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1、精選優(yōu)質(zhì)文檔-傾情為你奉上故事續(xù)寫(xiě)積累一、環(huán)境描寫(xiě)的素材環(huán)境描寫(xiě)分為客觀和主觀兩種角度:客觀為從環(huán)境事物本身入手,主觀則從觀察者角度描寫(xiě)。通常在描寫(xiě)時(shí)主客觀交替進(jìn)行,主觀描寫(xiě)比重稍大??陀^環(huán)境描寫(xiě):Part 1 環(huán)境描寫(xiě)的adj要求:有聲,有色,有質(zhì)感,有味道the blue sky(藍(lán)天) the songs of birds(鳥(niǎo)鳴) the thundering clouds(電光閃雷鳴)the fragile flowers (嬌嫩的花);(the dark,raining evening雨夜交加的夜晚)the green grass(青草) the fragrant roses(艷麗的
2、玫瑰); the setting/rising sun(落日/冉冉升起的太陽(yáng))Part 2 環(huán)境描寫(xiě)的verb (vi&vt)要求一)Wind (blow/click/howl/wail/roar)1.A gust of wind blew and parted the drooping branches of the weeping willow like a curtain,一陣風(fēng)吹,吹起了彎柳的低垂枝條,就像卷起的窗簾。2.The wind, soft and cold, clicked through tree branches and stirred the bushes that
3、sprinkled the slope.風(fēng),輕柔卻寒冷,輕點(diǎn)著樹(shù)枝,攪動(dòng)著斜坡下的灌木叢。3.A cool breeze blew through the quiet park.涼爽的微風(fēng)吹拂著寂靜的公園。4.A cold breeze wafted through my hair. (冷風(fēng)吹拂過(guò)我的頭發(fā))The wind was perfect for kite flying, blowing just hard enough to give some lift.(今日正是放風(fēng)箏的好天氣,強(qiáng)勁的風(fēng)力帶動(dòng)了風(fēng)箏的上升。)二)Water (flow/travel/move/meander/ent
4、er)聲音:1.At one point, the faint sound of water tumbling through the valley.在某處,潺潺的的水聲在山谷中奏響。顏色2.The water was deep blue and sunlight glittered on its looking glass-clear surface. 水是深藍(lán)色的,陽(yáng)光在透明的玻璃表面閃閃發(fā)光。3.A little way off was a small brook, rushing and sparkling along between green bank. 離此不遠(yuǎn),有一條小溪,在綠
5、色的河岸間奔騰閃耀。4. It murmured in a soft voice like a little innocent girl whispered to her loving mother. 似乎它在溫柔低語(yǔ),就一位天真少女對(duì)著她那慈愛(ài)的母親細(xì)細(xì)私語(yǔ)。 (action, sound, colour)三)Sky (stand/ appear/turn)1.The sky was a curdled gray burdened with lumps of clouds.天空是濃濃的灰色,伴著擁擠的朵朵云2.Blue skies stood tall and far 藍(lán)藍(lán)的天空高高聳立主觀
6、環(huán)境描寫(xiě):1.Sb found sth adj/doing/done某人發(fā)現(xiàn)某物(狀態(tài)/動(dòng)作/被).2.Sb saw/heard/felt/smelt sth doing/done 某人看到/聽(tīng)到/感到/聞到某物(狀態(tài)/動(dòng)作/被)3.It was so adj that we find/feel 它是如此.以至于4.Sth kept sb spellbound/amazed/ 景物使我如此陶醉/驚訝/sth held sb entirely in their power 景物讓我完全驚呆了5.It looked/seemed/appeared/felt like 景物看起來(lái)像二、場(chǎng)景描寫(xiě)的素材
7、(來(lái)自原著:追風(fēng)箏的人)1. At least two dozen kites already hung in the sky, like paper sharks roaming for prey. Within an hour, the number doubled, and red, blue, and yellow kites glided and spun in the sky. A cold breeze wafted through my hair. The wind was perfect for kite flying, blowing just hard enough to
8、 give some lift, make the sweeps easier. (放風(fēng)箏的場(chǎng)景描寫(xiě),從各個(gè)角度,立體描述)空中已經(jīng)掛著至少二十來(lái)只風(fēng)箏,如同紙制的鯊魚(yú),巡游搜獵食物。不到一個(gè)鐘頭,這個(gè)數(shù)字翻了一番,紅色的、藍(lán)色的、黃色的風(fēng)箏在蒼穹來(lái)回飛舞,熠熠生輝。寒冷的微風(fēng)吹過(guò)我的頭發(fā)。這風(fēng)正適宜放風(fēng)箏,風(fēng)速不大,恰好能讓風(fēng)箏飄浮起來(lái),也便于操控。2. The water was a deep blue and sunlight glittered on its looking glass-clear surface.湖水澄藍(lán),波平如鏡,陽(yáng)光照在湖上熠熠生輝。3. Then I glanc
9、ed up and saw a pair of kites, red with long blue tails, soaring in the sky. They danced high above the trees on the west end of the park, over the windmills, floating side by side like a pair of eyes looking down on San Francisco, the city I now call home. (場(chǎng)景、比喻)我抬起頭,望見(jiàn)兩只紅色的風(fēng)箏,帶著長(zhǎng)長(zhǎng)的藍(lán)色尾巴,在天空中冉冉升起。它
10、們舞動(dòng)著,飛越公園西邊的樹(shù)林,飛越風(fēng)車(chē),并排飄浮著,如同一雙眼睛俯視著舊金山,這個(gè)我現(xiàn)在當(dāng)成家園的城市。4. Blue skies stood tall and far, the sun like a branding iron searing the back of your neck. Creeks where Hassan and I skipped stones all spring turned dry, and rickshaws stirred dust when they sputtered by.(場(chǎng)景、比喻)天空一碧如洗,陽(yáng)光像烙鐵般灼痛后頸。整個(gè)春天我和哈桑在溪流打水漂,
11、到了夏天它們也干涸了。黃包車(chē)嗒嗒走過(guò),揚(yáng)起陣陣灰塵。5. Somewhere, a branch snapped, an owl hooted. The wind, soft and cold, clicked through tree branches and stirred the bushes that sprinkled the slope. And from below, the faint sound of water tumbling through the valley.在某個(gè)地方傳來(lái)樹(shù)枝劈啪作響的聲音,還有貓頭鷹的叫聲。寒風(fēng)微微拂動(dòng)樹(shù)枝,吹過(guò)山坡上的灌木叢。而下面,水流在山谷
12、淌動(dòng),傳來(lái)陣陣微弱的聲音。6. By three oclock, the rain had stopped and the sky was a curdled gray burdened with lumps of clouds. A cool breeze blew through the park.(天氣)到三點(diǎn)時(shí),雨停了,鉛灰色的天空陰云密布,一陣寒風(fēng)吹過(guò)公園。7. The sun was beginning to set, glittering red through the cracks between the ramshackle buildings.(景象)太陽(yáng)開(kāi)始下山,那些搖搖
13、欲墜 的房子的裂縫中,滲出閃閃的紅色斜暉。三、描寫(xiě)時(shí)間,動(dòng)作,心理和情感一)、情感好詞:1.喜樂(lè)Thesmileonherfaceshonelikeadiamond. 她臉上的笑容像鉆石一樣閃閃發(fā)光。Asmileofunderstandingflashedacrosshisface. 他臉上露出了一種理解的微笑。Arippleofexcitementranthroughthem. 一陣激動(dòng)聲穿過(guò)他們。Laughterlingeredaroundtheroom. 笑聲在房間里縈繞。Hiseyestwinkledwithpleasure. 他的眼睛閃爍著快樂(lè)。Awildgaiety(快樂(lè))took
14、holdofher. 一種瘋狂的快樂(lè)控制了她。Unforgettablewerehereyesthatshonelikediamondsandlipsheldinasteadysmile. 令人難忘的是她的眼睛像鉆石一樣閃閃發(fā)光,嘴角保持著穩(wěn)定的微笑。Iwaswildwithjoy. 我欣喜若狂。Iwaspleasedbeyonddescription. 我高興得難以形容。Sheworeashiningsmileonherface. 她臉上帶著燦爛的笑容。Hersmilelitupthewholeroom. 她的笑容照亮了整個(gè)房間。Sheshedtearsofjoy. 她高興得流下了眼淚。He
15、reyesweresparklinglikediamonds. 她的眼睛閃著鉆石般的光芒。Shewasoverflowingwithhappiness. 她洋溢著幸福。Herflushedfacewasshiningwithexcitement. 她激動(dòng)得滿臉通紅。Joywelledupinsideher. 她心中涌起喜悅。Iwasfloatingonair. 我漂浮在空中。Amusementgleamedinhiseyes. 他眼睛流露出愉快的神情。 2.憤怒:Iwasseizedbyanger.我充滿了憤怒。Hewasfumingwithrage. 他氣得大發(fā)雷霆。Hisangerboil
16、edover. 他的憤怒爆發(fā)了。Hecouldhardly/scarcelycontainhisrage. 他幾乎控制不住怒火。Hewasbreathingfireandfury. 他充滿著怒火。Hisvoicetrembledwithanger. 他的聲音因憤怒而顫抖。Hegavemealookofburninganger. 他憤怒地看了我一眼。Heglaredatmewithburningeyes. 他用灼熱的目光怒視著我。Heflaredupattheword. 他一聽(tīng)到這個(gè)字就勃然大怒。Hisfacecloudedwithanger. 他氣得臉色陰沉。 3.悲傷煩惱Hestoodsil
17、ently,tearsrollingdownhischeeks. 他靜靜地站著,眼淚順著面頰流了下來(lái)。IfeellikeIamfloatinginanoceanofsadness. 我漂浮在悲傷的海洋里。Herhandswereshaking.Shewasonthevergeoftears. 她的手在顫抖。她快要哭了。Hearingthenews,sodesperatewashethathedrownedsadnessinwine. 聽(tīng)到這個(gè)消息,他絕望地把悲傷淹沒(méi)在酒里。Sheburstintotearsandranoutoftheroom. 她突然哭了起來(lái),跑出了房間。Shesobbed,
18、hidingherfaceinherhands.她掩面哭泣。Itriedtofightbacktears./Myeyeswerefilledwithtears. 我努力忍住眼淚。/ 我的眼里充滿了淚水。Afrown(皺眉)nowstoodonhisface. 他皺起了眉頭。Theysattherewithglumlooksontheirfaces.他們坐在那里,帶著一臉憂郁。Thenewscastacloudofgloomoverhisface. 這消息使他臉上蒙上了一層陰影。Hebrimmedoverwithsorrowwhen. 他滿是悲傷Theywereimmersedinsorrow. 他們沉浸在悲痛之中。Thesedayshewasin
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