2023年高考英語復習講練測第21講 書面表達（練）（全國通用解析版）

1、2023年高考英語復習講練測第21講書面表達（練）假設你是明啟中學高三學生王磊，最近在學校英語報“Advice Column”中看到一那么啟示，關于征詢同學們“提高在線學習有效性”的建議。請給該報的編輯寫一封郵件，內容須包括：1）你的建議2）你的理由【答案】Dear editor:Im WangLei, a senior 3 student of Mingqi middle school. Recently, I saw a message in the advice columnof the school English newspaper and it asked students for

2、 suggestions on improving the effectiveness of online learning. Tm writing to give my advice.First of all, you should find a quiet room and put your phone outside the room. The reason is that you should concentrate all your attention on the study and make sure you are not disturbed during your study

3、. Whafs more, you should communicate with teachers and students actively in the discussion boards. By doing this, you can not only share your thoughts and experiences but also remember the knowledge well.I hope my suggestions useful. Looking forward to your reply.WangLei【解析】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。要求考生給英語報的編輯寫郵

4、件，對于“提高在線學習有效性”提出建 議，并且給出理由。【高分句型 1 The reason is that you should concentrate all your attention on the study and make sure you are not disturbed during your study.（that 引導表語從句）【高分句型 21 By doing this, you can not only share your thoughts and experiences but also remember the knowledge well.（not only

5、.but also引導的并列句）假定你是李華，你的英國網(wǎng)友James邀請你為他的同學拍攝一條短視頻，介紹你的高中校園生活。請 用英語寫一封回信。內容包括：.表示同意；.計劃拍攝的內容（12點）；.邀請對方提建議。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫;.開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Dear James,Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear James,How is everything going? Its my great privilege to record a short video about my campus life for your classmat

6、es. Tm writing to tell you what will be included in the video.First of all, as a student, taking different classes is my daily routine, so I would like to record a scene focusing on one of my Chinese classes to show my academic life and Chinese culture. In addition, a wide variety of extra-curricula

7、r activities are held every day in my school and therefore showing my after-school activities is also in my plan, from which your classmates can learn the diversity of Chinese high school life.I wish such a video could live up to your expectations. If there is anything that needs improving, please d

8、ont hesitate to tell me. Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【解析】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。假定考生是李華，你的英國網(wǎng)友James邀請你為他的同學拍攝一條短 視頻，介紹你的高中校園生活。請用英語寫一封回信?！靖叻志湫?1 First of all, as a student, taking different classes is my daily routine, so I would like to record a scene focusing on one of my Chinese classes to sho

9、w my academic life and Chinese culture.（使用 了 動名詞短語 作主語和現(xiàn)在分詞短語作定語）【高分句型 2 In addition, a wide variety of extra-curricular activities are held every day in my school and therefore showing my after-school activities is also in my plan, from which your classmates can learn the diversity of Chinese high

10、school life.（使用了動名詞短語做主語和from which引導的非限制性定語從句。） 三、假設你是李華，剛剛得知自己被某大學錄取了。你打算給英國好友Jack發(fā)一封郵件，告訴他這個好消 息。內容包括：.你的大學生活計劃；.征求對方建議。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右，開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Dear Jack,Looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jack,Im very excited to tell you that I have been admitted t

11、o Beijing University, which has been my dream since I was a kid. I cant wait to share my plan for university with you.First, Ell definitely devote myself to studying professional knowledge, which will equip me with knowledge and competence for the future. Moreover, it is a must for me to learn how t

12、o be kind and responsible. Only by doing so can I become an accepted person and fit in well with society. Additionally, getting involved in various positive activities can not only enrich my life but help me improve in every aspect.Do you have any suggestion for me?Looking forward to your reply.Your

13、s sincerely,Li Hua【解析】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。要求考生給英國朋友Jack告知自己被大學錄取的消息，同時想對方征 求讀過大學生活的建議，最后對他給予你的幫助的感謝。【高分句型 11 First, ril definitely devote myself to studying professional knowledge, which will equip me with knowledge and competence for the future.（運用了 which 引導的定語從句）【高分句型 2】Only by doing so can I become an ac

14、cepted person and fit in well with society.（運用 了 only+ 狀語置于句首引起的倒裝句）四、你校傳統(tǒng)中國畫社團正打算向外籍留學生招募新成員，請你以社團的名義寫一那么招聘啟事，內容如下: 1.啟事目的；.加入社團的好處；.如何加入。注意：1,詞數(shù)100詞左右；2.開頭和落款已經(jīng)為你寫好。New Members WantedTraditional Chinese Painting Club【答案 The traditional Chinese painting club is looking for new members.By participat

15、ing in our activities, you will benefit a lot. Not only can you cultivate your patience and imagination, but also you can reach a higher level of artistic thinking. Learning traditional Chinese painting, you will get easier access to our history and culture.Foreign students of all grades are welcome

16、. If you are interested, please fill in the application form and send it to the email address at TraditionalChinesePainting 163 before May 7, 2022. Dont hesitate to join us!Traditional Chinese Painting Club【解析】本篇書面表達是一篇應用文。要求考生以社團的名義寫一那么招聘啟事?！靖呒壘涫?1 Not only can you cultivate your patience and imagi

17、nation, but also you can reach a higher level of artistic thinking.（運用了 Not only. but also引導的兩個并列分句，且Not only位于句首，句子使用半倒裝）【高級句式 2 If you are interested, please fill in the application form and send it to the email address at TraditionalChinesePainting 163 before May 7, 2022.（運用 了 If 引導條件狀語從句）五、你校正在舉

18、行“回家不背書包”運動，請用英文寫一篇建議書，內容包括：.睡眠的重要性；.提高學習效率；.呼吁大家響應。注意：.詞數(shù)80左右；.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Going Home Without Schoolbags【答案】In order to draw our attention to the concern that high school students dont have enough sleep,our school is holding a campaign of “Go home without a schoolbag. The importance of a good

19、 sleep can never be emphasized too much. It can help us stay focused in class and improve the study efficiency, furthermore, serves as a basic foundation for good health. Therefore, it is suggested that we should work out an efficient plan for our school life, striking a balance between work and stu

20、dy. Only by keeping a healthy life-style can we have a strong body to deal with future challenges.【解析】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。你校正在舉行“回家不背書包”運動。要求考生用英語寫一封建議書, 呼吁大家響應。高分句型 1 In order to draw our attention to the concern that high school students dont have enough sleep, our school is holding a campaign of “Go home

21、 without a schoolbag”.（運用 了 that 弓| 導的同位語從句）高分句型 2 Therefore, it is suggested that we should work out an efficient plan for our school life, striking a balance between work and study.（運用了 it做形式主語的句型，that從句為真正的主語）六、假定你是李華，你們學校正在舉辦以環(huán)保為主題的英語作文大賽，請你寫篇作文參賽。內容包括：.地球面臨的問題；.我們應如何保護地球；.呼吁人們采取行動。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫?！敬鸢浮縄n recent years, the environment is worsening with the development of economy. If we dont take action now, the earth will be