高考英語 書面表達(dá)專題指導(dǎo)與練習(xí)講評(píng)（圖畫式作文）練習(xí)講評(píng)一課件.ppt

2012屆高考英語書面表達(dá) 圖畫式作文 練習(xí)講評(píng)一 下圖敘述了你和父親散步時(shí)所發(fā)生的事情 請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面6幅圖 用英語寫一篇題為anaccident的短文 短文必須包括以下內(nèi)容 1 圖中講述了一個(gè)什么故事 2 女孩的言行說明了什么問題 3 你對(duì)此事有什么感想 注意 1 對(duì)于圖中所發(fā)生的事情可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象 增加有關(guān)細(xì)節(jié) 但必須合理 2 詞數(shù) 150左右 標(biāo)題已經(jīng)給出不計(jì)入總詞數(shù) anaccident 第一部分描述漫畫 一 提煉要點(diǎn) 第一幅圖 有一天 我和父親在湖邊散步 一個(gè)女孩騎自行車路過 結(jié)合后面的圖中所反映的內(nèi)容可以推斷女孩騎車的速度很快 第二幅圖 我們要將第二 三兩幅圖連起來看 才容易提煉要點(diǎn) 根據(jù)第三幅圖可以看出是有人掉到湖里了 根據(jù)第一幅圖可以推測是騎自行車的女孩 結(jié)合常識(shí)提煉出下列要點(diǎn) 聽到人可怕的尖叫聲和有什么掉到水里的聲音 轉(zhuǎn)過頭看到女孩在水里掙扎 在喊 救命啊 第三幅圖 第四幅圖 我和父親快步跑過去把女孩拉上岸 第五幅圖 我和父親把女孩掉湖里自行車也弄上了岸 第六幅圖 對(duì)這幅圖我們要展開合理的想象 根據(jù)圖中 我 頭腦中的問號(hào) 可以推斷 我 感到非常困惑 為什么 結(jié)合常識(shí) 得到了別人的幫助 理應(yīng)表示感謝 再根據(jù)圖中 女孩已經(jīng)騎車離去 可以推斷女孩連聲 謝謝 恐怕都沒有說 這樣推斷才能為后面談?wù)劯邢肼裣路P 遣詞造句 注意多重表達(dá) onedaydaddyandiweretakingawalkbythelake agirlrodepastataveryhighspeed weheardafrightenedscream therewasabignoiseofsomethingdroppingintothewater somethingdroppedintothewater makingabignoise weturnedandfoundthegirlstrugglinginthelake thegirlwascryingforhelp weheardthegirlcryingforhelp dadandiranaspossibleasquicklytowardsherandpulledheroutofthewater withouthesitation dadandiranquicklytowardsherandsavedher wealsomanagedtogetherbikewhichfellintothelake wewerealsoabletopullherbikeoutofthewater thegirlrodeawayevenwithoutsaying thanks ihadthoughtthegirlwouldsay thankyou tousbeforesheleft butshesaidnothingandrodeaway ifeltquitepuzzledatherbehavior ifeltquitedisappointedatherimpoliteness 二 描述漫畫 連貫成篇onedaydaddyandiweretakingawalkbythelakewhenagirlrodepastataveryhighspeed thensuddenlyweheardafrightenedscream followedbyabignoiseofsomethingdroppingintothewater weturnedandfoundthegirlstrugglinginthelake cryingforhelp withouthesitation dadandiranquicklytowardsherandpulledheroutofthewater wealsomanagedtogetherbike almostimmediately thegirlrodeawayevenwithoutsaying thanks ifeltquitepuzzledatherimpoliteness 第二部分發(fā)表感想 圍繞女孩的無禮行為自擬感想 對(duì)自己 為什么要幫助別人 幫助別人是明德 不是圖別人的感謝 對(duì)女孩的無禮進(jìn)行評(píng)論許多年輕人不懂禮貌 這對(duì)建設(shè)和諧社會(huì)非常有害 自我勸慰比起幫了別人反成被告的人來說 我們還算幸運(yùn) 畢竟我們沒有被人冤枉 遣詞造句 注意多重表達(dá) helpingothersisthetraditionalvirtue wedon thelpothersfor thanks wedon thelpothersbecausetheythankus manyyoungpeopledon tknowhowtobepolite manypeopledon tknowwhatbeingpolitemeans itdoesmuchharmtotheconstructionofharmonioussociety itisveryharmfultoconstructingharmonioussociety comparedtothepeoplewhoofferedtheirhandbutwerelateraccusedofcausingtheaccidents howluckywewere afterall wewerenotdonewrongtobyothers irememberedstorieswherepeopleofferedtheirhandbutwerelateraccusedofcausingtheaccidents howluckywewere afterall weescapedbeingincludedinsuchstories 連貫成篇asfarasi mconcerned helpingothersisthetraditionalvirtue wedon thelpothersfor thanks butnowadays manyyoungpeopledon tknowhowtobepolite whichdoesmuchharmtotheconstructionofharmonioussociety however comparedtothepeoplewhoofferedtheirhandbutwerelateraccusedofcausingtheaccidents ifelthowluckywewere afterall wewerenotdonewrongtobyothers 參考范文一 onedaydaddyandiweretakingawalkbythelakewhenagirlrodepastataveryhighspeed thensuddenlyweheardafrightenedscream followedbyabignoiseofsomethingdroppingintothewater weturnedandfoundthegirlstrugglinginthelake cryingforhelp withouthesitation dadandiranquicklytowardsherandpulledheroutofthewater wealsomanagedtogetherbike almostmmediately thegirlrodeawayevenwithoutsaying thanks ifeltquitepuzzledatherimpoliteness asfarasiamconcerned helpingothersisthetraditionalvirtue wedon thelpothersfor thanks butnowadays manyyoungpeopledon tknowhowtobepolite whichdoesmuchharmtotheconstructionofharmonioussociety however comparedtothepeoplewhoofferedtheirhandbutwerelateraccusedofcausingtheaccidents ifelthowluckywewere afterall wewerenotdonewrongtobyothers 參考范文二 onedaydaddyandiweretakingawalkbythelakewhenagirlrodepastataveryhighspeed thensuddenlyweheardafrightenedscream followedbyabignoiseofsomethingdroppingintothewater weturnedandfoundthegirlstrugglinginthelake cryingforhelp dadandiranquicklytowardsherandpulledheroutofthewater wealsomanagedtogetherbike almostimmediately thegirlrodeawayevenwithoutsaying thanks ifeltquitedisappointedatherbehavior wedon thelpothersfor thanks butnowadaysmanyyoungpeopledon tknowtobepolite whatapityitisforoursocietyandforourcivilization atthesametime irememberedstorieswherepeopleofferedtheirhandbutwerelateraccusedofcausingtheaccidents howluckywewere afterall weescapedbeingincludedinsuchstories 同步練習(xí) 2012屆 四川省成都石室中學(xué)高三月考 以下四輻圖所反映的是你上周六在你家附近的公園里的一條湖里救起了一名落水兒童的經(jīng)過 請(qǐng)根據(jù)圖畫所反映的內(nèi)容 寫一篇英文周記 敘述事情發(fā)生的全過程并簡要談?wù)勀愕母惺?至少兩點(diǎn) 1 周記的開頭已為寫好 不計(jì)入總詞數(shù) 2 詞數(shù) 150左右 3 參考詞匯 pavilion 公園 花園中的 亭子itwassunnylastsaturday iwenttotheparknearmyhometospendmyweekendasusual 參考范文 itwassunnylastsaturday iwenttotheparknearmyhometospendmyweekendasusual ataboutnoon iwasenjoyingmyreadinginapavilionnearalakewhensuddenlyiheardsomeonecryingforhelp ijumpeduptoseewhatwashappeningandwasshockedbythescene inthedistancealittlekidwasseenstrugglinginthewater whilemanypeoplestandingbythelaketooknomeasuretohelpthekid believeitornot ievenheardsomepersonssaythatitwasnoneoftheirbusinessanditwasfreezingcoldafterall withouthesitation ipushedthroughthecrowd rushingtotheriver