2016高考英語(yǔ)短文改錯(cuò)集訓(xùn)(十).doc

2016高考英語(yǔ)-短文改錯(cuò)集訓(xùn)（十）【專項(xiàng)突破】短文改錯(cuò)假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同學(xué)寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（）,并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞； 2只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。Passage 1This term our school has offer more than ten optional courses with which students can choose. The courses are given from 4:00 to 5:30 every Thursday afternoon. Students show interest in optional courses. Their favourite are computers, speaking English, arts and so on . They say they have learned a lot about that is not taught in text books and they have got a great deal of practice. Therefore, students are not quite satisfied. They hope that more optional courses will be offered or the homework will be less. They suggest more trips and visits should organized so that they can learn more about whats going on inside school.Passage 2 As we all know it(刪掉), many children have to spend their weekends and holidays attending various training courses though they are unwilling to. Thats why(because) their parents dont want him(them) to fall behind at the starting line. Instead, they hope their children are equipping(equipped) with as many skills as possible. Therefore they wont lose face when comparing their children with others. Beside(Besides), they are sure these extra classes will help their children standing(stand) out and become more competitive in the future. Actually, it was(is) unwise to force children to do that(what) they dont like. Too many training classes will be(a) heavy burden for children. Parents shouldnt push their children too hardly(hard).Passage 3Dear Mr. Johnson,Ive learned from a newspaper that some clerks are wanting in your company. I am eager to being one of them. So I am writing the letter. My name is zhang Hua. I was born in theHebei Province and I am in good health. Ive just graduated in the Computer Department ofWuhan University. I did very good in all subjects and I am especial good at computer studiesand English. I can read science books in English and doing some writing in English as well. Beside, I know a little French. And in my spare time ,I enjoy playing basketball. As is said thatyour company is very famous and Ill very glad if you let me work for it. My telephone numberis am looking forward to hearing from you soon.Passage 4Its reported that many people died of traffic accidents each year. Road safety has aroused the widely attention of the public. Many rules have made to reduce the traffic crashes, especially for the ones involved in the pedestrians. In my opinion, we should make road safety seriously in our daily life. While used the road, we must walk on the pavement and learn to protect us. Besides, car drivers should obey the traffic rules, that is both good for themselves and others. In the word, obeying the traffic rules are what all of us should pay attention to particularly. After all, life is not a small matter.Passage 5Dear Sally,Now Id like to tell you something about my part-time job this summer vacation, of which I worked like a guide in a travel agency. The work was interesting but tired. I think it was helpful to work this holiday. It was the first time that I have earned money on my own. Ive come to understand how hard my parents work to support for the family. I used to keep on ask them for money, but now Ill never waste money and learn to share worry with my parent. Ive learnt how to get along well with others. Whats worse, Ive gained some working and social experience and I have learnt something cant be learnt from textbooks. All these will be good for my future. In the word, I had the wonderful and valuable summer vacation. Yours, Passage 6We interrupt this program to bring you some special news. This afternoon, a truck run into the back of a school bus that it left Central Junior High School at 3 p.m. Badly hurting, ten students and the truck driver were sent to hospital shortly before the accident. Luckily, there was no death. A police came and said that the truck driver and the bus driver werent drunk, nor could poor weather used to explain the accident. We are still going into the reasons.This is the seven traffic accident in the city this month. Please be more carefully in driving. More information about the accident will be reported at the five oclock news report. Now we return you to the music show. Passage 7We participated a voluntary activity organized by our school last Sunday. We gathered at the Culture Square, passing leaflets to passer-by from which they can learn what an earthquake is and how to protect them against the earthquake. The leaflets(傳單) drew an attention of the public to the damage that an earthquake could cause and told them to take action in a right and efficiently way. Some made a public speech, tell people about the best place which they can hide when an earthquake occurs.We have been learned much from the voluntary activity, which offers us an opportunity to contribute to society. We told the public about the situation so we thought everyone should be concerned about each other and took responsibility for promoting a public cause.2016高考英語(yǔ)-短文改錯(cuò)集訓(xùn)（十）答案Passage 1This term our school has offer more than ten optional courses with which offered fromstudents can choose. The courses are given from 4:00 to 5:30 every 加on Thursday afternoon. Students show interest in optional courses. Their favourite are computers, speaking English, arts and so on. They say they have favourites spokenlearned a lot about that is not taught in text books and they have got a great deal of whatpractice. Therefore, students are not quite satisfied. They hope that more Howeveroptional courses will be offered or the homework will be less. They andsuggest more trips and visits should organized so that they can learn 加bemore about whats going on inside school. outsidePassage 2As we all know it(刪掉), many children have to spend their weekends and holidays attending various training courses though they are unwilling to. Thats why(because) their parents dont want him(them) to fall behind at the starting line. Instead, they hope their children are equipping(equipped) with as many skills as possible. Therefore they wont lose face when comparing their children with others. Beside(Besides), they are sure these extra classes will help their children standing(stand) out and become more competitive in the future. Actually, it was(is) unwise to force children to do that(what) they dont like. Too many training classes will be(a) heavy burden for children. 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