四級(jí)翻譯評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)課件

1、四級(jí)翻譯評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)    本題滿分為15分，成績(jī)分為六個(gè)檔次：13-15分、10-12分、7-9分、4-6分、1-3分和0分。  13-15分 譯文準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)了原文的意思。用詞貼切，行文流暢，基本上無(wú)語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，僅有個(gè)別小錯(cuò)。  10-12分 譯文基本上表達(dá)了原文的意思。文字通順、連貫，無(wú)重大語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。  7-9分 譯文勉強(qiáng)表達(dá)了原文的意思。用詞欠準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤相當(dāng)多，其中有些是嚴(yán)重語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。  4-6分 譯文僅表達(dá)了一小部分原文的意思。用詞

2、不準(zhǔn)確，有相當(dāng)多的嚴(yán)重語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。  1-3分 譯文支離破碎。除個(gè)別詞語(yǔ)或句子，絕大部分文字沒(méi)有表達(dá)原文意思。  0分  未作答，或只有幾個(gè)孤立的詞，或譯文與原文毫不相關(guān)。   各分?jǐn)?shù)檔例文: 翻譯原文    許多人喜歡中餐。在中國(guó)，烹飪不僅被視為一種技能，而且也被視為一種藝術(shù)。精心準(zhǔn)備的中餐既可口又好看。烹飪技藝和配料在中國(guó)各地的差別很大。但好的烹飪都有一個(gè)共同點(diǎn)，總是要考慮到顏色、味道、口感和營(yíng)養(yǎng)（nutrition）。由于食物對(duì)健康至關(guān)重要，

3、好的廚師總是努力在谷物、肉類和蔬菜之間取得平衡，所以中餐既美味又健康。   Many people enjoy Chinese food. Cooking is looked upon as an art as well as a skill in China. A carefully prepared Chinese dish 

4、;is not only  delicious to eat but also beautiful to look at. Cooking techniques and  ingredients vary widely across the country. But good cooking does have  something

5、60;in common. it always takes into account color, flavor, taste  and nutrition. As food is vital to health, good cooks always strive to strike a balance between grai

6、ns, meats and vegetables, so Chinese dishes  are both delicious and healthy.     14分參考譯文    Many people enjoy Chinese food. In China, cooking is not o

7、nly viewed  as a skill but also regarded as a form of art. A carefully-prepared Chinese dinner can be both tasty and good looking. While cooking skills and  ing

8、redients differ largely from place to  place in China, fine cooking  always has something in common, that is the  consideration of color,  flavor, taste and nutrition. Si

9、nce food is vital to the health, a  fine cook is always trying to achieve a balance between cereals, meat and vegetables. Therefore, the Chinese food is both de

10、licious and healthy. （紅色字體為有錯(cuò)誤部分）   評(píng)語(yǔ)：  1. 本譯文用詞貼切，行文流暢，注意到了句式的變化以及銜接詞的使用。屬于13-15分分?jǐn)?shù)檔的高分翻譯。   2. 出現(xiàn)了5出語(yǔ)法、用詞的錯(cuò)誤，所以最終確定為14分翻譯。     11分參考譯文    Many people like Chinese food

11、. In china, cooking is regarded not only as a kind of  skill but also as a kind of art. Chinese food, which is prepared carefully, is both  delicious and&#

12、160;good looking. Cooking skills and ingredients differ greatly from place to place in China. However, good cooking    shares one thing in common: color, taste,  feel

13、0;and nutrition are always under consideration. Since food is of vital importance to health, good cooks  are always trying to be balanced with grain, meat, and  vege

14、tables. As a result, Chinese food is delicious and healthy. （紅色字體為有錯(cuò)誤部分）   評(píng)語(yǔ)：    1. 本譯文表達(dá)了絕大部分原文的意思，文字通順連貫，用到了復(fù)雜句式，顯示出了較強(qiáng)的語(yǔ)言功底。屬于10-12分分?jǐn)?shù)檔的翻譯。    2. 有一個(gè)嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)句，且出現(xiàn)了3出明顯的語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，所以最終定為11分翻譯。&

15、#160;    8分參考譯文    Many people love Chinese food. In China, cooking is not only regarded a kind of skill, but also art. Well-prepared Chinese dishes t

16、aste good besides good look. There is a  big different in cooking skills and ingredients between different parts of China. But  one thing which is common in good

17、0;dishes is that they all consider about the color,  the tasting and the nutrition. As food is so important to health, good cookers always  try to make a balanc

18、e between corn, meat and vegetables. As a result, Chinese dishes are delicious and healthy. （劃線句為正確句）   評(píng)語(yǔ)：    1. 譯文基本表達(dá)原文意思，但用詞欠缺，語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤相當(dāng)多，且其中很多屬于重大語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，所以歸為7-9分檔。   

19、0;2. 劃線句為正確句，總共4句，本譯文最終分?jǐn)?shù)為8分。     5分參考譯文    Many people like Chinese food. Cooking is not only a skill but also it is a kind of art. It is delici

20、ous and beautiful that Chinese meals carefully prepared. It is differently in cooking and material beside in Chinese. But, good meals have a common point which color,

21、0;teast and nutrition are though about. Then a good cooker is always trying their best to balance it from meat vegetables and so on. Therefore, Chinese meals are

22、0;delicious and heathy. （劃線句為正確句）   評(píng)語(yǔ)：    1. 譯文僅表達(dá)一部分原文意思。存在用詞不準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤多等問(wèn)題。所以定位為4-6分檔譯文。   2. 本譯文中劃線句為正確句，僅一句，所以最終定為5分譯文。     2分參考譯文    Many people like China 

23、food. In China, not only a technolege make food, and also an artist. Good food is eated fine and seem's fine. How make food and make the food need what

24、 is defferent in defferent place in China. But make good food just only think the food's colour teste, feel make people and nutrition. Food is importand for 

25、;health, so good people that make food is use more power for better on meat and vagitable, so Chinese food is taste good and more health.   評(píng)語(yǔ)：   

26、; 本譯文將原文內(nèi)容基本表達(dá)，但是沒(méi)有一個(gè)正確的句子，全部都存在嚴(yán)重語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。本譯文為2分譯文。     大學(xué)英語(yǔ)四級(jí)作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn) 一、評(píng)分原則1CET檢查考生是否達(dá)到大學(xué)英語(yǔ)教學(xué)大綱規(guī)定的四級(jí)和六級(jí)教學(xué)要求，對(duì)作文的評(píng)判應(yīng)以此要求為準(zhǔn)則。2CET作文題采用總體評(píng)分(Global Scoring)方法。閱卷人員就總的印象給出獎(jiǎng)勵(lì)分(Award Scores)，而不是按語(yǔ)言點(diǎn)的錯(cuò)誤數(shù)目扣分。3從內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言兩個(gè)方面對(duì)作文進(jìn)行綜合評(píng)判。內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言是一個(gè)統(tǒng)一體。作文應(yīng)表達(dá)題目所規(guī)定的內(nèi)容，而內(nèi)容要通過(guò)語(yǔ)言來(lái)表達(dá)。要考慮作文是否切題，

27、是否充分表達(dá)思想，也要考慮是否用英語(yǔ)清楚而合適地表達(dá)思想，也就是要考慮語(yǔ)言上的錯(cuò)誤是否造成理解上的障礙。4避免趨中傾向。該給高分的給高分，包括滿分；該給低分給低分，包括零分。一名閱卷人員在所評(píng)閱的全部作文卷中不應(yīng)只給中間的幾種分?jǐn)?shù)。5. 字?jǐn)?shù)不足以應(yīng)酌情扣分。 二、評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)1本題滿分為15分2閱卷標(biāo)準(zhǔn)共分五等：2分、5分、8分、11分及14分。各有標(biāo)準(zhǔn)樣卷一份。3閱卷人員根據(jù)閱卷標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，對(duì)照樣卷評(píng)分，若認(rèn)為與某一分?jǐn)?shù)(如 8分)相似，即定為 該分?jǐn)?shù)(即8分)；若認(rèn)為稍優(yōu)或稍劣于該分?jǐn)?shù)則可加一分(即9分)或減一分(即7分)。但不得加或減半分。4評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)2分 (33) 條理不清，思路紊亂，

28、語(yǔ)言支離破碎或大部分句子均有錯(cuò)誤，且多數(shù)為嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。5分 (39) 基本切題。表達(dá)思想不清楚，連貫性差。有較多的嚴(yán)重語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。8分 (45) 基本切題。有些地方表達(dá)思想不夠清楚，文字勉強(qiáng)連貫；語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤相當(dāng)多，其中有一些是11分(57) 切題。表達(dá)思想清楚，文字連貫，但有少量語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。14分(67) 切題。表達(dá)思想清楚，文字通順，連貫性較好，基本上無(wú)語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，僅有個(gè)別小錯(cuò)。注：白卷，作文與題目毫不相關(guān)，或只有幾個(gè)孤立的詞而無(wú)法表達(dá)思想，則給0分。除了以上五個(gè)主要標(biāo)準(zhǔn)之外，評(píng)分時(shí)還考慮以下三個(gè)因素：l白卷，作文與題目毫不相關(guān)，或只有幾個(gè)孤立的詞而無(wú)法表達(dá)思想，則給零分。2. 字?jǐn)?shù)不足者酌情扣分(8

29、1-89個(gè)詞扣1分，7l-80個(gè)詞扣2分，61-70個(gè)詞扣3分，51一60個(gè)詞扣4分，不足50個(gè)詞最多只給5分)。所計(jì)字?jǐn)?shù)不包括卷面上已給主題句。3只寫一段者0-4分，只寫兩段者0-9分。 Sample:Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write an eye-witness account of a traffic accident. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chin

30、ese:假設(shè)你在某日某時(shí)某地目擊一起車禍，就此寫一份見(jiàn)證書。見(jiàn)證書須包括以下幾點(diǎn)：1車禍發(fā)生的時(shí)間及地點(diǎn)2你所見(jiàn)到的車禍情況3你對(duì)車禍原因的分析An Eye-Witness Account of a Traffic Accident 14 pointsIt was the morning of April 6th, 2003. At about 7:30, I went to school by bike as usual. It was a rainy day and the road was slippery. On the way, I noticed a boy riding

31、 in front of me, talking loudly with his friends. He didnt wear a raincoat; instead he held an umbrella in one hand, and rode with another hand. Sample-1 As he turned left to Guangming Road, he failed to see a car coming from behind a truck parked on the corner. Suddenly I heard a big noise and saw

32、an umbrella thrown away. The boy was knocked down by the car. I was completely shocked.I think the boys absent-mindedness accounted much for the accident. He was talking all the time and dangerously used an umbrella while riding a bike. The weather also played a role in the tragedy. The third cause

33、was the unproperly parked truck, which was big enough to make the road conditions invisible to the students who were going to make a turn. All these contributed to this accident. Sample-2 (11 points)It was last Friday morning. The accident happened when I was on my way to school. It was so terrible

34、that I would never forget it. I was walking along the road, and there are not so many cars on the road. Then, with a big sound, the accident happened. The red car stoped suddenly on the road so that the driver of following car couldnt respond immiditely. The back of the red car was badly damaged, bu

35、t fortunately there was no people injured in this accident. I think the main reasons are as follows: First of all, the red car shouldnt stop suddenly without any signals. Secondly, the following car should keep a certain distance from the front car so that the driver could have enough time to take m

36、easurs when any badly situation. Finally, these two drivers were careless. If they had paid more attention to driving, this accident wouldnt have happened Sample-3 (8 points)The trafic accident was taken place at the junction of two highways when I was driving my car home at about 4 oclock.The

37、yellow car involed in the accident was running at a high speed along the right-hand when it happened. Hardly it reached the junction when it cracked with a truck running from another direction. There was no time for the drivers to change the directions.I think the accident mostly attributed to such

38、reasons: Firstly and the foremost, it was the carelessness of both of the drivers that mostly made the accidents happen. It was not too careful for them when running a car. Secondly, the weather also should be responsible for it. The fog made the vision of drivers vague. Last but not the least, the

39、constructure of the roads was unreasonable. The trafic lights are needed at any junctions. Sample-4 (5 points)It was 8:00 this morning, I went on my way to school. When I just at the school gate, I saw the terrible traffic accident happend. A student ride his bike in a high speed, and just when

40、 he arrived the school gate, a large truck traveled out of the gate and hit him down. He flied over 3m before his bike hit him on the ground. Surely, the poor boy was hurt very bad. I think there are two reasons for the accident. First, it was just the time we began our first class, the bike rider p

41、erhaps did not want to be late, he ride his bike so fast, even didnt low down his speed at the gate. Secend, the truck is too large, and at that time, there were too many people walk through the gate, so the bike driver have no other way to chose, but to ride in the middle of the road. Sample 5

42、 (2 points)I saw the Traffic Accident in Tianjin Road. The Traffic Accident has been at the morning, May 1. Two children by bike went to school. A car is so fast, the streel. And the car touched two children by bike, and the Traffic Accident has happened. One is touched so far way and the other is p

43、ut down. Mary people come here, and they sent to two children who go to Hospiton. Wait a time, The ploiemen arriverd in the Accident place. My opiontoin: The car driver is so fast by car, and He didnt attendation to the children by bike aside the road. Two children by bike didnt heared the car come.

44、 All of above, I think the car driver must be serier the Traffic AccidentSocial PracticeSocial practice has been more and more popular in universities and colleges. Students are asked to enter society and get some idea of it. Surely social practice has many advantages.Firstly, social practice can of

45、fer students a chance to contact society and meet different kinds of people. In this way students can gain some valuable social experience, which will be useful to their future career. Secondly, students can apply what they have learned in class to practical work, thus knowing themselves more clearl

46、y.Thirdly, social practice can bring them some financial reward and make them more independent of their family. (描述問(wèn)題段)However, some problems may arise if no correct guidance is made. For example, some students get overly interested in social practice and want to work full-time and earn money, thus neglecting their studies.And some students are likely to get in touch with the dark side of society, which will affect their future studies。(說(shuō)明問(wèn)題段)In order to carry out social practice smoothly, students should first know its objective. Th