分為25分，分5個檔次給分,Narration（記敘文）,Exposition（說明文）,FormsofLiterature,Argumentation(議論文）,Argumentation(議論文）,Topic,Supportingideas,Conclusion,Thereisnothingfixedaboutattitudestodirt,Step1:Read,topicsentence:,Inwhatorderdoesthepassagedeveloptoshowthedifferent“attitudes”?,(para1)Gettingridofdirt,intheopinionofmostpeople,isagoodthing.However,thereisnothingfixedaboutattitudestodirt.,(Para2)Intheearly16thcentury,peoplethoughtthatdirtontheskinwasameanstoblockoutdisease,asmedicalopinionhaditthatwashingoffdirtwithhotwatercouldopenuptheskinandletillsin.Aparticulardangerwasthoughttolieinpublicbaths.By1538,theFrenchkinghadclosedthebathhousesinhiskingdom.SodidthekingofEnglandin1546.ThusbeganalongtimewhentherichandthepoorinEuropelivedwithdirtinafriendlyway.HenryIV,KingofFrance,wasfamouslydirty.Uponlearningthatanoblemanhadtakenabath,thekingorderedthat,toavoidtheattackofdisease,thenoblemanshouldnotgoout.(Para3)Thoughthebeliefinthemeritofdirtwaslong-lived,dirthasnolongerbeenregardedasaniceneighboreversincethe18thcentury.Scientificallyspeaking,cleaningawaydirtisgoodtohealth.Cleanwatersupplyandhandwashingarepracticalmeansofpreventingdisease.Yet,itseemsthatstandardsofcleanlinesshavemovedbeyondsciencesinceWorldWar.Advertisementsrepeatedlyselltheidea;clothesneedtobewhiterthanwhite,clothseversofter,surfacestoshine.Hasthehatefordirt,however,gonetoofar?(Para4)Attitudestodirtstilldifferhugelynowadays.Manyfirst-timeparentsnervouslytrytowarntheirchildrenofftouchingdirt,whichmightberesponsibleforthespreadofdisease.Onthecontrary,MaryRuebush,anAmericanimmunologist(免疫學(xué)家),encourageschildrentoplayinthedirttobuildupastrongimmunesystem.Andthelatterpositionisgainingsomeground.,Thereisnothingfixedaboutattitudestodirt,topicsentence(inpara1),supportingideas(inpara2-4),Findoutthetopicsentenceofeachparagraph,think,believe,consider,regard,argue,support,beconvincedthat,inonesopinion,fromonespointofview,Para2:Intheearly16thcentury,peoplethoughtthatdirtontheskinwasameanstoblockoutdisease,asmedicalopinionhaditthatwashingoffdirtwithhotwatercouldopenuptheskinandletillsin.Aparticulardangerwasthoughttolieinpublicbaths.By1538,theFrenchkinghadclosedthebathhousesinhiskingdom.SodidthekingofEnglandin1546.ThusbeganalongtimewhentherichandthepoorinEuropelivedwithdirtinafriendlyway.HenryIV,KingofFrance,wasfamouslydirty.Uponlearningthatanoblemanhadtakenabath,thekingorderedthat,toavoidtheattackofdisease,thenoblemanshouldnotgoout.,ExamplesofsomeEuropeancountries,(Para3)Thoughthebeliefinthemeritofdirtwaslong-lived,dirthasnolongerbeenregardedasaniceneighboreversincethe18thcentury.Scientificallyspeaking,cleaningawaydirtisgoodtohealth.Cleanwatersupplyandhandwashingarepracticalmeansofpreventingdisease.Yet,itseemsthatstandardsofcleanlinesshavemovedbeyondsciencesinceWorldWar.Advertisementsrepeatedlyselltheidea;clothesneedtobewhiterthanwhite,clothseversofter,surfacestoshine.Hasthehatefordirt,however,gonetoofar?,(Para4)Attitudestodirtstilldifferhugelynowadays.Manyfirst-timeparentsnervouslytrytowarntheirchildrenofftouchingdirt,whichmightberesponsibleforthespreadofdisease.Onthecontrary,MaryRuebush,anAmericanimmunologist(免疫學(xué)家),encourageschildrentoplayinthedirttobuildupastrongimmunesystem.Andthelatterpositionisgainingsomeground.,Step2:Makeanoutline,Inthe16thcentury,since18thcentury,Peoplethoughtthatdirtontheskinwasameanstoblockoutdisease,hasnolongerbeenregardedascleaningawaydirtisgoodtohealth,encourageschildrentoplayinthedirttobuildupastrongimmunesystem,Step3:Rewritethesentencesinotherways,Thereisnothingfixedaboutattitudestodirt.,different,mixed,various,反義轉(zhuǎn)換,opinions,views,ideas,同義詞替換,Peoplesattitudestodirtvaryindifferenttimes.,towards,句型轉(zhuǎn)換,Peopleholddifferentopinionstowardsdirtovertime.,Theattitudestodirtisnotalwaysthesame.,Intheearly16thcentury,peoplethoughtthatdirtontheskinwasameanstoblockoutdisease.,Haveatry!,Intheearly16thcentury,peoplethoughtthatdirtontheskinwasameanstoblockoutdisease.,think:believe,hold,consider,insist,argue,areconvinced.,同義詞替換,blockoutdisease:protect/keepawayfromillness;,Onepossibleversion:Inthe16thcentury,peoplebelievedthatdirtprotectedpeoplefromgettingill.,.dirthasnolongerbeenregardedasaniceneighboreversincethe18thcentury.Scientificallyspeaking,cleaningawaydirtisgoodtohealth.,washoff,getridof,benefits,isbeneficialto,contributesto,Onepossibleversion:Peoplebegantochangetheirattitudestodirtabout200yearsago.Peoplehavebeentoldthatwashingdirtoffourbodyisbeneficialtoourhealth.,nolongerbeenregarded,begintochangetheirattitudesto,eversincethe18thcentury,about200yearsago,Nowadays,encouragespeopletoplayinthedirttobuildupastrongimmunesystem.,Onepossibleversion:Nowadays,peopleareencouragedtobeexposedtothedirttoimproveourimmunesystem.,Peopleareencouragedto,語態(tài)轉(zhuǎn)換,beexposedto.,improve/helponesimmunesystem,buildupastrongimmunesystem,Peopleholdmixedopinionstowardsdirtonourskin.,Inthe16thcentury,peopleofsomeEuropeancountries,suchasFrance,believedthatdirtprotectedpeoplefromgettingill.,Peoplebegantochangetheirattitudestodirtmorethan200yearsago.Theyhavebeentoldthatwashingdirtoffourbodycankeepushealthy.,Nowadays,somescientistsbelievethatexposuretosomedirtmayhelpourimmunesystem.,However,Nevertheless/But/however,Addtwolinkingwordstomakethepassagecoherent,Step4:Makethesummarycoherent,nowadays,Step5:Revise,(67words),People