江蘇省蘇州市五校聯(lián)考新高考考前模擬英語(yǔ)試題及答案解析

江蘇省蘇州市五校聯(lián)考新高考考前模擬英語(yǔ)試題考生須知：1．全卷分選擇題和非選擇題兩部分，全部在答題紙上作答。選擇題必須用2B鉛筆填涂；非選擇題的答案必須用黑色字跡的鋼筆或答字筆寫(xiě)在“答題紙”相應(yīng)位置上。2．請(qǐng)用黑色字跡的鋼筆或答字筆在“答題紙”上先填寫(xiě)姓名和準(zhǔn)考證號(hào)。3．保持卡面清潔，不要折疊，不要弄破、弄皺，在草稿紙、試題卷上答題無(wú)效。第一部分（共20小題，每小題1.5分，滿(mǎn)分30分）1．____theplayerIcameacrossinthestadiumspoke,Ihadn’trealizedshewasforeign.A．Until B．Unless C．Since D．Although2．Someonewholacksstayingpowerandperseveranceisunlikelyto______agoodresearcher.A．makeB．turnC．getD．grow3．Reportersaskedhimto______

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positiononwelfarereform.A．clarifyB．divideC．instruct4．—Iamputtingonweightagain!MaybeIshouldstartdoingyoga.—You_______thatthewholemorning!A．a(chǎn)resayingB．havesaidC．havebeensayingD．weresaying5．AnewmovieSacrificecameoutlastyear,GeYouplayedadoctorsavedanorphanatthecostofhisownbaby.A．inwhich;who B．when;who C．onwhich;bywhom D．where;whom6．Somepeoplesuggestchangingthedateforthecollegeentranceexamsinto______SaturdayandSundayofthefirstweekofJune,whichIthinkis______goodadvice.A．/;/ B．the;the C．the;a D．the;/7．Thegovernmenthastakensomemeasurestosolvetheshortageofelectricity,butitwillbesometime_________thesituationimproves.A．since B．whenC．unless D．before8．Theinfluenceofthisbookmightnothavebeenreachingsofar,________forMr.William,whodaredtopublishit.A.ifhaditnotbeen B．isitnotbeing C．haditnotbeen D.itsonlyhavingbeen9．—Isthereahospitalnearby?Ihurtmyankle,andcannotmovenow.—It’sabout3blocksaway.I_____youthere.A．tookB．takeC．willtakeD．havetaken10．Thoughlackingthenecessaryworkingexperience,mycousingotthejob______herconfidenceandflexibility.A．intermsofB．inresponsetoC．byvirtueofD．withrespectto11．Thegirlissuretobecomeagoodactress__________shegetstherighttraining.A．until B．if C．a(chǎn)lthough D．unless12．Thankstothe“sugartax”，foodfactorieshavereducedsugarintheirproducts,________about45millionkilogramsofsugar.A．tosaveB．savedC．savingD．havingsaved13．Thereareno______proposalstoreducetheroadaccidents.Wearestillseekinginspiration.A．contradictoryB．concreteC．confidentialD．controversial14．—Doyoureallyplantodropoutofthefootballteam?—________It’stimeformetoconcentrateonmystudy.A．I’mjustkidding. B．Definitelynot.C．Imeanit D．Whatapity!15．--Whoisdancingtomusicinthenextroom?--________thechildren.A．Itis B．Theyare C．Thatis D．Thereare16．Withthedevelopmentofagriculture,thepeople_____villageItaughtarenowlivingahappylife.A．inwhose B．whose C．inwhich D．which17．—Wouldyoulikemetheradioabit?—No,it’sallright.I’musedwiththeradio.A．toturndown;towork;on B．turningdown;toworking;onC．turningdown;toworking;off D．toturndown;toworking;on18．Mr.Greenwasveryfamouswhenhelivedthere.Thereis______tobesomeoneinthisdistrictwhoremembershim.A．content B．opposedC．bound D．restricted19．-Ifeelcaughtbetweenexperienceandjobsaftergraduation.-It’sreally_________—withoutexperienceyoucan’tgetajobandwithoutajobyoucan’tgetexperience.A．a(chǎn)catch-22B．a(chǎn)HerculeantaskC．a(chǎn)sacredcowD．a(chǎn)MickeyMousecourse20．Ourcountryhaslaunchedacampaigntobansmokinginpublicplaces,whichwithsomeheavysmokers.A．concernsB．wasconcernedC．concernedD．isconcerned第二部分閱讀理解（滿(mǎn)分40分）閱讀下列短文，從每題所給的A、B、C、D四個(gè)選項(xiàng)中，選出最佳選項(xiàng)。21．（6分）Mi

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minutes.1、TheTelefericowasbuiltto.A．offeramazingviewsB．drawtouristsworldwideC．reducetrafficpressureD．promoteitseconomy2、WhatisspecialaboutMt.Everest?A．Itrequiresnoskillstoclimbit.B．It’sthehighestmountainworldwide.C．Ithasseverallocalairlines.D．It'sthebestplacefortakingphotos.3、Whichofthefollowingwouldyouprefertoseethewildlife?A．MiTeleferico.B．EverestFlights.C．RockyMountaineer.D．TableMountain.4、Whatcanweinferaboutthefourplacesmentionedinthepassage?A．Theycostmuchmoney.B．Theyalloffermountainrides.C．Theyhavefancyhotels.D．TheyareallwithinAmericas.22．（8分）Oneofthebestwaystounderstandtheworldaroundusistostopandpickupabook.Herearesomebooksbyblackauthors,whichareshapingourconversationsaboutrace.TheHateUGivebyAngieThomasPublishdate:February28th2017ThenoveltellsthetaleofStarrCarter,a16-year-oldwhoistryingtogoingtoawhitehighschoolwithoutfeelinglikesheisabandoningherfriendsandfamilyinherblackneighborhood.ButwhenStarristhesolewitnesstoapoliceshootingofandunarmedblackteen,shemustdevelopthecouragetofindhervoiceandspeakoutagainstinjustice.ThisWillBeMyUndoingbyMorganJerkinsPublishdate:January302018Inherfirstbook,writerandjournalistMorganJerkinsdivesintowhatitmeanstoablackwomaninmodernsociety.ThroughessaysabouteverythingfromSailorMoontothe“BlackGirlMagic”movement,Jerkinsoutlineshowraceandwomen’srightscross.It’sdeliveredwiththesharpcriticismthathasmadeJerkinsamust-followvoiceintoday’smedialandscape.WeWereEightYearsInPowerbyTa-NehesiCoatesPublishdate:October3rd2017WeWereEightYearsInPowerisacollectionofCoates’sessayswrittenaboutrace,history,andpowerduringtheeightyearsofObama’spresidency.AcriticallookatraceintheU.S.,WewereEightYearsInPowersituatesthecurrentsocial,political,andculturalconversationswe’rehavingasacountrywithinthelargerwebofhistory,makingitamust-read.Don’tCallUsDeadAuthor:DanezSmithPublishdate:September5,2017DanezSmith’spoetrycollectionDon’tCallUsDeadisabreathtakinglookatbeingblack,beingqueerandlivingwithHIV,whentheworldseemsunfriendlytothoseidentities.Itwillleavereadersanger,sadnessandresolveasaresultofSmith’spoems.1、Whoisspeakingfortherightsofblackwomen?A．AngieThomas.B．MorganJerkinsC．Ta-NehisiCoatesD．DanezSmith2、WhichbookshouldbechosenifyouwanttolearnaboutObama?A．TheHateUGiveB．ThisWillBeMyUndoingC．WeWereEightYearsInPowerD．Don’tCallUsDead3、Whatdothesebookshaveincommon?A．Theywereallpublishedinthesame.B．Theyarecollectionsofessaysorpoems.C．Theyalldealwiththeproblemofblackrace.D．TheyareallrelatedtoAmericanmodernculture.23．（8分）USstudentVanessaTahaystandsoutfromtheotherteenagersinherschool.Herskinisdark,heraccentisthick,andifyouaskher,shewilltellyouthesearethethingssheisproudestof.Tahayisapoet,andat18shewasconsideredamongthebestinLosAngeles.Whensheisonthestage,audiencesoftengosilent.Theyalsolaugh,shoutandcry.Butthisdoesn’tcomeeasilyforsomeonewhocomesfromavillagethatsitsatthebaseofahugemountainrangeinCentralAmerica.Whenshefirstappearedatschool,shewasteasedbyothersforbeingshortanddifferent.Sheneverspoke,sotheycalledher“mouse”.“HowdoIdefendmyself?”Tahaythought.“Idon’tknowhow.”“Keepgoing,”hermotherwouldtellher.“Atsomepoint,you’lllearn.”ShespenthoursafterschoolandonweekendswatchingthesameDVDs:EnglishwithoutBarriers.Tahay’selderbrother,Elmer,persuadedhertogototheafter-schoolpoetryclub.Inthelastsixyears,herEnglishteacherLaurieKurnickhasturnedClevelandCharterHighSchool’spoetryprogramintooneofthemostrespectedinthecity.HerteamdrawsfromthelikesofD．H.Laurence,PatMoraandKendrickLamartocreatepoemsabouttheirownlives.Thepoemsfocusonmanythings—somefunny,somepainful.ThefirsttimeTahayreadthegroup’spoems,chillswentupherspine(脊柱).“IwishIcouldwritelikethat,”shethought.“Iwanttosaysomething.”ShewroteherfirstpoemaboutherfirstyearinAmerica.ShecalleditInvisible.Thedayherturncametoreciteinfrontoftheteam,shebrokedowncrying.Shecriedfor15minutes.“Ihadsomuchheldin,”Tahaysaid.“Icouldn’tevenfinishit.”Butshekeptatitdespiteherless-than-perfectgrammar,spellinganddiction(措辭).Still,shewouldn’ttellherfriendsaboutherpoetrybecausesheworriedtheywouldmakefunofher.Butwithtime,herpoemschangedher.“Theygavemepride,”Tahaysaid.“TheytoldmethatI’mworthsomething.”“Shehadthisinnocence,”Kurnicksaid.“Thiswillingnesstobegenuineandshowyouthingsyoudon’teversee.”1、WhatdidTahay’smothersuggestshedowhenshewasteasedbyothers?A．Fightwiththembravely.B．Reportthemtoherteachers.C．Ignorethemandkeepgoing.D．Tryhardtomakefriendswiththem.2、WhatarethethemesofTahayandherteam’spoems?A．Theiradmirationforthegreatpoets.B．Theirappreciationofnaturalbeauty.C．Theirexpectationsofabetterfuture.D．Funnyandpainfulstoriesabouttheirlives.3、HowdidTahayprobablyfeelwhenshefirstreadthegroup’spoems?A．Shewascold.B．Shewasexcited.C．Shewasnervous.D．Shewasfrightened.4、HowdidTahaybenefitfromwritingpoems?A．Shefeltmoreconfidentaboutherself.B．Shewonmanynationalpoetrycompetitions.C．Shebecamethefirststudentpoetinthecity.D．Sheimprovedhergrammarandspellinggreatly.24．（8分）WhenKevinDurantgavehistearfulMVPspeechin2014,theNBAstarmadesuretothankonepersonwhohadbeentherewithhimfromtheverybeginning:hismother.HisheartfeltwordsaboutthesacrificesshemadeforDurantandhisbrotherledtoalifetimemovieaboutherjourneyasasingleparent,TheRealMVP:TheWandaDurantStory.Today,theNBAsuperstar’smomtravelsthecountryasamotivationalspeakerandphilanthropist(慈善家).OnMonday,shespokeatThomsonReuters’inNewYorkaboutherpersonalstrugglestoachievefinancialstabilityandsharedthefinancialadviceshegavehersonwhenheenteredtheleaguewithCNBC．“Iwantedhimtorealizehehasworkedhard,”shesays,“AnditisOKforhimtoenjoyhimselfbecauseofhishardwork.Butitisalsoimperativethathepreparesforhisfuture.”Whilesheadvisedhimtoenjoytherewardsofhislabor,shealsowantedtomakesurethathersonknewtheimportanceoffinancialplanning.Shetoldtheaudiencethatwhenshefoundherselfasingleparenttotwochildrenat21,shecouldn’tfollowthefinancialprinciples.Ratherthanplanningforthefuture,shefocusedonlyonhowhermoneycouldmakeendsmeetforthatmoment.Recently,DuranthasteamedupwithLaurenePowellJobsforanewphilanthropicprogramcalledCollegeTrackwhichisaimedathelpingdisadvantagedkidsattendcollege.Aspartoftheprogram,Duranthascommittedtodonating$10milliontohishometown’spublicschoolsystem.Durant’smomsaysthatinadditiontohisfinancialdecisions,sheisproudofhisphilanthropicworkandhisdesiretohelpthecommunity.“Ithoughtgivingbackwasalwaysveryimportant,andsowetalkedaboutthatandhehadseenthatfromusasafamilyandit’soneofthethingsthatItaughthim,”shesays.1、WhatisTheRealMVP:TheWandaDurantStorymainlyabout?A．Durant’scareerpath.B．Durant’shardchildhood.C．Durant’smother’sdevotiontothefamily.D．Durant’smother’sstrugglingtobeindependent.2、Whatdoestheunderlinedword“imperative”inparagraph3mean?A．Enjoyable. B．Important.C．Unusual. D．Hopeful.3、WhatarethefinancialprinciplesofDurant’smom?A．Enjoyingnowandplanningforthefuture.B．Sharingrewardsandcreatingacharityprogram.C．Spendinglessmoneyandsavingfortheemergencies.D．Donatingmoneytothecharityandhelpingmoreschools.4、WhatmadeDurantpayattentiontothecharityprogram?A．Hiskindheart. B．Hispoorhometown.C．Hismother’steaching. D．Hisdifficultlifeexperiences.25．（10分）KendrickLamarhasn’thadmuchluckwhenitcomestowinningaGrammy.Butthat’sOK：TheUSrapper(說(shuō)唱歌手)hasjustwonaPulitzerPrizeforhismusic.In2014,in2016,andagainthisyear.Lamarwasnominated(提名)foranalbumoftheyearGrammy.Eachtime,hewasbeatenout,firstbyTaylorSwift,nextbyDaftPunk,andmostrecentlybyBrunoMars.ButthePulitzerPrizecommitteewasinspiredenoughbyLamar's2017album,Damn,toawardthe30-year-olditsPulitzerPrizeinmusiconApril16.It'sanamazingalbumthatdocumentsthereallifeofmodemAfrican-AmericansinSouthLosAngeleswithwildlyaccomplishedbeatsandrhythms.Lamar'swinisconsideredtobehistorical.'ThePulitzershavelongdisplayedtheirpreferencetowardhighartratherthanthepopcultureofthemasses.Soit'snotjustthatnorapperhaseverwonaPulitzer:nopopmusicmakerhaseverwononeintheaward's75-yearhistory.ButLamarisnotjustasinger一he'scleveratusinglanguage.Likethebestwriters,hismusicdescribessmallmomentsthatillustrate(闡明)largerpoints.HissongsareAbouthisexperienceasablackmanwhogrewupinCalifornia,struggled,gotintotrouble,andfoundhiswayoutbyworkinghardandmakingsenseofthehistoryandrealityofracialproblemsintheUS.“He’sanartistwhochallengesidea,”saidRyanCoogler,directoroftheblockbuster(大片)hitBlackPanther,forwhichLamarcreatedmusic."Onebigthemeinourfilmof,'WhatdoesitmeantobeAfrican?’Kendrickinhismusicisveryexactlyanddirectlychallengingthatquestion."Goodartistsentertainus,greatartistsmakeusthink,andexceptionalartistshelpusempathize(感同身受).Therearealotofgood,great,evenexceptionalartistsinrock,pop,country,andhip-hop.ButonlyLamarhasaPulitzerPrize.1、WhatisLamar’salbumDamnabout?A．African-Americans’historyandculture.B．HardshipsoftheAfrican-Americanartists.C．ThewaystheUSgovernmentdealwithracialproblems.D．ThelivesofmodernblackpeopleinSouthLosAngeles.2、WhyisLamar'sPulitzerPrizewinsignificant?A．Heisthefirstfilm-makertowintheprize.B．Itisconsideredamilestoneforpopmusic.C．Heisthefirstblackpersontowintheprize.D．HehasmissedGrammyseveraltimesbefore.3、WhatcanwelearnfromRyanCoogler'swords?A．Lamardrewinspirationfromhisownexperience.B．Lamarhasthecouragetotakeonbigchallengesinlife.C．BlackPantheriswellknownbecauseofLamar'smusic.D．Lamar'smusicmatchesthethemeofBlackPantherwell.第三部分語(yǔ)言知識(shí)運(yùn)用（共兩節(jié)）第一節(jié)（每小題1.5分，滿(mǎn)分30分）閱讀下面短文，從短文后各題所給的A、B、C和D四個(gè)選項(xiàng)中，選出可以填入空白處的最佳選項(xiàng)．26．（30分）Therosebusheswerefinallyinfullbloomonthatspnngmoming.The1ofrosesalwaysbringstomindWanda'schildhoodmemories.Thenthefamilyhadno2tobuyextrathings,soevenatiredrosewassomethingto3.Currently,tohaveabackyardfullofdifferentrosesispure4.Andherhusband,Dale,devotedly5theroses.6thatshelovestheveryfirstblooms,hepickedsomeonthisparticularmoming.ButasDalereturned,hecameacrossaneighborwhohad7foraquickvisit.Asthewomanturnedtogo,Dalegenerouslygavethe8toher.Andeventhoughtheirvisitor9shedidn'twanttotakethem,shewas_10assured(確信)thattheflowerswereherstokeep.Seeingherpreciousfirstbloomsgooutthedoor11Wandawithregret,andabitof12.Shenewitwas"bettertogivethantoreceive."13,shewishedshecouldhavekepttherosesforherself.Laterthatday,thecoupleheadedtothepostoffice,whereWandawaitedoutsideinthecar.Then,without14,anolderwomansuddenlyappearedattheopenwindow,andgaveherabunchoffreshroses!"Theseareforyou.They'remyfirstbloomsthisspring."Completely15,Wandathankedthewomanand16foramomenttobreatheintherichfragrance.Whenshelookedback,themysteriousvisitorwasgone.Thatspecial17changedWanda.Itmadeherunderstandthetruemeaningof18andunexpectedgifts.Now,shealways19herfirstbloomstoothers,asa(n)20thatsomeoneisthinkingofthem.1、A．sightB．sceneryC．sceneD．show2、A．energyB．moneyC．courageD．desire3、A．desertB．raiseC．valueD．water4、A．businessB．memoryC．imaginationD．enjoyment5、A．laysB．tendsC．studiesD．serves6、A．AnxiousB．AshamedC．AfraidD．Aware7、A．stoppedbyB．settleddownC．turnedoutD．brokenin8、A．greetingsB．wishesC．rosesD．bushes9、A．recommendedB．complainedC．criedD．insisted10、A．hardlyB．repeatedlyC．secretlyD．temporarily11、A．coveredB．filledC．chargedD．supplied12、A．tensionB．prideC．gladnessD．selfishness13、A．StillB．ThusC．InsteadD．Otherwise14、A．delayB．warningC．effortD．thinking15、A．shockedB．confusedC．a(chǎn)mazedD．relaxed16、A．waitedB．noddedC．shookD．bent17、A．deliveryB．discoveryC．a(chǎn)pologyD．smell18、A．givingB．receivingC．a(chǎn)ffectionD．communication19、A．takesawayB．putsawayC．givesawayD．throwsaway20、A．routineB．dutyC．reminderD．example第二節(jié)（每小題1.5分，滿(mǎn)分15分）閱讀下面材料，在空白處填入1個(gè)適當(dāng)?shù)膯卧~或括號(hào)內(nèi)單詞的正確形式。27．（15分）Directions:Afterreadingthepassagebelow,fillintheblankstomakethepassagecoherentandgrammaticallycorrect.Fortheblankswithagivenword,fillineachblankwiththeproperformofthegivenword;fortheotherblanks,useonewordthatbestfitseachblank.ITWAS1:00a.m.inTokyo.We’dgotlosttryingtofindourAirbnb,andwerenowatanaddressthatlooked90%right.Therewerekeysintheletterbox,1．ourhostsaidthey’dbe.Sowhenthesecuritycodedidn’twork,Ijustgrabbedthemoutthroughthenarrowholewithmyhands.ButwhenIwasturningthekeysinthelock,thedooropened.Aladyandherdaughterlookedoutatus,2．(puzzle).DefinitelynotourAirbnbthen.Amazinglythough,theydidn’tscreamatus,callthepolice,orboth.Forthenext20minutes,theytriedtohelpusfindtherightaddress.Andwhenweturnedupnothing,theyformallyapologizedtous—theforeignerswho3．(try)tobreakintotheirhome.InJapan,therearemanywaystoapologize.Theladyused“gomen-nasai,”4．mostpeopleusethemorecasual“sumimasen.”O(jiān)ftentranslatedasanapologetic“excuseme,”it5．beheardindoorways,taxis,shopsandrestaurantsinJapan.“Only10%of‘sumimasen’isanapology,”6．LaurieInokuma,whoholdsadegreeinJapanesefromCornellUniversity.“Ninetypercentisusedtoshowrespect,politenessandhonesty,”shesaid.“It’saneverydayword.Whensomeonedoessomethingforyou,gettingoutofyourwayinthegrocerystore,orholdingadoor,‘sumimasen’isthecommonresponse.”Justaseasilyasa“thankyou”ora“sorry”,“sumimasen”isregularlyusedtoacknowledgethetroublesomeonehasgonetoforyou.“There’samodestyinit;7．(depend)onthesituation,it’seitherapologeticorgrateful,”Inokumasaid.ErinNiimiLonghurst,aBritish-Japaneseauthor,agrees.“There’sacultureofapologybutalsoacultureofthankfulnessinJapan,”shesaid.Thisyear’sWorldCupisanexampleofthislevelofcourtesy:WhenJapanlostitsfinalmatch,theteammadeheadlineswhentheystayedbehind8．(clean)theentirechangingroom.Theyevenleftathank-younote.Ifapologiesarejustonecog(齒輪)inthelargermovingwheelofJapanesepoliteness,wheredoesthisculturalconceptcomefrom?“ThereisaneedforpolitenessinJapantogetalongwithyourneighborslivingaboveyou—it’sarespectforothers,”Inokumasaid.Japanhassomeof9．(densely)packedcitiesintheworld.10．there’salimitonspace,itsuddenlyseemsnaturaltobecomeasconsiderateaspossible.第四部分寫(xiě)作（共兩節(jié)）第一節(jié)短文改錯(cuò)（滿(mǎn)分10分）28．（10分）假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)(/\)，并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(xiàn)(\)

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不計(jì)分。Amongthefourseasonsinayear,summerismyfavorite,thatmakesmefree,excitedandenergy.Whensummervacationcameeveryyear,wecandoallthatwecan’tdoduringourschooltime,goshoppingwithfriends,swimminginwarmwaterandevenhikingandcampinginthedeepval