山西省長(zhǎng)治縣2016中考英語(yǔ)二輪選編作文2

1、作文第一部分【2016中考模擬】書(shū)面表達(dá)（本題有1小題；共計(jì)20分）九年級(jí)學(xué)生面臨著升學(xué)的壓力，許多學(xué)生課間休息時(shí)依然在教室里做作業(yè)。這樣的行為會(huì)給學(xué)習(xí)帶來(lái)幫助嗎？初三學(xué)生就此進(jìn)行了熱烈的討論，有人認(rèn)為可節(jié)約時(shí)間，多做練習(xí)，盡快地取得進(jìn)步。但有人認(rèn)為課間就應(yīng)該到室外參加一些體育活動(dòng)，這更利于學(xué)生的身體健康。請(qǐng)你以Is it a proper（適當(dāng)?shù)模﹚ay to study in the 10-minute break?為題，根據(jù)同學(xué)們的討論結(jié)果用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇發(fā)言稿，談?wù)勀愕目捶?。?nèi)容要點(diǎn)：1描述現(xiàn)象；2.某些學(xué)生的觀點(diǎn)；3.你的看法和理由。要求：1.詞數(shù)：80詞左右。2.文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名

2、和所在學(xué)校的名稱(chēng)。Is it a proper way to study in the 10-minute break?【參考范文】書(shū)面表達(dá)Recen tly we have had a discussi on about whether it is a proper way to study in the 10-minutebreak or not. Some students believe that it can help them save time to do more exercises. they are able to get rapidprogress. But I hold

3、 the opposite opinion. Firstly, after 40minu tesclass we have been tired includingour body and brain. Therefore certainlywe need to havebreak. Secon dly, we should get ready for the n ext class rather tha n do some exercises. The last but no t least, it is aSo thata short2cha nee for us to go to the

4、 washroom.書(shū)面表達(dá)評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：（一）評(píng)分細(xì)則1.本題總分20分，按5個(gè)檔次給分。2.根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言初步確定其檔次，然后以該檔次的要求來(lái)衡量、確定或調(diào)整。3.詞數(shù)少于60或多于120的，從總分中減去2分。4.應(yīng)注意的主要內(nèi)容：內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)、應(yīng)用詞匯、語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)及上下文的連貫性。5.如書(shū)寫(xiě)較差以至影響交際，將分?jǐn)?shù)降低一個(gè)檔次。（二）檔次劃分第五檔：（18 20分）包含所有要點(diǎn)，完全完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)；有清晰的文本框架，較多的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯；有效地使用了語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，行文連貫，表達(dá)清楚；語(yǔ)言基本無(wú)誤。第四檔：（14 17分）基本包含所有要點(diǎn)，遺漏少量次要點(diǎn)，較全面地完成

5、了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)；有較清晰 的文本框架，比較多樣的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯；行文基本連貫，表達(dá)基本清楚；語(yǔ)言有少量錯(cuò)誤。第三檔：（10 13分）包含大多數(shù)要點(diǎn)，基本完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)；少許語(yǔ)句不通順，語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤較多， 但不影響整體理解。第二檔：（69分）只包含少數(shù)要點(diǎn)，未恰當(dāng)完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)；多數(shù)語(yǔ)句不完整，語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)單調(diào)， 詞匯項(xiàng)目有限，語(yǔ)言有較多錯(cuò)誤，影響理解。第一檔：（05分）只包含個(gè)別要點(diǎn)，未完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)；多數(shù)語(yǔ)句不完整或意思不明，內(nèi)容不連 貫，錯(cuò)誤很多。0分：未能傳達(dá)給讀者任何信息；寫(xiě)的內(nèi)容均與所要求內(nèi)容無(wú)關(guān)或所寫(xiě)內(nèi)容無(wú)法看清。【2015中考模擬】書(shū)面表達(dá)（計(jì)20分）假如你是Linda,

6、上周五你在回家的路上不小心從自行車(chē)上摔了下來(lái)，路過(guò)的Mr.Smith將你送到醫(yī)院,幫你付了醫(yī)藥費(fèi)。請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一封感謝信，向他表示感謝，并邀請(qǐng)他周六晚上到你家吃飯。要求:1.語(yǔ)言通順，行文連貫，想象合理，書(shū)寫(xiě)格式規(guī)范;2.字?jǐn)?shù)80100詞，文章開(kāi)頭供選用Im Lin da, the girl you helped last Friday.Dear Mr.Smith,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。3【參考范文】One possible version:Dear Mr.Smith,Im Lin da, the girl you helped last Friday.Im writi ng to tha nk you f

7、or your help.Last Friday fell off the bike on my way to school because of the bad weather. My leg got badly injured and I couldnt moveat all. Luckily, you saw me and took me to the hospital. It was so kind of you to call my parents. You even offer the cost of themedicine . We are so moved by what yo

8、u did.Once again, I want to express my thanks to you from the bottom of my heart. And I would liketo invite you to my home and have dinner together at 6:00 p.m. this Saturday. My address is 27Green Street. Im lookingforward to your coming.Best wishes,Lin da第二部分【2012年】【請(qǐng)假條】昨天下午Dick在籃球比賽中受傷，醫(yī)生叮囑他臥床休息，

9、所以無(wú)法上學(xué)請(qǐng)你以Dick的身份寫(xiě)一張病假條，向Mr. Green請(qǐng)兩周的假【參考范文】：Dear Mr. Gree n,rm sorry I can t go t o school today. Yesterday after noon I got hurt in the basketball match. Thedoctor told me to stay in bed. Id like to ask for 2 weeks sick leave.(Yours,)Dick4【2012年】*書(shū)面表達(dá)【時(shí)事熱點(diǎn)】我國(guó)運(yùn)動(dòng)員李娜在6月4日的法國(guó)網(wǎng)球公開(kāi)賽取得女單冠軍，書(shū)寫(xiě)了亞洲新奇跡！李娜的成功

10、是因?yàn)樗袀€(gè)堅(jiān)定的信念：相信自己！是的，相信自己，不斷努力，理想就會(huì)實(shí)現(xiàn)！請(qǐng)你以題，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，告訴我們你的想法和做法！詞數(shù): 溫馨提示：1.短文中請(qǐng)勿使用真實(shí)姓名、地點(diǎn)或所在學(xué)校名稱(chēng)。2.這些單詞也許對(duì)你有幫助：goal, future, success, make a plan, come trueBelieve in Myself【參考范文一】：Believes in MyselfEvery one has his own dream, so do 1.1 wan ted to be a writer whe n 1 was very young. I dream of writ

11、ing famous bookswhich a rc popular with people. Some people may laugh at ray dream but I believe ifI keep my goal in my mind and practice reading and writing every day, I will realize my dream inihc future.Maybe we cant get w hat we want at oncc. But believing in myself is the most important, it wil

12、lmake myself con fide nt. Also, Imust take actions and work hard for it from now on. I am sure I willsuccecd at last【參考范文二】Believes in MyselfLi Na go t No.l at 2011 French Open, one of the most important tennis games in the world. We arcall proud of her. From her succcss, 1 know that if I want to ac

13、hieve my dream. 1 must believe inmyself. The path to success is not always smooth, there are so many difficulties ahead. At the same time, I should make theplan and wort: hard from now on. Nothing else will make me lose my heart,because I always believe in mysdf. I am sure my dream will come iruc in

14、 the future.Believe in Myself” 為80左右。5第三部分中考書(shū)面表達(dá)【四川省廣漢市2014中考模擬試題】書(shū)面表達(dá)（滿(mǎn)分20分）俗話(huà)說(shuō)：“予人玫瑰，手留余香”。在我們的日常生活中，我們會(huì)遇到各種困難，因此，我們會(huì)需要他人的幫助；但同時(shí)，我們也要學(xué)會(huì)幫助他人。其實(shí)，幫助他人就是在幫助自己。請(qǐng)你結(jié)合身邊的事例，以“幫助”為話(huà)題，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文。注意：無(wú)需寫(xiě)標(biāo)題，開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；文中要結(jié)合你幫助別人或別人幫助你的一件事例；文中不得透露任何個(gè)人和學(xué)校的真實(shí)信息；詞數(shù)為80左右。As the say ing goes, roses give n, fragra

15、nee in hand. In our daily life, we will meet with alot of trouble.【參考范文】One possible versionSo it is n ecessary for us to help those who are in trouble.I still remember I helped one of my classmates with his English when we were in the firstterm of Junior Eight. Li Hua, one of my classmates, was not

16、 good at En glish while I did well.One day, he asked me to help him. So from the n on, whe never hehad problems, he would ask me,and I was patient to explain them to him. Slowly, his English improved with my help. At the same time, I fo und my En glishimproved too.Actually, help ing others is help i

17、ng ourselves.中考書(shū)面表達(dá)（29）【四川省崇州市2014中考模擬試題】 書(shū)面表達(dá)（共15分）小組活動(dòng)（group work）是我們英語(yǔ)課堂中的一個(gè)重要學(xué)習(xí)方式。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下圖示，寫(xiě)一篇短文, 介紹我們應(yīng)如何在課堂中開(kāi)展小組活動(dòng)，并談?wù)勀阆矚g或不喜歡這種學(xué)習(xí)方式的理由。注意：1.文中應(yīng)包含所有要點(diǎn)；2.不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和姓名；3.開(kāi)頭已給出（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)），你只需接著寫(xiě)；4.詞數(shù)：80左右。6Group work is ofte n orga ni zed in the En glish classroom. Let me show you how to do it.【參考范文】書(shū)

18、面表達(dá)（共15分）One possible version:Group work is often organized in the English classroom. Let me show you how to do it . Firstly, we have differenttasks in group work; Secondly, we discuss the topic the teacher provides; Thirdly,some one writes dow n the key points and forms a report; Fourthly, we must finish the task in time. At last, one of uscomes to the front to make a report.As for me/ In my opinion/ In my view, I likethe way we stu